Mr. Right

The long awaited lemon : ) Enjoy

ON WITH THE FIC!!


“Speech”
‘Thoughts’
“Speech/Thoughts or Whisper”
*noise/action *
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Immediately after the door was closed, Naruto pulled Sasuke into one of the most, intense kisses he'd ever experienced in all eighteen years of his short life. They walked/stumbled backwards, further into the darkened apartment, still connected at the mouth. Sasuke took a turn and rammed Naruto up against the wall, roughly kissing and biting at his lips. Naruto could feel the vibration of the music pulsing through the walls, it was quite distracting, but not as distracting as this. Sasuke's hands were cupped on either side of Naruto's face, keeping his head still, for him to angle his mouth; desperately trying to shove his tongue, completely down Naruto's throat.
'Uhh…don't even try it buster. I'm seme here.' Naruto thought, but each time he tried to push Sasuke's tongue out of his mouth and into his own, Sasuke just pushed it further. Naruto's hands were on either side of Sasuke's waist, steadily inching down to his ass, pushing Sasuke's pelvis into his own.

"Mmmn." Sasuke moaned, into Naruto's mouth.

"You like that?" Naruto asked seductively, in control of the kiss now, while Sasuke nodded dumbly, Naruto tightened his grip on Sasuke's backside, rolling his hips forward once again for confirmation.

"Unn." Sasuke's mind was melted into oblivion, just wanting to get on with this thing!

Naruto sensed Sasuke's impatience and lifted him up, to allow him wrap his legs around his waist, as he blindly made his way into Sasuke's bedroom, still kissing him fervently. Naruto walked further into the room, until he felt the soft texture of Sasuke's bedspread against his knees and laid Sasuke down gently, while climbing overtop of him, kicking off his shoes.

*Bang*Bang*Bang* Boom*Laughter*Hollering*Astronaut!*

"I can't do this. I CAN'T DO THIS!!!" Naruto yelled, sitting down on Sasuke's stomach, running a hand down his face, frustrated that Every. Single. TIME. him and Sasuke were about to get intimate, something ended up interrupting them.
Sasuke reached up and placed his hand on the back of Naruto's neck, pulling him down into another mind-blowing kiss.

"Don't worry Na-ru-to. I'll still be here…..I'll always be here." Sasuke whispered, smiling into the brightest blue eyes he'd ever seen, sparkling from the moonlight. Naruto dropped his head onto Sasuke's shoulder.

"Sa…Sasuke…I don't want you to think I just want your body and all, but I really want to do this…..I mean…us, me and you."

Sasuke's heart sped up and he tensed in excitement.

"You've made me happier than I've ever been my whole life, in just these last few days…Seeing your smiling face those two mornings made me feel so wanted…genuinely wanted…I like that feeling and I want that feeling, everyday…for the rest of my life. I want you to be mine Sasuke…."

Naruto could feel Sasuke take in a sharp breath by the end of his heartfelt confession.

"Naruto…." Sasuke said, hesitantly.

Naruto thought Sasuke was going to say something along the lines of; ' This was just a fling, all I really wanted, was sex.' Like most of his past boyfriends had thoughtlessly said.

"I want to be yours, but……"

'Here it comes. Thought Naruto.

"Only if you're mine." Sasuke said, before Naruto leaned up on Sasuke's chest, looking into his eyes shocked and excited, leaning forward and capturing his lips in a loving kiss.

"So then, we're a couple now?" Naruto asked, insecure.

Sasuke nodded his answer smiling, liking the sound of it.

' A couple…. Sasuke thought.

*Boom*Bang*Hollering*

"Alright…" Naruto said, lifting himself up, off, the sprawled out Uchiha beneath him…looking so damn sexy, laying there, glowing in the moonlight, ready to be brutally taken by-….Oop, goin' a little too far there.

"Let's go tie the knot." He said, offering his hand to pull up the baffled raven.

"What?"

*Bang*Scream*Laughter* Music*

"We can't do it here. Let's go to a hotel or something." Naruto said, collecting his shoes.

"Hn. You really want to get this done, don't you?" Sasuke asked, scrutinizingly.

Naruto had his shoes on, ready to go, then walked up beside the standing Uchiha, leaning over and whispering.

"After seeing your sexy ass lying beneath me, ready for it? Y'damn straight I do." Naruto pinched Sasuke's ass, walking to the door, then turning around.

"I'll be in the car waiting….Oh, and if you have anything to make 'this' easier, I suggest you bring some." He said pointing at his rather large hidden package.

Sasuke stood dumbfounded, watching as Naruto rounded the corner out of sight. He stood a little longer before he heard the door shut and snapped him back into reality.
'Wait, who said he was seme?!' Sasuke asked him self, while gathering his and Naruto's toothbrush [he leaves one over there & visa versa] and other toiletries in a very small duffel bag, which could have been mistaken as a purse. He walked to his nightstand opening the bottom drawer retrieving a small little chest. He opened it, to reveal a small bottle of lube and a few colored/flavored condoms. Sasuke hesitated.'I trust him.' He reached in and grabbed the bottle of lube tossing it into the duffel bag heading out of his apartment, locking it. He walked through a crowd of people; still loitering on the balcony, smoking and drinking, heading down the stairs to Naruto's car. He opened the passenger door, climbing in and tossing the bag in the back seat. Naruto pulled out of the complex down the dark road, leading into the less busy part of town, with a huge smile on his face. 'I can't believe this!' Naruto thought amusedly.

