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for Can you see my Heart?

by loveusender

person Naomi
schedule January 3, 2015 at 12:00 AM
This is a really good story and I really can't wait to see what happens next! Please update soon!!!!
person yumenohime-sama
schedule June 29, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Hi! I like this story of yours and i can't wait to read the continuation! So please, im begging you, update the story soon! TT^TT
person Kyla
schedule August 31, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I just finished reading the latest chapter that came out and I can't wait for the next chapter.

This story has definitely pulled at my heart strings throughout it and I find myself desperately wanting to know what will happen next. Please, please, PLEASE! Write the next chapter when you have a chance too!
schedule June 1, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Chap. 3
I feel so bad for Sasuke....Naruto was soooooo out of line and I am really surprised Sasuke didn't just take his head off for allowing it to happen. Naruto totally violated the trust they had in their relationship....its like he didn't even care....and the comment...he's not as good at it as you....he should be smacked upside the head again for that one......multiple times in fact....so wrong....poor Sasuke!!
schedule June 1, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Chap. 4

So Naruto is keeping something else from Sasuke? Usually its always a good idea to listen to that little voice that tells you something else is wrong.....Poor Sasuke!! Worrie worrie
schedule June 1, 2011 at 12:00 AM
We like lemons
Yes we do
We like lemons
How about you?

LOL :) ok I just woke up and am not awake lol
I just love this story!! Its AWSOME!!! I read each chap. up to ten last night and was up REALLLLLY Late....my eyes still feel like sandpaper...but for some reason evertime I tried to post my computer screen went completely blank ......stupid computer is a bucket of bolts and makes really strange sounds...ugh...so hopefully this will post....got my fingers crossed here.

I love how the characters are developing and the changes in the story line. (I am totally looking forward to the time Sakura is out of the picture....she will be right???? Begging here.....I just love Naruto and Sasuke together!!) You know ......wicked thought here Sasuke could go work out and get realllyyyyyy sweatyyyyy and then go near Naruto....would that bring to mind some very naughty thoughts for Naruto???? lol ok ya mind is totally in the gutter. LOVE THIS FICTION LOVE IT!!
person evilchild666
schedule June 1, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Do you know there's a korean drama with your same plot (not gay though)? It pretty much has the same title as well, except for 'see' they used 'hear'. I had almost thought you lifted the plot and fixed it to your liking until I saw you published this in january 2010, well before this drama even came out. You may want to check it out 'cause even though I only read the first chapter, from the summary and what I read of the reviews, that drama is pretty much this fic with a few changes
person G
schedule June 1, 2011 at 12:00 AM
@evilchild666:

LOL! The plot of the fic was reminding me of a Korean drama, so it's funny to hear there's actually one out there that uses a similar storyline.

@loveusender:

I'm not really into soap operas, so like some other people, the blindness + amnesia (or even just the blindness in general), was not something I was real happy to see. It's too much drama for me. Still, I'll keep reading the fic because I really liked how Naruto and Sasuke were together in the flashbacks, and I really like stories about people trying to make amends and fix their mistakes. I'd like to see how Sasuke tries to get to know Naruto again and how he will figure out a way for them to move forward with their lives together.
schedule May 31, 2011 at 12:00 AM
SHUT UP JEN! GOD UR OVER THINKING IT JUST LET IT BE AND ENJOY THE STORY its not called fanFACTS its called fanFICTION meaning not truth could be completely and totally FUCKED UP and not make any type of sense whatsoever and it would still be a good story
schedule May 31, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I'm cheering for you Sasuke! I think he's been punished enough.