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by ElfenDream

person Just another reader
schedule March 24, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I absolutely loved this. The execution of the humor was wonderful, but why post this if you don't intend to finish it? I would love to read more, but it doesn't seem like you intend to continue the story.
schedule February 14, 2011 at 12:00 AM
This is hilarious!! You really should try finding ur muse so we can read another chapter. I know how u feel about not really feeling like u can complete something, but hopefully u can get a little inspiration from one review. PLEEEASE??? There are other fics that always puts Sasuke with Naruto but finally there is this one with Sai. He is hilarious in tight situations like this. Well thank you for at least posting what u have of this story.^^
schedule February 13, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I know you said you wouldn't be finishing this...plot bunny drought and all that...but seriously...this is freakin' hilarious! I am not able to picture Sai & Naruto together much but this totally flowed well for these two. And his other boyfriend? Like... maybe... a threesome? huh huh huh? Wouldn't Naruto think he's gone crazy to be married to Sai and have an angry Sasuke as the boyfriend? 2 who look alike and ones a uke and ones a seme...what would that make Naruto? lol

This would be funny to read more :)