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for Buzzing Beetle, Gentle Fist

by Prism0467

schedule June 10, 2010 at 12:00 AM
"He ground his erection against the Nara’s hot one, conveying who would be giving what to whom." Neji = RAWR ^_^

"Two unbelievably brutal orgasmic eruptions later, a shaky, jelly-legged Shino collapsed to a blissfully spent heap on the floor at Neji’s feet." I'll never picture Shino the same way I did after reading this.

waiting for the real action to start *yaaaay*
person Infek
schedule June 10, 2010 at 12:00 AM
You have done it again, my dear. Absolutely fabulous!

The descriptions and writing-style are very detailed and make for a very visual story.

Looking forward to much more.
schedule June 10, 2010 at 12:00 AM
OMFG WIN WIN WIN WIN! You tease i cant believe you keep leaving it on such cliffies. I cant decide if i should love or hate you for it. lol
Never thought that i'd want to read such a threesome but it was by you and i just couldnt resist. Fantastic fic of pwp cant wait for more but im sure you'll make me wait with the rest of those who are reading.
Seriuosly update soon. XDD
schedule June 9, 2010 at 12:00 AM
another good chapter ^_^

waiting for what comes next *daydreams about naked Shikamaru*
person cynaga
schedule June 9, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Oh, yeah. Bum. Bum. Shika-Shika...
schedule June 9, 2010 at 12:00 AM
*reads the second chapter* o.O
*dies of nose-bleed*
*goes to heaven just to realize that it's hell because NOW I HAVE TO GO TO WORK WITH THESE IMAGES STUCK IN MY BRAIN*

Jeez, that was damn hot and it's seems it's only the start. Holy mother of...yaoiness? I pray to thee that I shall live through the experience of reading this story till the end.

*goes off to pray*
person PrplGrl
schedule June 9, 2010 at 12:00 AM
...Why are you doing this?
It's not fair; having such short chapters!
Come on!! >X
Give us MORE!!!
person Gaia77
schedule June 8, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Wow.
Just...wow...and we haven't even gotten to the main event! I love the way you're putting this all together. =D It just gets better and better and I wish I had better words to describe how much I'm loving it! Lol.
person Raholea
schedule June 7, 2010 at 12:00 AM
oooh!! promising start! my bf got me hooked into shika/ neji but Shino never gets enough love. I look forward to what you have planned (although i have NOT seen the movie this is sourced to follow after.
schedule June 7, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Yes!!! A new multi-chaptered fic fom you. And damn if this isn't loking to be ve~ry promising. Can't wait for more ^_^