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November 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Very nice! Loved the last 2 chapters!!!
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November 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I would really like to see Sasuke go on a killing spree some of those people in the village need to go. :) But anyway I like this story and look forward to more. Just wish Sasuke wouldn't hold his tongue.
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November 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
omg omg. hahaha fuck probation. you capture sasuke so well, i cant wait to se naruto and sakura (bashing). please pease keep up the work!!! *we all have a little 50 yr old fangirl inside of us!!* much love
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November 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
So far, I can't really expect anything in this story, which is a good sign.
Most are predictable.
For a first-timer, this is actually pretty good.
I can't wait for the next chapter.
Most are predictable.
For a first-timer, this is actually pretty good.
I can't wait for the next chapter.
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November 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I can't imagine how hard it must be for Sasuke to survive on a day to day business trapped in a house in isolation, accompanied only by the haunted ghosts of your loved ones. Then, upon leaving the compound, but surrounded by hateful glares and harsh whispers.
I guess he'll finally understand what it was like to be Naruto growing up.
Keep up the great work!
I guess he'll finally understand what it was like to be Naruto growing up.
Keep up the great work!
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November 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I'd be happier with longer chapters tbh, but you're moving at a well enough pace that it doesn't bother me too much. I like how you're portraying Sasuke's return with a dark side instead of people welcoming him with open arms (one of my personal takes) and giving him a second chance. It's quite believable and I'm looking forward to seeing where this story goes.
Cheers.~
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Cheers.~
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November 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
(T^T) Sasuke, yes held your head up high (BUT not too stuborn or irrational ne A bit of Angst is ok; Don't be big emo)
Love it, very interesting start. That with his family was so emotional. It's great to see Sasuke come to realise the meaning of his new life whilst trying to maintain his dignity.
Wonder what is Naruto doing? (Everyone was so mean to Sasuke (~sob) Is it so wrong to love his family?
Pls back sooon
Love it, very interesting start. That with his family was so emotional. It's great to see Sasuke come to realise the meaning of his new life whilst trying to maintain his dignity.
Wonder what is Naruto doing? (Everyone was so mean to Sasuke (~sob) Is it so wrong to love his family?
Pls back sooon
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November 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I liked the story alot and can't wait for more chapters to see where this is going.
ja ne till next time and keep up the good work
ja ne till next time and keep up the good work
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November 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I am really enjoying this so far and am looking forward to what happens next. I admire Sasuke for dealing with the feelings of those around him.....its to be expected from all that happened .....but he is handeling it really well and in a mature way.....so I really admire him for that. (Ok was sad to hear Naruto is going out with Sakura....but hope that doesn't last.....:) heheh) I just love the Naruto and Sasuke pairing because they just have such great chemistry together!!!
I love the details of the story and characters!!! :)
I love the details of the story and characters!!! :)
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November 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Really Liking this story so far! Keep it up!! ^_^