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for Do's and Don'ts

by KeelarChan

person Anon
schedule March 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hm... I really enjoyed the first chapter of this story. I'm happy there are two more to read now! In the last line of chapter one...you switched to first person, not bitching, just thought you should know =3
schedule March 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
lol can you really picture sasu in that orange jumpsuit lol.
person Anon
schedule March 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hm... I really like the way this is written so far. I'm enjoying the hell out of the interaction between the boys. Can't wait to see what you've got cooked up for future chapters =3 Please don't keep the world waiting for too long!
schedule March 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
lol sasuke calling sakura a prostutue lmao. he barely knows her anymore. lmao that was funny.
schedule March 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
something weird going on here with sakura and naruto. sasuke better save his friend
schedule March 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wow this was a great beginning chapter!
I can't wait to see the second chapter, update soon please :)
schedule March 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
well this is interesting! i want to see what happens next!