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February 5, 2013 at 12:00 AM
naruto and sasuke are so cute together. cant wait to see what they do to sakura. well written story cant wait for the next chapter
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February 4, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Can't wait for more! I love evil Sakura.
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February 4, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Can't wait to see the reinforcements :D !
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January 5, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Wow! I thought that was sexy and hot. I'm wondering what Sakura's revenge is?
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December 22, 2012 at 12:00 AM
First about things I found strange:
how a girl, any girl, can dream of ONLY sleeping with the object of her desire? Is Sakura that sex-hungry-dependent creature? But it seems she truly wants nothing else.
As for the guys' relationship, it borders with abuse. Naruto submits, it isn't uncommon for stories, but the reason why he does it... "Sasuke was always punishing him for something..." "This was the only time he could take control of Naruto, where Naruto would do anything for him...". Why so? Why is Naruto willing to go to uch extremes to be with Sasuke? Is it a manipulaton of some kind? Is Naruto happy?
My first idea of revenge was that the girl's going to make their romance known to public. But Sasuke doesn't seem to care and admits it: "You see, I have a boyfriend..." So I'm intrigued. Ruin Sasuke's reputation in the eyes of the society his family belongs to? His career prospects?
Naruto may appear in more vulnerable position, as he's more sensitive and less cynical about the whole situation. So, betrayal and violence? Dark secrets from his past? Mmm...
And why is Sakura such a shallow person? I think you could have made more of her; she's been, after all, Naruto's friend. Not a maniac.
Well, the plot is definitely interesting and I'm waiting to read more. Thank you!
how a girl, any girl, can dream of ONLY sleeping with the object of her desire? Is Sakura that sex-hungry-dependent creature? But it seems she truly wants nothing else.
As for the guys' relationship, it borders with abuse. Naruto submits, it isn't uncommon for stories, but the reason why he does it... "Sasuke was always punishing him for something..." "This was the only time he could take control of Naruto, where Naruto would do anything for him...". Why so? Why is Naruto willing to go to uch extremes to be with Sasuke? Is it a manipulaton of some kind? Is Naruto happy?
My first idea of revenge was that the girl's going to make their romance known to public. But Sasuke doesn't seem to care and admits it: "You see, I have a boyfriend..." So I'm intrigued. Ruin Sasuke's reputation in the eyes of the society his family belongs to? His career prospects?
Naruto may appear in more vulnerable position, as he's more sensitive and less cynical about the whole situation. So, betrayal and violence? Dark secrets from his past? Mmm...
And why is Sakura such a shallow person? I think you could have made more of her; she's been, after all, Naruto's friend. Not a maniac.
Well, the plot is definitely interesting and I'm waiting to read more. Thank you!
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December 22, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Oh my. The D/s in this was borderline abusive, not so much a dynamic relationship of give and take. Sasuke should know that sex isn't always supposed to be a punishment, and he should be making sure Naruto has a good time too instead of just caring about his own pleasure. Maybe it will be to Naruto's benefit if Sakura breaks them up. :P
So Naruto stole Sakura's man. She can be pissed about that, but she's also used to Sasuke's rejections, so more shouldn't be a total surprise. Why take revenge now? Was she always so crazy that she would have gone after anyone who got with Sasuke, or is it Naruto, specifically, that she's mad at? (Let's say it was a SasuHina fic, would Hinata be in the same kind of trouble that Naruto is currently?)
So Naruto stole Sakura's man. She can be pissed about that, but she's also used to Sasuke's rejections, so more shouldn't be a total surprise. Why take revenge now? Was she always so crazy that she would have gone after anyone who got with Sasuke, or is it Naruto, specifically, that she's mad at? (Let's say it was a SasuHina fic, would Hinata be in the same kind of trouble that Naruto is currently?)
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December 20, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Wow, this story is great and I can't wait for more. Love Sasuke and Naruto.
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December 20, 2012 at 12:00 AM
LOVE IT! Can't wait for more!
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December 20, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Now I'm really curous how Sakura takes her revenge!