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January 12, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Hi
I did like a lot the beginning of the fic ( the first half of the first chapter) but after it start to lose is charm..
The reasons:
1: The hate become love too fast...i mean in the end chapter 2 the know they like each other!
2:The Gaara at the beginning seem dangerous, strong, independant etc..and lest then 1 chapter after he become a blushing teenager girl who cannot defend himself!!!OMG the change! Turn off!
Exept that...the rest is fine..Hidan is really funny!And Naruto seem cool the way it is in the Fic.
Of course, is just my opinion..
Have a good day
P.S: if i did a double post, im sorry, i did a trouble whit computer...XD
I did like a lot the beginning of the fic ( the first half of the first chapter) but after it start to lose is charm..
The reasons:
1: The hate become love too fast...i mean in the end chapter 2 the know they like each other!
2:The Gaara at the beginning seem dangerous, strong, independant etc..and lest then 1 chapter after he become a blushing teenager girl who cannot defend himself!!!OMG the change! Turn off!
Exept that...the rest is fine..Hidan is really funny!And Naruto seem cool the way it is in the Fic.
Of course, is just my opinion..
Have a good day
P.S: if i did a double post, im sorry, i did a trouble whit computer...XD
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January 10, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Love the story already & I have only read one chapter. Keep writing !