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for Begin Anew

by sangohoushi

person nea
schedule May 30, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Thank you for writing this fanfic! I absolutely enjoy reading it. I can totally see Neji being a Dom. Sasuke being a sluty sub took a little more getting used to, but it definitely works now that Naruto's in the picture too. I look forward to seeing how this story evolves :)
schedule January 8, 2010 at 12:00 AM
DAMN!!! i have black hair too! Why won't Neji do that to me too?! That was fucking hot!! MORE!!!!
schedule January 8, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Awww I wish part one was chosen *pouts*
But I love you for this fic. Sai Naru ftw ^_^
schedule December 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!! I'm soooo happy this story is back!!!! I really don't like 3'somes but i like the 2nd story best cuz
it seems more like the story continuation to me than the first. I dont want Neji getting too serious about
being anyone's Dom but Sasuke's. I really loooove that pairing too much to see a continuation other than a one time thing with Naruto. Anyway, this story is AWESOME!!!! So ill love whatever u ultimately decide, sango.X3
I just looove ur stories!!!
person panda addict
schedule December 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I love this story, and I think option two fits better with the story line, but have Naruto join in. ^^ It would make the story that much more hotter!
schedule December 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I like the second part better, although I like some of the milder DOM parts. I'm a little unsure that the whole suck me now part of the second option is a little abrutp. Anyhow keep up the good work. I look forward to seeing what happens next. dearest
schedule December 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
hey ladies, i know you're going to read this, which is why, aside from writing an AN on the latest chapter, i decided to write it in form of review:

there will be Neji/Sasuke/Naruto in both sides of the story, so...sorry Anon-san. BUT! there WILL be D/s and lots of it.

slight diff is that the first part will have hardcore D/s and the second will have D/s and light BDSM. but Neji will be Dom and naruto and slutty!sasuke will be sub... as if you hadnt figured that out

mmmmmm....bondage.... *droolz*

but i digress...
schedule December 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
You are evil giving us two hot things to choose from :/ But I love Naruto so I wan him in the mix as well :D
I hope the first scenario wins ^_^
person Anon
schedule December 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I still think the pairing should be kept NejiSasu with Naruto not getting involved, and seeing the two directions this story could go in confirmed that for me. The second option here was much more in line with the rest of this story and Sasuke wasn't quite as out of character as he was in the first section.
person Kurisama
schedule December 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Kyaa! Oh my, both are quite tempting..but i would say part two please...as long as Naruto joins in!!! so hott XD Love your story!!! and many cookies for Chibi Sango!