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for Fair is fair, a deal is a deal

by foxkitsune300

schedule March 10, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Thank you so much for writing a story for me!!! wow... that's actually a pretty amazing thing lol. And I love this! Actually I cried through all of chapter 2 and I love when a story can get to me like that. It usually takes longer to connect to the characters but this sucked me in right away and put Naruto in character right away so it was easy to connect with him. Looking forward to the next chapter!!! :)
person smint45
schedule March 9, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Interesting start I want to read more ^^
schedule March 9, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Please tell me that isn't where it ends. Please update again I must know.
person smint45
schedule March 9, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Oh my god this chappy got me crying my eyes out!!!! I'm so beggin you to let there be a happy end otherwise I don't think I will be able to continue reading this!!! I really hope there will be a way for them to be together^^ See you again soon!!!