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for Kingdom Come

person redtatsu

schedule October 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM

Any chance of continuing this? I love the background story that you created. I hope one day you do continue this. You put a lot of thought into this and would be a shame to just leave it as it is.

person xXxyaoifanxXx

schedule September 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM

woot woot! please keep going! it has a very nice beginning! XD
I'm a sucker for love stories with a tragic beginnings!

person tawanawelch

schedule September 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM

Oh my Gods!!!!! This is a magnificent story!!!!! It's got so much passion never have I read a fanfic about love that was this Passionate. I can't wait for your next chapter. Thank you for the Japanese lesson at the end, it's much appreciated.

person gryphonwills

schedule September 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM

Good beginning.

person MoveThemHands

schedule September 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM

Oooh, such a great story!! I like it very much. Very moving and interesting!!

I honestly don't care who the raven is so long as you keep up with the awesome writing I'll love anyone!

person serenagold

schedule September 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM

I love things having to do with myth. Its delightfully poetic to see a reincarnated Sasuke and Naruto meet and reunite over the statue that symbolized their past lives. =^^= Can't wait.

person ItachiloversHarem

schedule September 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM

Really nice opening but I just wanted to ask if you could make this into a SasuNaru or ItaNaru
I love those pairingd but if you decide to pick someone else then that'd be fine too XD!!! SasuNaru and ItaNaru would work well because your story kind of suggests something along the lines of their attitudes but maybe thats just me. Anyway continue on with the great story!!! Can't wait for more!!!

person sharinganwheelz

schedule September 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM

sasunaru please XD but great start! keep it up!

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