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May 9, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Would love to see more. It has a great start and the tension between Naruto and Sasuke is great. And yes... I'm just rereading it again and probably commenting again... because I like it :)
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May 31, 2014 at 12:00 AM
oh I loved this!!! Makes me wonder... did Naruto and Sakura get married when they were way young? Making Sasuke jealous and marry Ino because he was mad? Then not have any idea that Naruto was divorced? So WHAT is he going to do with Ino?!?
And it is totally understandable that Naruto would still not have a clue. And I'm really glad that Sasuke likes Naruto's cooking:)
And it is totally understandable that Naruto would still not have a clue. And I'm really glad that Sasuke likes Naruto's cooking:)
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May 31, 2014 at 12:00 AM
oh my gosh... I just saw that I had reviewed this in 2011! Glad I just decided to check on here because I don't often read Naruto anymore. Glad that you continued :)
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May 15, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I'm really liking this story so far. I love how normal Naruto is, I like how his Daughter is, in a lot of ways, a lot like him. I also like how wonderful a father Naruto is. I like how he can be a Mom/Dad for his Daughter. But most of all, I like how clearly interested Sasuke is. He acts like a dick when people are around, but little things have happened in the secant chapter to make it clear that Sasuke is indeed interested. He remembered Naruto's favorite Color, and bought flowers of that color. When at dinner he was asking questions about Naruto's and Sakura's relationship. Meanwhile giving Naruto looks, Naruto himself couldn't explain. When he found out they where separated, he sudden starts to sick around naruto. Seeks him out while he's cleaning up in the kitchen and they are alone. Then he plays around with Naruto, when they not long ago hated one another? And the look he gave Naruto in the end, the touch of his cheek to whip the bubbles off? It's clear Sasuke loves Naruto, and I have a feeling it's not a sudden feeling. But it's one that is coming to light after so many years. When a sudden opening has finally made itself clear. =D
I'm loving this, an I can't wait for more. ^^ I do love a good Sasu/Naruo story, and this looks very promising. ;3
I'm loving this, an I can't wait for more. ^^ I do love a good Sasu/Naruo story, and this looks very promising. ;3
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May 13, 2014 at 12:00 AM
LOL!! Love the 'friendly touch' Sasuke gave. Also love that you didn't make Sakura annoying in this as well as made Naruto cool n normal not silly to death. Can't wait for more.:)
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October 2, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Dude, u have an amazing story here. please please update it soon!
Thanks.
P.S. make it Naruto/Sasuke! that would be cute!
Thanks.
P.S. make it Naruto/Sasuke! that would be cute!
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September 5, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Nice, I really like the start of this family fic.:3
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September 5, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I love how this is starting out! So glad they will eventually ditch the girls so I can handle it for now lol. I bet Naruto is going to make the kids become friends... right? Maybe? lol oh this is going to be funny. Write more soon!!!
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September 5, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Okay, you have me interested. I'm hoping that updates come at a constant and regular intervals. I hope to see you soon as well.
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September 4, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Wow! I like this a whole lot. I've never read a story like this before and I can't wait to read more. Update soon!~