"I want a suite." Naruto said simply.

"Why?" Sasuke asked, as they slowed to a stop, for a red light.

"Because, like you, I want this to be perfect."

Sasuke smiled inwardly at the complement.

"Fine, I'll get one." Sasuke said, finally.

"You spoil me so much! But I was gonna get it, I was just telling you, that's what's up."

Sasuke nodded looking at the time.

10:27

They arrived at an, elaborately, designed hotel….[You guys don't really care about description, you just wanna' get to the good stuff right?....okay good, saves me time.]

They heard a *Ding* indicating that they'd reached their floor and exited the elevator, easily finding the right room. Sasuke pulled out his keycard, swiping it through the metal contraption that flashed green when access was granted. He turned the handle and pushed open the door to an enormous, single-story-house, sized room.

"Wow, this room is hu-" Sasuke was cut off, by lips on his and hands roving under his shirt, rubbing up and raking down then back up, to tweak hardening nipples.

"Mmnnh." Sasuke moaned, caught off guard.

Naruto tugged the hem of Sasuke's shirt up, pulling it over his head and going for the button and zipper on his pants, pulling down, displaying, navy-blue, satin boxers hiding pale, hairless thighs.[don't like the hair]

"Mmh, dobe, don't you want to look around first?....See? There's a Jacuzzi." Sasuke said, barely opening his eyes, standing shirt and pant less, going for Naruto's pants, while Naruto pulled his own shirt off.

"No. Fuck now, explore later." Naruto said, before biting at Sasuke's pulse like a bloodthirsty vampire. Naruto bent slightly, putting his arms behind Sasuke's knees and his other around his biceps, picking him up bridal style, to the bed and tossing him in the middle of the bed unceremoniously, crawling on the bed, in between his legs.

*Knock*Knock*Knock*

"AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!

"Room service!"

"WE DIDN'T ORDER ANY FUCKING ROOM SERVICE!!!" Naruto yelled, agitated.

The servant on the other side of the door shook her head and deemed the man inside; very engrossed in what he was doing, so she put a 'Do Not Disturb' sign on their bedroom door handle.[Thank her!] Inside, Sasuke pulled Naruto down on him rolling his hips up and kissing Naruto, to get him back in the mood quickly, before he started pouting. Mission accomplished. Naruto moaned, and ground down into Sasuke. Sasuke linked his arms around Naruto's neck, pulling his mouth closer, if possible. Naruto secretly glanced around the bed to see if Sasuke's bag was nearby.' Good' he thought staring at the small black duffle bag, not even two feet away from them. One of Naruto's hands from being planted on either side of the raven's head reached dawn between them and palmed Sasuke's extremely hard erection. Sasuke let out a silent breath as Naruto began to massage his cock through his boxers. Naruto growled at the offensive article of clothing, sliding down, kissing, licking and biting Sasuke's body tenderly. He stopped at the band of his boxers to look up at him, as if to get permission to continue. Sasuke nodded lust hazed, staring into cerulean orbs. Naruto grabbed the hem of his boxers and slid them down slowly, as the spandex band passed over his erection; it freely jutted up from its confinements, eliciting a hiss from the combination of coarse fabric and cool air. Naruto stared hungrily at the pale cock inches away from his lips. He stuck his pierced[Don't you forget it] tongue out and flattened it against the head.

"*Hiss* Emm!" Sasuke's body jerked with pleasure.

Naruto swirled his tongue around, purposely avoiding the pre-cum leaking slit. Grabbing the base with his right hand, he took what was left, in his mouth. Sasuke's back arched up in delight. Naruto's free hand searched for Sasuke's bag reaching in and magnitising to the small bottle of lubricant. He snapped the cap up, single-handedly squeezing some out on the palm of his hand, then coating his fingers sloppily. He brought his finger to Sasuke's entrance, circling once and pushing in. Naruto pumped his finger in and out mildly stretching Sasuke, before adding another. As he was adding his second finger, he sucked particularly hard on his cock, to distract him from the pain.

"*Hiss* I-It hurts a li-little." Sasuke said, shakily.

Naruto nodded sympathetically up at Sasuke, as he removed his hand and deep throated him, while adding a third and coincidentally hitting his prostate in the process.

"Ahh!" Sasuke squealed.

He was feeling so much pleasure right now in so many parts of his body, that he couldn't even focus on the pain….or the fact that he was going to be uke. Naruto pushed his three fingers, in and out, causing a gratifying mixture of pleasure and pain. By now, Sasuke was pushing down and clamping on Naruto's fingers. Naruto pulled back off of Sasuke's nearly purple cock with a slight 'pop' and smiled at Sasuke's bliss filled face. Sasuke opened his eyes, realizing Naruto had stopped sucking his cock.

