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by jadecorby

person Tamara
schedule August 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
heh it just sounds so wrong to follow ramen into the forest. hehe. Leave it to Itachi to instigate the sharingan. Sasuke why aren't you keeping an ear our on your little kittling?!!
schedule August 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Took him down on his first try with the Shirigan! Nice work, Haku!!


schedule August 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh my! Stranger Danger!!!!!

Run!!
person anima270
schedule August 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I wonder what is in Modern Kunoichi Magazine? And why is Sakura reading it in the first place? (O_o) Okay, never mind............. But I did enjoy Sai in this chapter, but I am curious when Sasuke comes back into the story, if he does. I really hope he does........... Can't wait for the next chapter.
person navajo
schedule August 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Please update soon can't wait to see nejiband naruto together
schedule July 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
OH noes!! Did I just read some epic foreshadowing in this chapter!!! Haku! Clutch that stuffed kitty with your life!!! Things are about to go horribly wrong!!!!! :O

schedule July 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
wow wedding plans in full swing. i hope it doesn't come to pass. i hope sasu does something. and why is itachi such a twisted bastard?
schedule July 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Well Im new to this story and it wowed me. I'd like to see more. And email me if you would like the help of a beta. missbri88 at hotmail
schedule July 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
O_O Oh noes! Haku!!!
schedule July 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
i really love haku he is so sweet. he really pulls the heart strings ^_^. i hope we get neji's pov on the marriage soon.