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July 24, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I love love love love love this story! I hope you continue it!!!
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July 14, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I LOVED THIS FANFICTION. I hope both of them just get married soon. I can't believe the 'reinforcements' includes Fugaku too. lol go Kushina!
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July 14, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Honestly speaking, I’m disappointed with how the story is progressing. Our lovers are nothing more than two spoilt boys, absolutely incapable of resolving a simple misunderstanding, reach to each other, even write a text message \ make a phone call… talk. And now you play the standard *Sasuke’s pride* card… Do they know what love is? A thriller turned into foolish sitcom or farce.
What’s the use of constant involving in-laws and Itachi at all? Sakura isn’t some Terminatrix :) If Sasuke and Naruto are unable to stand this little test, what kind of future do they have at all? To threaten her with ruining her career prospects \ her family’s business\else is a gross overkill and just not fair. And for Itachi to use any ‘heavy’ methods on the girl, already humiliated and hated by her schoolmates – again.
To me, it’s just one more proof that our two guys are spoilt brats. And Sasuke wanted to propose…:)
But my biggest disappointment is Naruto’s character. Constantly running away from his problems, getting hurt all the time, crying on everyone’s shoulders, pushing the unwanted person *just a second* later etc. etc. He’s just *too* weak, dependent, hyperemotional and plain – weak. Who would need such a creature in real life? Sakura’s more man than him : )
I honestly don’t know what could make this story more incredible and unrealistic as it is now…
What’s the use of constant involving in-laws and Itachi at all? Sakura isn’t some Terminatrix :) If Sasuke and Naruto are unable to stand this little test, what kind of future do they have at all? To threaten her with ruining her career prospects \ her family’s business\else is a gross overkill and just not fair. And for Itachi to use any ‘heavy’ methods on the girl, already humiliated and hated by her schoolmates – again.
To me, it’s just one more proof that our two guys are spoilt brats. And Sasuke wanted to propose…:)
But my biggest disappointment is Naruto’s character. Constantly running away from his problems, getting hurt all the time, crying on everyone’s shoulders, pushing the unwanted person *just a second* later etc. etc. He’s just *too* weak, dependent, hyperemotional and plain – weak. Who would need such a creature in real life? Sakura’s more man than him : )
I honestly don’t know what could make this story more incredible and unrealistic as it is now…
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July 13, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I wouldn't want to be in Itachi's shoes. Dealing with a stubborn brother and that brother's stupid boyfriend would undoubtedly be too much to handle. Still wondering what Itachi will do to Sakura. Wouldn't want to be in her shoes either. Here I thought everything will get resolved but Naruto just had to be stupid and obtuse once more. He's right, he keeps messing up. Any level-headed person would think of avoiding Sakura knowing she had stirred up trouble already. But no. Naruto just had to stay after class to talk to her. Oh well, I'm with Sasuke this time. He may be stubborn and insensitive but if I were in his place, I probably would've jumped to conclusion as well and save my heart from further pain. Thing is, if Itachi was right and Sasuke isn't one to bend easily, then it would be difficult to get those two back together.
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July 12, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Another deliciously heartbreaking yet funny chapter. I'm already looking forward to the next chapter :)
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July 11, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Oooo update pwease, such a good book love your stories
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July 11, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Gosh dammit Sasuke! He needs to learn to stick around longer and hear the rest of the tale! I wish I was there to give him a SECOND black eye to go with the first one DX !
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July 10, 2013 at 12:00 AM
next chapter please
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July 10, 2013 at 12:00 AM
yay Sakura got beat. no fair just when I thought everything will work out you throw a twist in the story. loved it cant wait for more
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June 24, 2013 at 12:00 AM
(“I’m not an idiot. I know what she’s capable of now, so I’ll be on my guard. )
if that's true_ then why would he allow her to invite herself into his home and why would he agree ?? they could meet at a public library, a coffee house, the mall food court_ in public....naruto allowing her in his home just proves he's a retard. you've also shown that minato is a retard- kushina already told him that she doesn't like sakura and naruto doesn't like sakura- that sakura even makes naruto feel uncomfortable- yet you had minato throwing naruto at sakura----that's fucked up.
-your naruto is a big cry baby and a pussy. this would have been the perfect opportunity for him to tell his father that he and sasuke are dating- that he doesn't like girls, etc....why would he think that his father would be disappointed or hate him---you've written that the uchia/namikaze/uzimake have been friends forever and naruto and sasuke best friends since preschool-- it's not like they couldn't see this coming.
it doesn't make sense that naruto would invite sakura into his home for hours when he knows what she's trying to do. it doesn't make sense that minato would go against his wife and throw naruto at sakura. and naruto's behavior only makes sense if he's a coward/pussy/retard_____you've also shared that sakura has only been part of their group since junior high- so only a few years----the gang should rally around naruto immediately and shun/punish sakura immediately- yet it's been months and you only have matters getting worse with no one coming to naruto's aid-----all the friends that you said loved him and they know what's going on and are doing nothing?????
if that's true_ then why would he allow her to invite herself into his home and why would he agree ?? they could meet at a public library, a coffee house, the mall food court_ in public....naruto allowing her in his home just proves he's a retard. you've also shown that minato is a retard- kushina already told him that she doesn't like sakura and naruto doesn't like sakura- that sakura even makes naruto feel uncomfortable- yet you had minato throwing naruto at sakura----that's fucked up.
-your naruto is a big cry baby and a pussy. this would have been the perfect opportunity for him to tell his father that he and sasuke are dating- that he doesn't like girls, etc....why would he think that his father would be disappointed or hate him---you've written that the uchia/namikaze/uzimake have been friends forever and naruto and sasuke best friends since preschool-- it's not like they couldn't see this coming.
it doesn't make sense that naruto would invite sakura into his home for hours when he knows what she's trying to do. it doesn't make sense that minato would go against his wife and throw naruto at sakura. and naruto's behavior only makes sense if he's a coward/pussy/retard_____you've also shared that sakura has only been part of their group since junior high- so only a few years----the gang should rally around naruto immediately and shun/punish sakura immediately- yet it's been months and you only have matters getting worse with no one coming to naruto's aid-----all the friends that you said loved him and they know what's going on and are doing nothing?????