rate_review Reviews

Great story so far! I hope for more soon.

I really like this. I enjoy the abusive banter between Kanky and Tenten, and think you've done a great job with expanding the characters to something realistic and useable.
Please update when you can.

could you do more with naruto and ino? i dont find tenten very interesting but i love this story overall

nice story! love the kankuro/tenten pairing. they're fun to read (with all their fighting/not really flirting)
wonder when there'll be more between them... what will ino say?
hope you'll continue soon

Awesome
Keep It Up
Leaf > Out

You have a very good story building up here. It actually encourages people to *like* Kankuro, I could barely fathom it!

Enjoyable character, strong plot.

A nice read. I'll be checking back later for more.

I am really enjoying the story so far. KankxTenTen is certainly a pairing I have not yet come across, although I can say i love the rare InoxNaruto pairing (Two loud-mouths usually = a lot of fun). Can't wait for the smut keep it up.

Awesome two of my all time favorite pairings in one story!! This is like a dream come true, heheeh...

So far the story line is rather interesting and I enjoy how you protray all the characters especially Kankuro, he's the most fun to write about in my opinion. Your writing is interesting and good, I like the way you time skip though they are sudden its interesting...

I hope you update soon and I cannot wait to see what happens for both Tenten and Ino and how you're going to get the two pairings together within this story...so update soon again!!

Check ya later...

Death18

Awesome, I love NarIno. Not too sure about the KanTen but it sounds interesting.If that don't work out Gaara is always an option. Hope you can update soon.

nice