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February 5, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Aww so so cute xxx
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June 4, 2011 at 12:00 AM
i think this has got to be the hottest thing ive ever read i was drooling when i finished it my fiance was just looking at me like a freak and he shook his head he doesnt understand my love for yaoi but as long as he leaves me alone to read it thats ok lol
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October 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I really likeeded this one!!!!!!!!!! I give it ++++++++++ because it was funny and hot hoho yes thank you for posting!!!!!!!!!
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April 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Holy crap that was sexy! I was a bit skecthy at first, looking like a confused puppy... "Kakashi in this one?... The Sensei?!..." *shurgs indifferently* "Meh, I'm a hentai." Seriously, it was hot. Loved that Kakashi waiting or not expecting to join so quickly until told. Imagining Naruto with those faces you described beautifully made my heart jump almost literally. I have thing for sexually-possessive characters, so making Naruto an amateur when it comes to sex then possessing Sasuke so easily was a great trick. I smiled so wide.
My only complaints are your grammer (mostly the "to" when it's suppose to be "too") and there was a few times you repeated words in sentences. Also, you don't describe the sex posistions very well so I have to stop reading to try to fill in the blanks on imagining the posistions. Just some constructive criticism, I don't mean to offend.
But other than that, great job. You were pretty canon for the characters from what my b/f tells me of "Naruto"... DO NOT attack me for not seeing the series. B/f's trying to get season 6 b/c that's the only season he says I really need to see. I do hope you write more one-shot threesomes, though. This one really was very good.
My only complaints are your grammer (mostly the "to" when it's suppose to be "too") and there was a few times you repeated words in sentences. Also, you don't describe the sex posistions very well so I have to stop reading to try to fill in the blanks on imagining the posistions. Just some constructive criticism, I don't mean to offend.
But other than that, great job. You were pretty canon for the characters from what my b/f tells me of "Naruto"... DO NOT attack me for not seeing the series. B/f's trying to get season 6 b/c that's the only season he says I really need to see. I do hope you write more one-shot threesomes, though. This one really was very good.
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April 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
a-ma-zing! that may be the best kaka-naru-sasu story that i've read so far...you should make a sequel. and update if you do. if not...well, i'll live. thanx for the awesome read!
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January 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I've read this at least 5 times. What else can I say. Outstanding smexy characterizations and pron! Thx!
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January 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Awesome! I loved it! This was so HOT. I'm DEFINITELY adding it to my favourites. Please write more soon! I loved it, loved it, loved it! You've got yourself a fan, LOL.
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January 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
that was fucking awesome! lmao
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January 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Great stuff~!
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January 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
First rate pr0ns, man. So many witty lines A.) I’m a hot, experienced, older man B.) I’m kinky C.) I have proof of my sexual expertise<\i> and so hot.