rate_review Reviews

I definitely LIKE your steamy "little playground".. speaking of 'endless possibilities', what is the story about? Getting to know Naruto , or himself, too - from Sasuke's point of view or 3rd person's perspective. Please don't lose this thread. Sex, gentle physical contact or even fights can help too, to ease or smooth things out, but it's not enough.
Personally I prefer to watch a complex relationship "bloom".
A piece of advice: try to avoid cliches describing people.. we all know these "Blue sapphires are trapped in the grasp of pure onyx", "silk raven locks" etc etc. Find your own colors, shades, comparisons etc.
When reading previous chapters I got confused with so many inner dialogues going.. a bit complicated. Couldn't Sasuke just listen to the boy? Did he really need to analyze each word he hears?
Thank you for such detailed descriptions of sensations, they're really slow-erotic, lazy. Liked it.
Good luck with the story!

This story is so sweet!!!! And I really love the nice and fluffy Itachi^^ Thanks for the wonderfull smuttlett in the end ^^See you!!!

Ack!!!! How could you stop there. Such a tease. It was good, great and on it's way to being totally awesome. Then it stopped and I feel like cold water just got poured on me. Please update soon.

hi you should contunie i really liked your style and i'm waiting for chapter 5 thx man

cool i love your style come on do chapter 5 and thx for posting

I like this, this is a good start. I hope more is to come soon.

interesting ^^ I want more !!!