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by blackcatback

schedule February 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Absolutely incredible. I wish I could write as well as you do. I love the build-up with Sasuke sneaking into the room and then leaving and finally he stays over. I can't wait to see what Kakashi's next move is going to be or what Sasuke's going to do now that Kakashi has some idea of what he wants.
schedule February 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I already love this! I think you wrote Kakashi well, and I can empathise with both of them. I really hope you continue with this, because I do love this pairing. That, and setting it within the timeline has me in knots as to what's going to happen next, and how it will affect either the plot, or my perception of the plot. I know that probably didn't make any sense, but if you've ever read A Tenuous Grasp by yaoi_is_my_antidrug, which is set during Sasuke's training for the Chuunin exam, you know exactly what I mean.

Hope to see more soon!
person Anon
schedule February 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wow, good start. That had an interesting tone to it. I'm really looking forward to seeing where this goes.
person Gwenn
schedule February 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I really like this, I look forward to reading more !!
person Ainsel
schedule February 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
it's very, very good *___* I love Kakashi/Sasuke, and I love shouta XD young Sasuke is so cute