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August 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Aw, keep writing man!
I've never really felt for Sai before, he is an ass..
But this.. this makes my heart go out for him.
Poor guy.
Well-written, thank you so much for this fic :)
But I just don't think Naruto would say "Sasuke-kun". He says Sasuke or Teme or something.
The -kun is wrong..
I've never really felt for Sai before, he is an ass..
But this.. this makes my heart go out for him.
Poor guy.
Well-written, thank you so much for this fic :)
But I just don't think Naruto would say "Sasuke-kun". He says Sasuke or Teme or something.
The -kun is wrong..
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August 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I liked it but poor Sai it was how I would imagine it being for him. Nothing easy for the hero of the story.
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July 31, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Cute! That was perfect. I really like how you are slowly warming Naruto to Sai...and I really like how protective of Naruto Sai is...Thank you for a good read.
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July 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Happy dance for you and your first fanifiction on adult. I loved the prologue and the only thing I would ask for is a longer chapter next time that one was such a teaser. Thank you for a great read
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July 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Thank you for the longer chapter. I know selfish reader but damn this is a good story and I really am getting in to it. Thank you again for a fine read.
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July 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I like it. I think you did a good job showing Sai's obliviousness (if that's a word, it's REALLY late, I'm tired) I hope you continue.
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July 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
omg what a cliffie *falls off my chair* lol.
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July 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
That is okay about the chapters being short since you are quick to update (for which I thank you). I really think that instead of Sai having the obvious dream of Naruto and him 'having a good time' have it where Sai is having a dream about Naruto trying to tie his shoes or something. It then takes the story to a different plane. Just an idea though. :) I love this story so anyway you write it I am sure it will be great.
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July 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
SQUEEEEEE!!!! Such short chapters :( but such quick updates!!!!! =D
I love it!!!! but grrrrr for the cliffie!!! even the slightest bit of anticipation is going to kill me!!!!
I love it!!!! but grrrrr for the cliffie!!! even the slightest bit of anticipation is going to kill me!!!!
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July 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Well I love this pairing, so I'm sure its going to be a great story!!!