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by blackcatback

person ~~~
schedule April 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I think this is really good so far. I like the switch in roles - usually it's Kakashi who is portrayed as being the pervy aggressor, and I like that Sasuke's the one doing the molesting, for once ;) I'm curious to see how much of the Chuunin Exams you write. Keep up the good work.
person Gwenn
schedule April 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Loved it ! I like the fact that Kakashi doesn't konw how to react, it makes him human. I love the way you describe Sasuke's emotions, it really is very intense and it's nice to read.
Good job !
person t-chan
schedule March 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story, especially Sasuke's characterization. I like how sneaky he is, and yet how he's also inexperience and innocent in a way. Very, very good. I hope you continue this, because I'm looking forward to reading it.
schedule March 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Ohhh I'm so happy my buddy pointed me in your direction! You should post this in the Kaka/Sasu section ^^

But anyways onto what you've written. The characterization and pacing is perfect for my tastes (and likely everyone else's) you describe Sasuke's struggle with his feelings perfectly while also keeping him in mind his stubborness for things to happen his way. I'm in love with your Kakashi because he tries so hard to be responsible while also doing his best not to push Sasuke away...even though he knows he should ^_^ Then the details of the minor things really help me visualize the atmosphere. When Sasuke was touching Kakashi's scar and describing the empty space of his eyelashes and the texture...ah! I love it!

Sorry if my review is inconsistent or choppy...I was on the phone writing it haha ♥
person Gwenn
schedule March 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I'm glad you updated, I really love this story ^^
I love how you describe all of Sasuke's actions, what he thinks,... It really is well written.

I look forward to reading more !!
person Anon
schedule March 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I have not read a Kakashi/Sasuke fic in so long, but this is great. I can really get turned on by this and I don't know why. probably because the whole fact of Sasuke being so young and being curios but also that the characters are in perfect state of being with their characterism in the manga and series if you can understand what I mean.
person Kirai
schedule March 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Sorry that was me, saying that I had not a Kakashi Sasuke fic in a while,lol forgot to sign in...lol
person anon
schedule March 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This is getting good! It's not everyday that you see a story where Sasuke is trying to take advantage of his teacher - usually it's the other way around. I like it. Look forwzrd to more.
person skydreia
schedule February 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
hey this is pretty good. wish you would write another chapter thou ._. gimmie <3
person Denilmo
schedule February 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
You know, when I read the warnings, I was prepared because this isn't exactly one of my favorite pairings. Yet I found myself wanting to read more and more and I just had to finish the chapter.
I'm really looking forward to the next one.