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September 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
oh, that was cute.
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July 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This is a very sweet story. My only critique is that you give too/many/options and its confusing to read.
Other than that, great job! Keep up the good work.
Other than that, great job! Keep up the good work.
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July 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
It's simple and sweet.... simple and yet leaves a warm feeling.
That's how I feel about your story.
That's how I feel about your story.
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July 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i really enjoyed the story i thought it was cute but it was a little hard to read with all the /'s