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This is one of my favorite KakaSasu stories, and it certainly inspired me to search for more. There are surprisingly enough not so many. Sigh. Sure do wish this particular story had been continued. It's well written and the exploration of Sasuke's and Kakashi's thoughts, feelings and conflicts thereof are top notch.

Incredible story, so well written. I think it will be stuck somewhere in my brain for a long, long time to come. Sasuke's emotions were so immediate, and I couldn't help myself but hold my breath in suspense as he tried to get away with taking so many liberties with Kakashi. The thing that cements this delicious story inside my head, though, is Kakashi's thoughts and indecision and weight of responsibility and trust versus propriety and another issue of trust. Wow.

I'm loving this! I can't wait to see if you update!

Loved this. Very good portrayal of the KakaSasu relationship and one of the best fics out there of them IMO. You handled it well and the result was very realistic and IC. Sasuke's pride and boldness combined with Kakashi's avoidance and uncertainty were perfectly aligned here. Good job! =D I love the way you write them.



How ironic that the code-words I had to type in for this review were "certainly arousing"

I liked it! No, I loved it! = D. There's sumin incredibly hot about Sasuke molesting his sensei in his sleep o_o, lol xD. I like how you portrayed the two of them, I always find it odd in other fanfics where kakashi suddenly just decides to rape one his students and fuck them senseless, cause I dunno, Kakashi doesn't strike me as that kind of person, he seems like the kind of guy who would be like "this is wrong" and try to fight with himself about it first and maybe after time give in. But you kept everyone pretty much in character! So i must say it was very awesome! I like the little game the two of them were playing what with Sasuke trying to see kakashi's face, lol, I hope Sasuke wins it at sum point xD- I think if he did Kakashi would be proud and shocked at the same time xD. But he's learning great stealth skills from all this! So at least it's paying off in some way = D. You're very good at writing, the way you describe things I could easily picture it in my head as it played out. I usually don't like Sasuke/Kakashi but I must say this was very well done and anything that's well done deserves to be acknowledged. I like where your going with this and the look into Sasuke's thoughts makes it all the more interesting. Don't know how long ago you updated or if you'll ever update again, but if you do I'd love to read it.

Great story, awesome job, keep up the great work = D

Very interesting first chapter. I'd love to see what happens next.


Wow. No sex in the first chapter? I LIKE.At least there's actual development unlike the rest.

Hm, that was bold of Sasuke. I do think of Sasuke as a posessive type of character.

I want to know what's going on in Kakashi's part soon.


You play the story slow but sure. I like that you don't rush them in going at each other at once. The apprehension and emotions that play between them is convincing - especially on Kakashi's part.

It's nice that there's actually plot in this story. And it's real.

Firstly thank youuuuuuuuu for moving this to the Kaka/Sasu section because I know otherwise I'd be ripping my hair out trying to dig for it. This is so...INTERESTING to me--well I'd be able to come up with a better word if my brain wasn't a big ol' pile of useless right now. Sasuke's boldness just increases every chapter and boy am I encouraging it. I do feel slightly bad for Kakashi since he's kind of trapped in the corner between not pushing Sasuke away while still not condoning his actions, which is difficult. Sasuke's descriptive fantasies of groping Kakashi are so perfect and have me practically BEGGING for them to happen. And then...oh lawd...Kakashi got HARD! I knew it would happen and I knew he would be ashamed and feel guilty yet also try to defend himself XD

I love love love this story! ♥

Ah, this is such a cute story -- I definitely like where you're going with it so far. Their ritual, Kakashi's ... well, more or less uncertain acquiescence to Sasuke's desire for him, Sasuke's fascination with Kakashi's scars, his humanity -- I love what you're doing with it. As well as the fact that you're setting this around the Chuunin exams. (I predict that this will progress into the monthlong Chidori and taijutsu training, right? :D)

I've never been able to write shouta though I do like reading it. I'm more of a post-canon/post-timeskip KakaSasu fan/writer but I do enjoy writers who handle the shouta well. I look forward to seeing how you'll have Kakashi deal with Sasuke, and his own reactions -to- Sasuke. ^_^

I love this so far. The tension and pace are working just right for me, and I think you nailed the characters.

Can't wait to read the rest!