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by jadecorby

person anima270
schedule July 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
yay u finally updated. But I do wonder how Naruto got pregnant the first time because Kabuto was there and I was curious if Sasuke had any involvement besides offering his sperm. Did he have sex with Naruto or did Kabuto do something? U know Kabuto and his crazy ass ideas. And let's not 4get Orochimaru. Seems like I'm rambling now so I'll stop.
person mls1971
schedule July 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
can't wait to read the next chapter!!!!!!
schedule July 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Ah!! lol.

Sasuke sure isn't going to like that.
Nor, for that matter, will Naruto tolerate ANY of his children to be branded with the branch seal. The council is just asking for a world of trouble.
schedule July 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
You know that is an intresting twist. If you don't mind a siggestion, I would have Naruto make some demands besides protecting Haku... Say, like no child of his with Hyuuga blood gets he cage bird seal, that the Hyuugas have to come up with a new seal that protects the bloodline from theft or hyuuga going missing nin that isn't doubling as a slave collar. One that he would even allow Haku to have, seeing as he has a dojutsu also, so it would be sfe for 'main' branch children to have. I mean that would be worth it, cause just protecting his sons sanity to become a baby factory for a clan that enslaves all but a few members is a real high price... But I happen to love (and don't find enough) Neji/Naru...so thank you!!!
schedule July 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
lol the lengths a mommy will go for his baby lol. he'll marry akamaru lmao. akamaru is quite a handsome dog lmao. ohhhh neji *drool* i wonder if sasuke is on his way back? those elders sure piss me off but damn they have good taste ^_^
person Eremi22
schedule July 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
ooooh, i like the foreshadowing. Orochimaru really can't continue on. You know what would have been really cute? A female mini-Sasuke with Naruto's personality or vice-versa. Oh well, maybe it will happen in the future. At any rate, I really like this story, and I can't wait for you to update again!
schedule July 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Sasuke IS a bastard. However that doesn't mean he doesn't have feelings and horribly stunted emotional skills. lol


Keep up the good work!
schedule July 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Aww, this was so cute but I felt so embarrassed for Naruto. I mean, coming home, having your best friend/rival's baby and everyone knowing about it. It was a big lol moment. It was cute. I can't wait for the next channel. Keep writing. :-)
schedule July 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wow.. I love this. and i Seriously mean that, i LOVE this. It's a new idea with a wide range and great writing. I love it!!
schedule July 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
i like it and i want to know if this is Sasuke/Naruto story (just to be sure) whats going to happen.