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for Do's and Don'ts

by KeelarChan

schedule May 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
haha interesting so far i find myself wondering what you have planed for the next chapters. keep up the good work
person Anon
schedule April 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Totally worth waiting for, but I still hated having to do it! Anyhoo, not sure on the names of the elders, so I can't help you there, sorry. Either way, it was a great chapter and I really can't wait for the next one!
schedule April 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
OOooOOOooo.. I LOVE a dominant Hokage Naruto. He so doesn't take crap from anyone! (Well, you know, except for maybe Sasuke or Sakura. lol.) hehehe

Keep up the great work!
schedule April 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
*smirks* you tell em naruto! crotchety old bastards
schedule April 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
:D Take that you damn elders! Woot! can't wait for next chapter!
person mikepd87
schedule April 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
That was greatness i luved it..and yes the elders are a pain in the butt....u dont know how many times i wanted to nail them 2 a cross and beat them for what they've done to the Uchiha's and as well as Naruto.
schedule April 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
lol one would think sasu would want to get out of that jumppsuit asap lmao. he actually stayed to spy lol.
person kinai26
schedule March 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
LOL so funny. Sasuke wearing orange - Oh god, the images that float my mind heh heh. I am looking forward to the next chapter.
schedule March 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
lol oh man that's great! sas in naruto's clothes! lol
schedule March 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Me likey! Can't wait for new chapter