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November 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
The smut was good, if that was your first time. :P Ahaha... Sasuke's a virgin (I think? Idk if you mentioned or not..) and your smut-writing cherry hasn't been popped yet.. oh, how appropriate. xD
Anyway. I've been reading this story since you started and can't remember if I've reviewed or not...
Uh. So yeah. OH TEH NOES NARUTO HAS STUMBLED UPON DRUNK, DISHEVELED SASUKE...
tbh, if I was in Naruto's position, I'd kick that Ginzou guy out and then finish the job. ;D
But that's just my dirty mind going. ._.;
Waiting for more.~
♥
C
Anyway. I've been reading this story since you started and can't remember if I've reviewed or not...
Uh. So yeah. OH TEH NOES NARUTO HAS STUMBLED UPON DRUNK, DISHEVELED SASUKE...
tbh, if I was in Naruto's position, I'd kick that Ginzou guy out and then finish the job. ;D
But that's just my dirty mind going. ._.;
Waiting for more.~
♥
C
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November 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Your drunk Sasuke is so cute!
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November 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I know Sasu shouldn't be doing that with a stranger, but why is Naru going into the female restroom o.O
Sasu-chan is really cute. And why did Natsumi ditch him?
Sasu-chan is really cute. And why did Natsumi ditch him?
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November 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I'm not really one of those people who freak out when a pairing happens that is not "their" pairing. Personally, I thinking that concept is retarded.
However, I was definitely all like "WTF! Nooo!!" when Gin started grinding all over Sasuke. "Sasuke, what are you doing? Where is Naruto! You're going to fuck everything up that you didn't even realize you wanted!!!" lol
Although drunk-off-his-ass Sasuke is definitely hilarious. Go ahead Naruto, claim your man! hehehe ^^
Keep up the good work!
However, I was definitely all like "WTF! Nooo!!" when Gin started grinding all over Sasuke. "Sasuke, what are you doing? Where is Naruto! You're going to fuck everything up that you didn't even realize you wanted!!!" lol
Although drunk-off-his-ass Sasuke is definitely hilarious. Go ahead Naruto, claim your man! hehehe ^^
Keep up the good work!
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November 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
The part with the starfruit was *adorable*!! I wish I had a Sasuke to buy one for me.... ^^
Love the story and can't wait to read the next chapter!! I'm looking forward to that hot man action, lol. X3
<3 Neko
Love the story and can't wait to read the next chapter!! I'm looking forward to that hot man action, lol. X3
<3 Neko
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November 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
lmao! oh man these last two chapters where frickin hilarious!! " He was Uchiha Motherfucking Sasuke" i just about died laughing and the 50 year old fan girl!! priceless!
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November 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Nice Sasuke is indeed sexy! Me want starfruit too! :)>
Awesome work! I was happy that Naruto finally popped up! Can't wait to see what you have planned with him!
Awesome work! I was happy that Naruto finally popped up! Can't wait to see what you have planned with him!
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November 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This chapter was...cute.
I generally hate cute, but this just made me smile.
Good job.
All that is needed is some action (if you catch my drift.)
Till then~
I generally hate cute, but this just made me smile.
Good job.
All that is needed is some action (if you catch my drift.)
Till then~
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November 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
WOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO...........I Luff It, Sexayy........Wun Ov Thaa Pengest Storiesz Ornn Thiss WebSie....XD....XxX
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November 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I have to say I like it so far. Sasuke is... well hes Sasuke, so I guess that means you've done a good job. I don't think the first two chapters were depressing, though I'd be interested in learning what caused Sasuke's fit before he went to go see the hokage. I'm also eager to see some Naruto and Sakura after the first chapter. I wish you good luck in writing, and look forward to the next chapter.