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April 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wow!! HOTTT!!!! Neji is so HOTTT!!! He's right cuz Naruto was losing it, FAST!! LOL He probably didnt know what hit him. But now because of Naruto's mouth Pein won't give up his pursuit of Naruto. Dang it!!>.<
They were almost home til Naruto had to get in that last word. LOL he will never learn. I liked how Sasuke was feeling with every word Neji was saying to Pein and controling Naruto. It made my knees weak just thinking of Neji and how he would be in rl. I love it!!!XDD Sasuke almost forgot what he liked about Neji so much didnt he? LOL
They were almost home til Naruto had to get in that last word. LOL he will never learn. I liked how Sasuke was feeling with every word Neji was saying to Pein and controling Naruto. It made my knees weak just thinking of Neji and how he would be in rl. I love it!!!XDD Sasuke almost forgot what he liked about Neji so much didnt he? LOL
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April 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
WOW!! Intense!!! Neji is PISSED!! Well u put it better, he was SEETHING!! and Sasuke is really in love with Neji cuz he is displaying so much emotion about the situatio he's in with Neji. Sasuke's even CRYING???!! WOW, u know he's in love with Neji. I can't to see how Neji handles the last of this convo before he gets to the restaurant. I am so happy u didnt do the 3'some yaaay, thank you Sango.X3 So now its more of Sasuke and Neji and their troubles and how they can resolve them and come back together. Ur story has too much substance to be concentrating on smut only so no worries from me about no smut.X3 I love this story. Please do another about this couple, please.*on knees begging*
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March 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hunting season for professors? HUNTING SEASON FOR ANGRY READERS! *cries* You're so mean!!! You evil, evil, evil author. The cliffy!!! *cries harder*
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March 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
OOh that chapter was really good. They saw Naruto and thought he was doing something dirty (i did too). What does Pein have in store for Naruto? I hope he doesnt want to inflict pain on him. Poor Neji almost had a heartattack when Sasuke called out the number. Man! I really don't want to read that they will have a threesome cuz i want Sasuke to get over Naruto without it and want Neji badly. It may not be realistic for Sasuke to get over Naruto so fast but i just don't want to see a threesome. That's my opinion, of course i'll be happy with anything u ultimately decide.:))
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March 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
ok... 1st i'd like to say that i really like your story... as in truly... there are thousands of fanfictions out there but only a few can grip your attention from the start and actually wait excitedly for an update. and you know - that's what this story does to its readers.
but - i have to agree to some of your other reviewers. you have an intense build up of the relationship between neji and sasuke right from the start, and throwing naruto in the mix at this time just doesn't feel right (maybe later if you ever decide to make this a threesome).
as of now the way i see it, neji is in love with sasuke while sasuke lusts after neji but still cares for naruto. isn't that the reason why neji is jealous of naruto in the 1st place? and i don't think that a little d/s moment between naruto and neji should change how neji feels about the guy who stands between him and sasuke. i really hope you consider establishing the relationship between neji and sasuke first.
thanks for a good story...
but - i have to agree to some of your other reviewers. you have an intense build up of the relationship between neji and sasuke right from the start, and throwing naruto in the mix at this time just doesn't feel right (maybe later if you ever decide to make this a threesome).
as of now the way i see it, neji is in love with sasuke while sasuke lusts after neji but still cares for naruto. isn't that the reason why neji is jealous of naruto in the 1st place? and i don't think that a little d/s moment between naruto and neji should change how neji feels about the guy who stands between him and sasuke. i really hope you consider establishing the relationship between neji and sasuke first.
thanks for a good story...
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March 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Yay for another update!!!
And a huge "YESSS!!!" to D/S twist in the plot!
Now Neji's got his hands full with two sweet lil' ukes all hot and pleading!
I'm sooo gonna break my backbone wiggling my supposed tail for development!!!
Wonder what Pein has up his sleeve 'cos I take it he's not gonna back off. Well...
I know he's an a** but still kinda want to see him dom Naru ))))
Yep, I'm a total sucker for BDSM, that's who I am.
Though for now I think I'll settle for a threesome.
One deliciously burning hot D/S colored Neji/Sasu/Naru threesome. )))) Yammy....
And a huge "YESSS!!!" to D/S twist in the plot!
Now Neji's got his hands full with two sweet lil' ukes all hot and pleading!
I'm sooo gonna break my backbone wiggling my supposed tail for development!!!
Wonder what Pein has up his sleeve 'cos I take it he's not gonna back off. Well...
I know he's an a** but still kinda want to see him dom Naru ))))
Yep, I'm a total sucker for BDSM, that's who I am.
Though for now I think I'll settle for a threesome.
One deliciously burning hot D/S colored Neji/Sasu/Naru threesome. )))) Yammy....
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March 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I can't say that I'm happy with the way this seems to be going...Naruto just seems to barge into the middle of the relationship that was just starting to form between Neji and Sasuke, and the way it was done seems a little out there...especially as up to this point Neji wants little to do with Naruto, specifically in relation to Sasuke. Hell, in this chapter he gets plenty jealous of the relatinship between the two of them, so I can't really see him suddenly deciding he wants to be in a threesome where his own relationship with Sasuke would be undermined.
And I hope this review doesn't sound bitchy or concieted, but I really think this would be left as a Neji/Sasu not a Neji/Sasu/Naru, as it would fit better with what has already been established within the story, and in some ways, Naruto and Sasuke resolving thier feelings outside of sex would be more realistic than how many love triangle fanfictions end up(aka with a threesome where suddenly everyone is magically happy).
In either case, still looking forward to more. ^.^
And I hope this review doesn't sound bitchy or concieted, but I really think this would be left as a Neji/Sasu not a Neji/Sasu/Naru, as it would fit better with what has already been established within the story, and in some ways, Naruto and Sasuke resolving thier feelings outside of sex would be more realistic than how many love triangle fanfictions end up(aka with a threesome where suddenly everyone is magically happy).
In either case, still looking forward to more. ^.^
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March 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
i think you are a master at placing a cliffy. what would neji do??? the suspense oh my gosh. ok ok i love it. one batch of chocolate chip cookies for you!! ^-^
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February 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
now that's interesting! wow. is Pein here a bad guy?
hmmm...i'd love to see some Pein/Naru BDSM ))))))
well, just an option.
and hey!!! i'm still waiting for hot Neji/Sasu!!!!!
Pleeeeease deliver!!!
hmmm...i'd love to see some Pein/Naru BDSM ))))))
well, just an option.
and hey!!! i'm still waiting for hot Neji/Sasu!!!!!
Pleeeeease deliver!!!
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February 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh my gawd! Okay, so Im new to the story, but I love the plot line although its everywhere right now. And I have to agree with Word Slave; who is a Goddess... A Neji/Sasu/Naru threesome would be sooooooo hot i just might bleed to death.