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March 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
PLEASE UPDATE SOON. I like to see what happen next. I like the story. I wonder what sort of plans sasuke has in store for naruto. I like to see how sasuke being the hokage change the village.
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March 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I've read a few of stories where Sasuke took over Konoha, and became Naruto's 'master'. However, this is very different! You explained how Naruto broke. Very unique, I love it, and am excited for the next chapter!
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March 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wow, Sasuke really broke Naruto down! Its was very intense but I kind of want to see more of Sasuke's perspective and why he wants to break Naruto. Your writing is very evocative and captures the mood perfectly. Can't wait for the bath scene ^_^ Also, the background would be cool too.
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March 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
WOW..it was amazing!!
though you say you are not used to writing like this you did a pretty good job.
I hope you continiue writing and update soon *hugs*
though you say you are not used to writing like this you did a pretty good job.
I hope you continiue writing and update soon *hugs*
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March 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
ooOOoo.. this is dark...
I like it! ^^
Keep up the good work!
I like it! ^^
Keep up the good work!
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March 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I think you should add more! It was intriguing ;-) Its crazy that Sasuke killed everybody though...you did good switching back and forth between the past and the present. Can't wait for the next chapter.