schedule
February 13, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Oh my this seems really interesting and I can't wait to see more. It was a bit short for my tests but you definetly have me eager for more. The ending was especially good with Kakashi going all mysterious like with the whole alpha thing. I knew Naruto would ride to the challange and immediately I had to look up Naruto's dog. It really does look like a fox O.O;
How cute although I still prefer Samoyeds or their toy version the Japanese Spitz >< Meh but cute overall and hope to hear from this chapter soon... bye ^^; And if you have an update list then add me please.
How cute although I still prefer Samoyeds or their toy version the Japanese Spitz >< Meh but cute overall and hope to hear from this chapter soon... bye ^^; And if you have an update list then add me please.
schedule
September 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
haha naru-chan made me laugh i love how he can b submissive n dominate @ the same time
schedule
July 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Yaaay!! You're finally writing some KakaNaru! 'bout time, tomotan!! So, let's get right into the review, shall we?
Looking to the ground, Naruto dropped to his knees, his hand palm down reached towards his prize. Ahahaha, setup for thoughts of naughtiness and then... *punchline*
owner and pet look-a-like contest for the win? hehehe, this line is ftw! (p.s. I love that you're using Pakkun in this fic, too. he's also ftw)
so much can be said with a simple bob of the head. XD inne da ne
Many reached into their pockets or purses to turn off their phones as Naruto instructed, but the blond couldn’t help but notice that Pakkun’s dad didn’t move. I'm extremely curious if there's any meaning to this instance, or if it really is as simple as Naruto's reasoning in the next sentence...
Aahhhh, Naruto's doggy sounds so frickin' cute, dude. It's awesome you managed to find an actual dog that looks fox-like rather than having him have.. an actual fox.
Hmm.. so Naru's had his sanctuary for six years... *wonders how old he is, precisely. and Kakashi for that matter*
“They sleep with me in my bed…“ The blond couldn’t believe he was having this conversation! I... I love this line. I'm not really sure I can explain why, but it makes me squeeee, lolol!!
The crinkle at the edge of the man’s eye was endearing, but also annoying with the game Kakashi had created. this is, like, a perfect way to describe the dynamics between Kaka/Naru. &hearts
“I never submit,“ he growled.
“Good,“ Kakashi practically purred. At that, the man winked (or closed his eye, hard to tell), then turned to leave. “See you next week, Naruto.“
eeeeeheheheheheheheeee!!! *squealing again* *wants their next week already, tomo!*
So, yes, you must write more. Please make it soon. TT__TT
&hearts
~ your tomotan ^_~
Looking to the ground, Naruto dropped to his knees, his hand palm down reached towards his prize. Ahahaha, setup for thoughts of naughtiness and then... *punchline*
owner and pet look-a-like contest for the win? hehehe, this line is ftw! (p.s. I love that you're using Pakkun in this fic, too. he's also ftw)
so much can be said with a simple bob of the head. XD inne da ne
Many reached into their pockets or purses to turn off their phones as Naruto instructed, but the blond couldn’t help but notice that Pakkun’s dad didn’t move. I'm extremely curious if there's any meaning to this instance, or if it really is as simple as Naruto's reasoning in the next sentence...
Aahhhh, Naruto's doggy sounds so frickin' cute, dude. It's awesome you managed to find an actual dog that looks fox-like rather than having him have.. an actual fox.
Hmm.. so Naru's had his sanctuary for six years... *wonders how old he is, precisely. and Kakashi for that matter*
“They sleep with me in my bed…“ The blond couldn’t believe he was having this conversation! I... I love this line. I'm not really sure I can explain why, but it makes me squeeee, lolol!!
The crinkle at the edge of the man’s eye was endearing, but also annoying with the game Kakashi had created. this is, like, a perfect way to describe the dynamics between Kaka/Naru. &hearts
“I never submit,“ he growled.
“Good,“ Kakashi practically purred. At that, the man winked (or closed his eye, hard to tell), then turned to leave. “See you next week, Naruto.“
eeeeeheheheheheheheeee!!! *squealing again* *wants their next week already, tomo!*
So, yes, you must write more. Please make it soon. TT__TT
&hearts
~ your tomotan ^_~
schedule
July 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Excited that you started this story, I can't wait to see what happens next.
Like I stated before you write so well and your idea is very cute, love that this one is also related to animals.
cant wait for more
Like I stated before you write so well and your idea is very cute, love that this one is also related to animals.
cant wait for more
schedule
July 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Yaaaaay!!! I loved it!!! I can't wait to read mooooooooooore!!!
schedule
July 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Awesome, Nice plot it's not something I've read before. Can't wait to see whats gonna happen.
schedule
July 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
OMFG fantastic premise! I can't wait to read more!
schedule
July 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Sweet story. Wow...Kakashi I can tell is going to be awesome in this story. I look forward to more.