Reviews for Not Alone - Naruto - AFF Fiction Portal

person Danyealle

schedule February 10, 2011 at 12:00 AM

Please correct your disclaimer

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You must disclaim the actual fandom by NAME, not the owner/s of the fandom

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person Anon

schedule February 7, 2011 at 12:00 AM

While cute and all... not very realistic or anywhere near the truth. Adopting a child is nothing like adopting a pet.... you can't just pick a child up. and by almost paralleling the experience of adopting a child to a pet is slightly dehumanizing. CPS would not approve. :D

person RyuEarth

schedule January 30, 2011 at 12:00 AM

So cute! I have never thought of Raidou and Genma as parents, but this makes it work. I loved it when baby stopped crying when Raidou picked her up. Ever since last September, I've been such a pile of goo for baby fics. ^^

person tawanawelch

schedule January 30, 2011 at 12:00 AM

Aww, that was a loving story. I would love to have seen a multichapter story of them raising her.^^

person KiraIsJudgement

schedule January 30, 2011 at 12:00 AM

Ah, thats sweet. I like it. :) I think I should know who the parents are supposed to be, but I can't figured it out. Driving me bonkers. Someone tell me! Thanks!

person angelj232000

schedule January 30, 2011 at 12:00 AM

I loved, loved this fic. I almost want to see this as a multi-chapter fic. There are not enough stories with Genma in them.

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