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for Fair is fair, a deal is a deal

by foxkitsune300

schedule April 17, 2012 at 12:00 AM
oh my gosh! I so loved how that ended!!! And I'm so glad it was a happy ending for Hosaka! That ending was such an interesting twist and I totally did not see that coming!

I'm also so glad to hear that you have a place to stay right now. Even though it's crowded :)
Of course timing and coordinating shower times will help :)
schedule April 16, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I knew when Hisoka was telling his tell and the blong hair and black eyes I thought. I bet that is Naruto's child if they ever live. Glad things turned up for the best. Congrats on this fic. HOpe you continue to excel in all that you do.
person smint45
schedule April 16, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Oh my god that was so sad and at the same time soo sweet!!!! I totally loved your ending!!!!! Thank you so much for posting this!!!! See you again!!!!
schedule April 15, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I am so sorry to hear about how life seems to have blown up on you! I know that we are not given more than we can handle... but sometimes it seems pretty close. Thank you for taking the time to post even with everything that is going on in your life (loved it like always :) I so want Sasuke to find out it's really Naruto!). But take care of yourself and don't worry about your story... we'll still be here when things settle.
person smint45
schedule April 12, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Oh I really loved this chappie!!!! Hope there will a way for Naruto to make it all right and give them all a happy end^^ I'm really sorry that your private life is such a mess at the moment, but when you are at the lowest point it can only go up!!! So I hope to hear from you soon!!!! See you!!!
schedule April 12, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Ooh. I have to know what Sasuke thought after losing Naruto. Please update again soon.
person smint45
schedule April 10, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Oh that was great now he will stay at the home of his senseis^^ I can't wait for more!!! See you again!!!
schedule April 9, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I love this! And I'm trying to guess who was watching him in the hospital. Someone smart enough to figure things out? Shika? And please don't let him have been picked up by 2 bad guys!!! Iruka and Kakashi? Yes?

Can't wait to read more :)
schedule April 2, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I love how this is going!!!!! And Naruto sick... I find it really interesting how Naruto is having to deal with being normal and normally the ninja wouldn't really have much to do with him except he has Naruto's name. But Sakura saying that they all died for him? Does that mean that they made the same choice that Naruto did and he then did the same thing and they know it? Really want to know!!!! :)
person smint45
schedule April 1, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I don't like how weak naruto is in this story!!! I hope he will be training as a ninja again at some point ^^ Hope to see you again soon!!!