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by naturallymorbid

person charmpit
schedule July 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love shy!Iruka. Although I have read some good fanfic where Iruka was seme and handling Kakashi like he was a blushing, plaid skirt-wearing schoolgirl. Man! That's the stuff.

They are so sweet in this. Hatake is simply too hot for his own damn good.
schedule June 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wowee! Very hot indeed!
And a little bit edgy. With your description of Iruka's discomfort at this new activity, it made their consummation less of a sure thing even as their contact got more and more intimate. That made it more interesting (not that it wouldn't have been riveting for a yaoi fan anyway!).
I liked Kakashi's confidence and expertise - understated just enough to be believable.
I'm curious to see where they go from here and if there are any problems on the morning after.
Very enjoyable reading!
schedule June 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Love it for sure. It's just so cute!
schedule June 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
very cute, I'm not a big KakaIru fan but you did a really good job. Hope you update soon!
schedule June 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Long chapters. On a KakaIru! Yes!!! I like LIKE long chapters. Please keep giving me long kakairu filled chapters. And long story too please?
Lol.

Good plot.:)Like it.
person charmpit
schedule June 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I like it and I want to read more.