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October 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Well, that was different but very interesting & easy to read. Won't mind a 2nd chapter *hint*
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June 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Is this a one-shot or will you continue it? 'cause I'm finding it rather interesting.
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June 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I am intrigued. Do continue.
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June 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I miss Kimimaro.
OroKimi is one of my OTP. There isn't anywhere near the volume of fanfiction out there supporting that pairing as there should be.
Thank you for remembering Kaguya Kimimaro.
OroKimi is one of my OTP. There isn't anywhere near the volume of fanfiction out there supporting that pairing as there should be.
Thank you for remembering Kaguya Kimimaro.
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June 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ah! I'm finally done with my second year of college. Dunno if you noticed, but I kinda pulled an invisible act the past month or so. I had so much reading that was non-yaoi to do! But since I'm done with all that now, I thought I'd treat myself to your story.
Wow! I re-read the parts I had already read and I'm still in awe at how coherent everything is. I still love the personalities that you've developed for them and I'm definitely in the mood for more interaction between Kimimaro and Ukon. I'm especially interested in the reasons why Ukon and Sakon had to become ninja if they didn't want to... Oh yeah, I may have said this before, but that scene where Kimimaro's talking and Ukon is asleep--the whole flower thing--it was fantastic! It's just so flawless and fitting and, of course, poetic. It's a challenging thing, I think, to develop two undeveloped characters on the basis of just a few scenes but I think you do it wonderfully. I mean, I really feel like they're "in character."
Well, I'll talk to you later I have to clean up my room before I leave back to San Bernardino for the summer. I wish we could hang out, but since I won't be in Davis... Anyways, thanks for writing this! I really enjoyed it.
Wow! I re-read the parts I had already read and I'm still in awe at how coherent everything is. I still love the personalities that you've developed for them and I'm definitely in the mood for more interaction between Kimimaro and Ukon. I'm especially interested in the reasons why Ukon and Sakon had to become ninja if they didn't want to... Oh yeah, I may have said this before, but that scene where Kimimaro's talking and Ukon is asleep--the whole flower thing--it was fantastic! It's just so flawless and fitting and, of course, poetic. It's a challenging thing, I think, to develop two undeveloped characters on the basis of just a few scenes but I think you do it wonderfully. I mean, I really feel like they're "in character."
Well, I'll talk to you later I have to clean up my room before I leave back to San Bernardino for the summer. I wish we could hang out, but since I won't be in Davis... Anyways, thanks for writing this! I really enjoyed it.