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July 26, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I just want to read moreeeeeeee pleeaaassssssssseeeeeeeeee *bounces*
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July 22, 2010 at 12:00 AM
hmm isn't this the same story?
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July 22, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Naru likes him!
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July 22, 2010 at 12:00 AM
i liked this chap!
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July 17, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Really good story =]
The main reason I'm dropping this review is because another reviewer suggested you make Sasuke more "Sasuke-ish." I need to say that I don't think you should change him. You don't have to. He's perfect the way he is ^_^
That's the beauty of a fictional story; You can make the characters act any way or do anything you want.
Keep posting =D
The main reason I'm dropping this review is because another reviewer suggested you make Sasuke more "Sasuke-ish." I need to say that I don't think you should change him. You don't have to. He's perfect the way he is ^_^
That's the beauty of a fictional story; You can make the characters act any way or do anything you want.
Keep posting =D
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July 17, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I loved this chapter, especially the end.BAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA."Nice package." XD So I hope Sasuke is the uke in this.=P and you really should watch the movie. It's my favorite.<3
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July 15, 2010 at 12:00 AM
It's a nice story you've got here. I've read one other story before about anti-gay camps, but this is much better :)
I enjoy Naruto's character, while Sasuke could be made a little more... Sasukeish.
The descriptions of the surroundings are really nice, as the character description in the beginning of this chapter (2nd) and in the end of the first.
Keep up the good work, ne? I look forward to read more - you've created a really nice ground for a promising storyline. I'm really curious :3
~Venerate
I enjoy Naruto's character, while Sasuke could be made a little more... Sasukeish.
The descriptions of the surroundings are really nice, as the character description in the beginning of this chapter (2nd) and in the end of the first.
Keep up the good work, ne? I look forward to read more - you've created a really nice ground for a promising storyline. I'm really curious :3
~Venerate
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July 15, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Totally great fanfiction! I love the way Naruto and Sasuke interact with each other! And the preists? ....creeeppppyyy! Watching them in the showers >.> Ha! That's funny. I will be following this fic so keep up the wonderful work!
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July 13, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I ditto you on a religious cause being pretty much the source of most of the world's past conflicts. Poor Sakura, it seems everyone in this place is brainwashed into thinking they're less than human beings. It's very very sad. Although, this just makes the plot all the more exciting. I really want to see what happens next.
Please update soon ^^
Please update soon ^^
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July 13, 2010 at 12:00 AM
This is such a fantastic story. It has a great flow and the plot is unique. It kind of reminds me of But I'm a Cheerleader.=] I love it. Update soooooon. <3