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for Stay Here: AFF Prompt: Harvest

by squeaker

person JayDee
schedule November 7, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Good use of the harvest as a metaphor for this couple's new start.

Spotted a typo you might want to know about, "He watched as the hurried about"
schedule November 5, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Nicely done! If you hadn't said so, I wouldn't have known that you had issues writing short stories.

I don't know the fandom, so I can't comment on the pairing, sorry!
schedule November 5, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Very touching, nicely done. Thanks for sharing, PW.