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Chap. 2
Sasuke's going to kill him!!! LOL....bet Gaara isn't so happy now....Naruto did call Sasuke's name instead!! LOL :) Too funny!!!

Chap. 3
I can't believe what Naruto said....he's completely wrong and thinks to just explain it away....Sasuke needs to beat some sense into him!!!

Chap. 1
I cant wait to read more.....this is such an fresh idea for a story.....I just LOVE IT!! From what I can tell Naruto is blind which tells me something bad happened to him.....I am so looking forward to finding out what happened to him and how Sasuke plans to get him back!!! :)

Ok, I have been enjoying this story fairly well. It has it's issues here and there, but overall it has been entertaining. This chapter though has completely thrown me off. It almost feels as if we missed a chapter or two in between or as if it belongs to another story. I think that you probably have everything worked out in your mind, but there isn't quite enough written down for the reader to truly following what is happening.

As another reviewer stated, I don't understand the 'they got me drunk thing' followed by 'I've been seeing Sakura for a while.' It just leaves me completely confused and thrown out of the story. I do believe there is a lot of potential in this story (I am a complete angst whore), I just think it would help if a few things were more clearly explained. I can completely understand someone wanting to get a little revenge when they felt they've been wronged, but I am not sure if this had anything to do with Sasuke's mindset or not. Giving us more insight into what the characters are feeling/thinking might go a long way in this.

I found this chapter to be really confusing. How much time has passed between this chapter and the previous ones about Naruto & Sasuke's argument? Does this chapter, in fact, have anything to do with the argument? It feels totally separate from them. What is this mysterious ceremony they are talking about in the beginning? Where did this stuff about Sasuke's father & Sakura come from? There was no mention about his dad pressuring him to do anything before this, so what was he suddenly pressuring him to do now? I don't really understand about Sasuke sleeping with so many people. All the girls got him drunk at a party one night and took advantage of him? Where the heck was Naruto during all of this? And that's a ton of girls he slept with!!!! Was it a rape? So was that the first time he slept with Sakura? (If so, why would he continue to sleep with her after something like that?) I don't understand, in general, how Sasuke is supposed to be closeted, and yet for the fangirls to know he has a boyfriend. That's not being closeted, it's just hiding the identity of your lover. Also, I felt like it contradicted Sasuke's pervious characterization for him to suddenly be revealed as a man-whore when he was upset about Naruto getting a blowjob from someone else. If Sasuke was a hypocrite and sleeping around back then, I'd like to have known about it. If it's a recent thing, I'd like to know why he suddenly became OK with infidelity when he wasn't at all before.

I love this story, and I would like to know if you can email me when the next chapter is ready. Thanks Tammy

Wow. That was a jump. Before I got to chapter 5, I was thinking the best analogy Sasuke could give Naruto so that he could understand how much he hurt him was to have him imagine him in Naruto's place, while Sakura was in Gaara's place at the party. But now, it's gone even further on Sasuke's side with full-on cheating. Did the cheating start before or after Kiba's party? I ask because I wonder how someone who has be hurt could willingly hurt their beloved even worse. Was there some spitefulness involved?

Oooooh! I like this o far! The grammar needs a little improving because some sentences are worded funny, but I want to see more of this as a whole soon.

Bravo! I loved it! The bit of Gaa/Naru was fun, but I can't wait to see how you do the Sasu/Naru, keep up the writing! :]

Awesome chapter! I loved the two scenes, Sasuke throwing an absolute fit and then Itachi telling him to hurry up and figure things out! Excellent work!is