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October 27, 2010 at 12:00 AM
any...uh...inspiration? for this or belly dancing (which is hilarious btw)
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August 6, 2010 at 12:00 AM
deep sigh...eyes downcast...(looking sad)...
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April 25, 2010 at 12:00 AM
*tap tap tap* (toe tapping...looking at watch...)and then...and then... WHAT HAPPENS NEXT!?!
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April 10, 2010 at 12:00 AM
*smile*...*grin*...*hops up & down & gives a few little claps* (there are people awake in the house now he he he). Thanks so much for more!!! I love it when Naruto sulks. It's so cute & there is no hiding from Kyuubi. And Sasuke remembering the night before...lol. Ok, now I HAVE to stop grinning & get moving for the day.
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April 6, 2010 at 12:00 AM
yea!!!! *hugs* thank u for update and answering a little of my question ^_____^ hope u can write more soon
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April 6, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Such a cute, cute story. Please, please update more often. Or it will be kunai and shuriken.
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April 5, 2010 at 12:00 AM
That chapter 5...I was like "no wait...where's naruto" which quickly turned to "no no naruto stay away!" Anyway, that chapter was incredibly hot. Can't wait to see where it goes next!
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March 19, 2010 at 12:00 AM
moooreeeeee! I was on the edge of my seat! So many questions! How will the relationship with Sasuke and Naruto progress? Will the girl play a significant role in Sasuke life more than Naruto??????? Can't wait for your next chapters and keep up the good work?
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November 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wow~! Color me impressed!
I really like how you kept every body believable, and your OC's weren't obnoxious at all! (I'm jealous of this, as a matter of fact)
Although, in the first three chapters, I think they could have stood for some lengthening. They felt abbreviated and cut off.
And chapter four was so~ Steamy! I loved how Ginzou talked dirty. >w< (Its a guilty pleasure, sue me!)
I So~~~~ Want to know what happens!
Hurry up and update!!
-flails-
I really like how you kept every body believable, and your OC's weren't obnoxious at all! (I'm jealous of this, as a matter of fact)
Although, in the first three chapters, I think they could have stood for some lengthening. They felt abbreviated and cut off.
And chapter four was so~ Steamy! I loved how Ginzou talked dirty. >w< (Its a guilty pleasure, sue me!)
I So~~~~ Want to know what happens!
Hurry up and update!!
-flails-
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November 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
For a first timer with smut, that was actually really good.
I'm really impressed.
Also, I love the fact that once again, it wasn't predictable.
So trouble ensues.
I'm curious to see what will happen next.
Keep up the good work.
Until next time ~
I'm really impressed.
Also, I love the fact that once again, it wasn't predictable.
So trouble ensues.
I'm curious to see what will happen next.
Keep up the good work.
Until next time ~