rate_review Reviews

I really enjoyed this story! An excellent take on the Kyuubi heat angle. THAAAAAAAAAAAAAaaaaaaaaaaaaak god you didn't give the twins or triplets or any of the other cliches you see on this site constantly. Shika and Naruto make a good couple and I loved the whole Nara family as well. Keep up the great work!

I like your story very much and I would like to read more but I think that you left a lot of stuff out between chap 1 and chap 2 like why did Kurenai send Naruto with Shika if she new that Naruto was going into heat? How did Naruto and Shika wined up getting in bed together? I would very much like to know the answers but other then that I think it’s very good so keep going.