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April 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
HA! That was good. Made me chuckle. Sasuke is so silly. You got his character perfectly in my mind. Always clingy yet not willing to show it.
You had it going good for a while, and Naruto's sentence "I can't be what you want" or something like that i can't remember the exact words *fail* was perfect it explained everything. You really didn't need to explain Naruto's reasoning behind leaving Sasuke or how he felt on the situation. Sometimes over explaining and justifing makes it dull and feel like it goes on and on.
Otherwise I liked it A LOT! You most certainly should write more death fics : D You are good! Email me if ya ever do!
Sasuke totally is the type to be a druggie...I dont know why I never seen that till this fic. XD Great!
Thanks for writing this!
You had it going good for a while, and Naruto's sentence "I can't be what you want" or something like that i can't remember the exact words *fail* was perfect it explained everything. You really didn't need to explain Naruto's reasoning behind leaving Sasuke or how he felt on the situation. Sometimes over explaining and justifing makes it dull and feel like it goes on and on.
Otherwise I liked it A LOT! You most certainly should write more death fics : D You are good! Email me if ya ever do!
Sasuke totally is the type to be a druggie...I dont know why I never seen that till this fic. XD Great!
Thanks for writing this!
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April 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
wow i think this fic actually screams for a sequel. how would naru and itachi cope, especially naru. hey it may even call for a prequel for us to see what brought naru to his decision. heartache can really make some people give up on life especially if they found their perfect other.
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April 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
~_~ Crap I cried and still am crying,It was beautifully written.^O^ 10/10
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April 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh god, I did need tissues!
It reeked of passion and betrayl.
Very well-done.
I hope to read more of your work.
It reeked of passion and betrayl.
Very well-done.
I hope to read more of your work.