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January 2, 2010 at 12:00 AM
A very good read. I particularly like the way the POV shifts and the characters' personalities are established. Looking forward to the next chapter.
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January 2, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Okay so the last chapter made me feel like openning up a can of Woopass on Sasuke....seriously how can he possibly want to leave the cuteness that is Haku behind?? I just want to jump in the page grab his duck butt looking head and smash it into the nearest hard surface to knock some sense into him...geesh!!! I really hope the bastard realizes that his son needs him to help train him soon...and he needs to come and make his own claim on what belongs to him, if that idiot lets Neji steal Naruto from under him.....well he'll deserve all the hurt that comes his way.
Poor little Haku I hope Naru tells him the truth about Sasuke soon....he deserves to know the truth about his father...great story...great update....hope you update again soon
Poor little Haku I hope Naru tells him the truth about Sasuke soon....he deserves to know the truth about his father...great story...great update....hope you update again soon
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October 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wow...it was an accident that I happened to stumble upon this story, but I'm really, really glad I did! I love your plot and Haku is just a little sweetheart! I can't wait to see what happens now that Sasuke knows that Naruto is getting married...or what will happen between Gaara, Neji and Sasuke when it comes to the Marriage thing.
Great job with this! You're doing great!
Great job with this! You're doing great!
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October 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
haha!! ^^ Go Gaara!! (Although as much as I want to root for Gaara, it will never happen. Gaara belongs to Suna and Naruto to Konoha. We all know Naruto's not going to give up his loyalties nor his kids. Better luck next time Gaara.)
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October 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I have to wonder what Gaara is thinking, I mean the village will never allow Haku to leave as he contains a Konoha bloodline, and also if Naruto lives in Suna he can never be Hokage. He could potentially be screwing his relationship with Naruto also by demanding him as a 'wife'. I mean great twist, but it really is bad for konoha, Naruto, Haku & Gaara to do this...Besides I like the idea of Neji...
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October 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Aww. Sasuke can not resist the lure of Naruto any more.
Keep up the good work!
Keep up the good work!
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October 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
PLEASE PLEASE KEEP IT UP i simply love this story. I can't wait for the rest
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September 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I'm really excited to see where this goes. =]
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September 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh my.
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September 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Love this story! It's an intresting twist. I hope its a Neji/Naruto, I don't see many good ones around, and its turning into a very good story. I like a good Sasuke/Naruto story, but it gets overused a lot. But, if it is I'll still read it because its really good. Crossing fingers for a Neji/Naruto though, lol.