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for Atonement

by annamaemacleod

person Nimbafuu
schedule May 31, 2013 at 12:00 AM
WHAT. WHAT WHAT WHATWHATWHAT Why does it end there!?!?!!? omg that was fantastic. I freaking loved it. Ughhhh I wish that story went on forever and into much smuttier times. I adored it though, oh lordy I adored it.
person LadyWolf
schedule July 7, 2011 at 12:00 AM
More???

Please....

More.....
person tjrender
schedule January 4, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I keep coming back to this---I would dearly love a follow-up, where Kakashi & Sasuke have a full-blown session...that would be so hot !
person Raholea
schedule March 21, 2010 at 12:00 AM
OMG.... this was positively sinful and promising. and i liked the stocks vs spanking choices... made me chuckle a lot. And of course... Sasuke and Naruto are both Hands- on learners. Are you gonna add more, or leave it at that? I would Loooooove to see Sasuke all tied up, but if this is just a oneshot for tormenting our minds, that's ok. i know your tags say oneshot... but...

ok, i'll be nice. but that was SOO very promising. and steamy and i totally think sasuke getting spanked was flat out kinky. and amusing. gods i'm such a perv.....

*snickers* the clear words thing you have to fill in to post reviews anymore?? One of mine is Puckered. i had to share that.... ok. BYE! AND WRITE MORE!!