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This fic was so good! The emotion and drama was amazing and the conflict ran high. Sasuke was a total arsehole and I never felt sorry for him because I totally blamed him for everything. It was his fault. He never gave Naruto the benefit of the doubt or tried to let him explain. I was on Naruto's side the entire time. This was wonderful and Sakura pissed me off so much, but she was dealt with in a manner that she deserved and made me happy. It was wonderfully written and I didn't catch any mistakes, you did a really good job! Thanks for sharing this ^_^

Amazing story! I could not stop reading this, good job ;D

Wow! I ate this all up! This was a lot of fun to read the drama and heart ache were wonderful in this story. Nice work.

Hnnnnnngggg!!!!! >.< !! I loved it sooo much! <3 It was awesome :'D
I hated Sakura's character though. I don't normally like her potrayed in such a negative role (I actually like her) But it was written out quite nicely. Ooh, and Naru's punishment in the earlier chapter had me running for tissues to stuff in my nose xD I.m just sitting here daydreaming about their weddings *sigh* How I would love to read it... I can imagine Sasu and Tachi duking it out, to make his own wedding more fabulous than the other's and Naru and Kashi just shaking their heads at their fiances's antics, LOL!
Also, I've loved all the stories you wrote :) SO GOOD!

Well, I must agree with alienX. Your Naruto is completely unconvincing for me... it's like only the name is left from the original character... The story starts promising but... The characters are very shallow, one-dimensional (weak Naruto, bossy Sasuke, sugar-sweet parents...), the plot gets more and more unrealistic (all the involvement of parents to get back and eventually merry their underage and clearly very immature children, no credible reason for Sakura's change of heart etc.) Not to end with pure criticism - you have quite nice writing style and some original ideas, I like the kaka/ita end - it was a really nice touch. I would guess that you are still very young (the story shows teenage perspective on life) and with time maybe you will get more into characters psychology rather then strange plot twists and use your writing skills better. But thats only my opinion, you have a lot of support from other readers. I hope I won't discourage you only motivate to get better :)

Oh, it's done now... I really loved the ending. I was smiling the entire time I was reading it. In the end, I felt sorry for Sakura. I guess she truly did love Naruto. ^_^

That was a sweet ending to such a cute story :) Great writing!

thankyou so much for finishing the story. defiantly happy everything worked out in the end. would love it if you maybe fif a story on Itachis relationship or maybe a oneshot of sasuke and naruto's married life.

Two weddings huh? Sounds like an excellent reason for a sequel story hmm ;3 ?!

This is a Great Story! I'm finally Happy that someone made a Story Where Kushina, Minato, Fugato, and Mikoto are Alive!!! As well as Itachi, but the reason this is one of my a protea is because it Crosses the border between The Naruto Saga we know and brings it over in Reality and gives it some problems that most people go through like Rejection, Sexuallity, Parental Aproval, acceptance, and just Plain Love and Hate! PLEASE CONTINUE TO WRITE MORE ILL BE LOOKING IN ON THE NEXT CHAPER!!!!!