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for Kaka and Ruka ain't it obvious? good ol' Icha Icha Paradise. a little role playing should help out.

Holy Shit!!! I shall leave it at that....

Poor Kaka :o(

Let see...what should Kakashi and Iruka do at the hot spring....

I say have our favorite, sexy Kakashi annoy the HELL out of Iruka, which he has already started...

He wont shut up and the only way to shut him up is....what???? Let's say it all together now!!!

KISS HIM!!!!!! Then from there hormones will definitel kick in...:OP

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here coookiess,cookkiiiesss,COOKKKIEES!!!! Now new chappie!

lol@ the a/n. you have alot of ideas i can see them, just take your time with the story.

Ummm, hey Sal... just wondering....is confuzzlement a word??? I was just wondering...

I love the word!!!!!!

this piece was ok...I would love to see Shika and Neji get together....can they change partners??? I know Sas and naruto can't...

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frist off love the story.....as far as suggestions go maybe sasuke cand use his sharigan on lee to let him experience what gaara went through but twice as bad that way he won't never pull that shit again and he will understand how gaara is really feeling. please update soon thanxz

lmao why should lee be punished? didn't you say that the pill he got had a weird effect? hmm.

gaara/lee- i think they should continue their dinner and bond for a day or two, then come to an agreement for the sake of the mission. but lee already likes gaara as i read in the previous chapter so yeah they are basically set.

naru/sasu- well seeing that naru gave sasu a promise ring, sasu can read into that and see that naru really has strong feelings for him and they can both have the family they never had. ^_^ hey i know this plot is overdone but it is a plot.

kaka/iru- hmm i think you should have kakashi woo iruka, seeing that kakashi reads icha icha all he time he must have some sort of splendid tactic to catch himself a dolphin. and we all know that iruka is no push over so make kakashi work for his goodies.

kiba/shino-?????- not sure if you had them as a pairing. well you can tell they are polar opposites. loud, presumably obscene and quiet and reserved. shino is shy and self conscious and doesn't want kiba to *see* him, whilst kiba is like the wild animal he is. so maybe he finds a way to bring out the animal in shino.

neji/shika. (idreamofthispair) ^_^ lmao. hmmm. this one can have some family issues like hiashi doesn't want neji to mate with shika cuz he thinks shika isn't good enough. but they are actually really have crushes on each other.

hmmm just my thoughts. but this was an awesome idea, i hope you continue. i usually have ideas but my writing sucks.

was sasuke upset that gaara got raped by lee and is trying to take him out? i think i better re-read ch. 3 again. maybe he should punch lee but i think Gaara should clam them down.

thank you for this ^_^