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June 24, 2013 at 12:00 AM
(Sakura fastening herself to Naruto’s lips, Naruto frozen in place )
the same thing again ??? even after naruto said, 'now that i know what she's capable of i'll have my guard up- or i'll be ready- or something similar'
why are you making naruto such a crying bitch- he's always crying in this story.
why is naruto sobbing like he and sasuke are really over and done with ? they both know that what is happening is due to the machinations of sakura- they even knew she was gonna fuck with them-- yet they were still unprepared and attacked each other instead of sakura_ how does that make sense______you've done a lot of writing about plotting and causing problems- i hope you pay equal justice to sakura's paying for her crimes- her pain and suffering and especially public humiliation
the same thing again ??? even after naruto said, 'now that i know what she's capable of i'll have my guard up- or i'll be ready- or something similar'
why are you making naruto such a crying bitch- he's always crying in this story.
why is naruto sobbing like he and sasuke are really over and done with ? they both know that what is happening is due to the machinations of sakura- they even knew she was gonna fuck with them-- yet they were still unprepared and attacked each other instead of sakura_ how does that make sense______you've done a lot of writing about plotting and causing problems- i hope you pay equal justice to sakura's paying for her crimes- her pain and suffering and especially public humiliation
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June 13, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Thank you so much for posting these chapters. I'm sorry I haven't posted a review until now but I have been on a bit of a forced hiatus. I loved the chapters and I'm liking what I think you have in store for the pink haired trollop. I hope Naruto will be okay, being heart broken and having a cold can be a nasty combination. I also love the way Minoto warmed up to his son being gay so quickly and rallying around him against Sakura, that is the way all parents should be. And Sasuke's family (giggles) they are so sure about everything, but it is Itachi (Aka, sexy hunk) that I really enjoy. His protective nature and devious mind are wonderfully portrayed. I can't wait for your next post. :)
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June 1, 2013 at 12:00 AM
laughing at the way they are talking about what they would do if they saw sakura. poor naruto hope those too get together soon hate to see him sad
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June 1, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Man everyone wants to kick Sakura's ass XD lol! I almost feel sorry for her she has no idea of the shitstorm coming her way :) .
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May 31, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Mikoto sighed. “Oh dear, I think that explains Sasuke’s reasoning for not trusting Naruto.”
“Sasuke’s insecure, but Naruto is, or was, firm in his feelings. The issue lies with Sasuke alone.”
Well it looks like Sasuke is taking all the heat for the incident if “The issue lies with Sasuke alone.” That's very disappointing. The fic gave an explanation for Sasuke's trust issues, which was nice and everything, but he's still the one all the other characters (and by extension, the fic itself) is blaming for the breakup. But Naruto screwed up too. Looking at the other reviews, that seems to be what other people think as well. So why does Naruto get to sit in bed and cry about it while everyone pities him, and Sasuke has to run around trying to fix things while everyone blames him?
Oh, I know, Sakura is the real villain here and the parents are going to get their revenge on her, but the onus is on Sasuke to go apologize when HE was the one who just caught his boyfriend kissing his former crush (and for the second time)? He let Sakura kiss him long enough for her to start fondling his crotch, and all on the BS pretext that his parents told him he should be nice to girls so he didn't want to push her. (If I was in that position and told my BF that was why I didn't push away the girl kissing on me, there's no way he'd ever accept that excuse. And if I was in his position, there's no way I'd ever accept that excuse either. It's more likely there was a part of Naruto that sort of wanted the kiss because he'd had a crush on her long ago and liked the attention now.)
Sorry for the long review. This chapter was basically pinging on one of my SasuNaru pet peeves - A Naruto who is always so forgiven no matter what he does, and a Sasuke who always takes the blame no matter what they BOTH do.
“Sasuke’s insecure, but Naruto is, or was, firm in his feelings. The issue lies with Sasuke alone.”
Well it looks like Sasuke is taking all the heat for the incident if “The issue lies with Sasuke alone.” That's very disappointing. The fic gave an explanation for Sasuke's trust issues, which was nice and everything, but he's still the one all the other characters (and by extension, the fic itself) is blaming for the breakup. But Naruto screwed up too. Looking at the other reviews, that seems to be what other people think as well. So why does Naruto get to sit in bed and cry about it while everyone pities him, and Sasuke has to run around trying to fix things while everyone blames him?
Oh, I know, Sakura is the real villain here and the parents are going to get their revenge on her, but the onus is on Sasuke to go apologize when HE was the one who just caught his boyfriend kissing his former crush (and for the second time)? He let Sakura kiss him long enough for her to start fondling his crotch, and all on the BS pretext that his parents told him he should be nice to girls so he didn't want to push her. (If I was in that position and told my BF that was why I didn't push away the girl kissing on me, there's no way he'd ever accept that excuse. And if I was in his position, there's no way I'd ever accept that excuse either. It's more likely there was a part of Naruto that sort of wanted the kiss because he'd had a crush on her long ago and liked the attention now.)
Sorry for the long review. This chapter was basically pinging on one of my SasuNaru pet peeves - A Naruto who is always so forgiven no matter what he does, and a Sasuke who always takes the blame no matter what they BOTH do.
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May 30, 2013 at 12:00 AM
thank you for commenting on my review! I hope more updates will be coming soon. I love the fact that both families are so close. I'm not as concerned about Sakura getting punished, because in the end soulmates will always find their way back to each other.
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May 30, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Hi AJ, it's been a while! ^_^ Bad, bad, Sasuke [and Sakura as well]! lol :)
Looking forward to reading the next one! Hope things are going well on your end.
Looking forward to reading the next one! Hope things are going well on your end.
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May 30, 2013 at 12:00 AM
next chapter please
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May 30, 2013 at 12:00 AM
The parents' intervention in this chapter is the best kind of intervention I have ever seen. Not to mention Itachi's intervention. Sakura has no clue what's going to hit her. I can't wait to see what they'll do to her.
I love how you write the scenes, you make it easy to imagine what's going on. I also love how you write the characters' emotions. It makes me feel what the characters are feeling.
Now I'm eager to know how Sasuke will propose to Naruto and after all the things Sasuke had said, will Naruto accept? Can't wait to read the next chapter.
I love how you write the scenes, you make it easy to imagine what's going on. I also love how you write the characters' emotions. It makes me feel what the characters are feeling.
Now I'm eager to know how Sasuke will propose to Naruto and after all the things Sasuke had said, will Naruto accept? Can't wait to read the next chapter.
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May 30, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I'm so exciting to see a new chapter and I'm sooo looking forward to Itachi's nasty side. I really did love the glimpse into the Uchiha family. ^_^