"How did I become uke?" Sasuke asked himself out loud.
Naruto leaned down and kissed Sasuke's inner thigh still pumping his fingers, stretching Sasuke.

"Take em' out" Sasuke said.

Naruto did as he was told and was suddenly flipped on his back, at the top of the bed, with a devious Sasuke looming above him. Sasuke leaned down and kissed Naruto, pulling back and licking his lips. Sasuke placed his hand on Naruto's massive erection stroking through his boxers.'Damn, he's fucking huge..' Sasuke thought. He gripped harder and watched Naruto's face contort with pleasure, turning him way on.
'I can't wait to have him in me. Sasuke tugged at Naruto's boxers.

"Take em' off." Sasuke ordered.

Naruto quickly obeyed and lifted his hips pulling his boxers down revealing an equally tan cock, standing proudly. Sasuke moved to sit on Naruto's stomach, brushing the cleft of his ass back against Naruto's tip teasingly.

"Nnng, Sasuke, I know you're doing that on purpose, quit teasing me."

Sasuke smirked leaning down and kissing Naruto's breath away……no literally…Naruto needs some oxygen before he suffocates. Sasuke pulled back long enough for Naruto to get some air, and continued his assault on his redden lips. Sasuke reached hand over grabbing the abandoned bottle of lube, squeezing some in his hand and snaking his hand behind him to grip Naruto's cock pumping, while thoroughly lubing it up. He lifted his body back hovering over Naruto's leaking cock and pressed the head to his puckered hole sliding down, forcing the head past that tight ring of muscle. It was painful, but worth it, seeing watching the many expressions of bliss flitting across Naruto's face.

"Ohhh FUCK! SHIT! Tight- tight, you're so fucking tight!" Naruto bellowed.

Naruto's lust filled cries were egging him on, to push down further, to hear him scream dirty things to him louder. Naruto grabbed Sasuke's hips holding him still.

"W-wait……if you move another millimeter I might cum." Sasuke ignored Naruto's pleas and forced himself to become fully seated on Naruto's cock.

"Gahh-Gahh…Emmm!" Naruto was trying his hardest to think of things that turned him off, but seeing Sasuke rolling his hips down on his cock, was a hard thing not to think about. 'Damn, this fucking hurts like hell!' Sasuke thought, bust masked. 'Maybe I should start moving more.' Sasuke slowly rose up, almost causing Naruto to come out, but pushed back down just in time.

"AHH!" Naruto moaned.

Sasuke repeated his movements slowly but surely, until he was all but slamming down, impaling himself on Naruto's hard cock, piercing his prostate with it. Naruto's half mast eyes recorded the look on Sasuke's face as he ran both of his hands through his hair seductively, gripping two large chunks of hair, the rhythmic bouncing Sasuke was doing on his cock, how Sasuke's cock jumped each time his prostate was hit and how hard he was gripping Sasuke's rolling hips.

"FUCK SASUKE! YOU'RE SO FUCKING SEXY!"

"Mmmm your dick is so big! I love to ride it!" Sasuke said, automatically.

"YESS!! RIDE MY COCK!" Naruto yelled, quickly and roughly jerking Sasuke off.

"Uhhh!UHH I'm about to-NA-NARRUTOO!!" Sasuke came, spurting out cloudy ropes of cum onto Naruto's stomach and clenching his insides mercilessly, around Naruto's cock. Sasuke continued to bounce on Naruto and Naruto thrust up to meet Sasuke before-

"SASUKKEE!" Naruto shot his seed deep into his lover, riding out his orgasm. Sasuke used whatever strength he had left, to pull up, letting Naruto's now flaccid member slip out of him, leaning over to take some tissue from the box on the nightstand, wipe them off and cut out the lamp, then collapsed back down onto Naruto's chest and lazily leaning up to kiss his equally spent partner.

"I love you Sasuke…..so much." Naruto whispered.

That sentence sent shivers of happiness throughout Sasuke's body.

"I love you too." Sasuke said, kissing Naruto one last time, then drifting off to sleep in his lover's arms.

TBC

I responded to these reviews actually before I wrote this chapter, so when you read it read it like i didn't wite this chapter yet : )

Okay, I've been lazy & not responding…[what a bitch!] but now my guilt has caught up with me!! Plus, I like when people respond to my comments, so I'll do the same! These responses may be pieces or all of one of the reviews you've posted for my fic in the past. They're in no particular order….I chose to respond to the people that reviewed 3 or more times [Thanks guys] If I missed you & you reviewed 3 or more times, then I'll write a Naruto Fan fiction of your choice…Male/Male of course : )

Trigger Happy Bitch- Girl, you've been with me since the very beginning, I absolutely love you, in fact, you were my first……review ; ) hehehe, You're one of my favorite readers because you review alla time, I'm always glad to see your reviews! "-sends tons o' candy-" Thanks for the candy : )….but unfortunately…I have a cavity… : / But I'll keep it on my laptop so I can see it every day to motivate me to continue writing! : D

Hiri- You're another one of my "old school" reviewers, No, I'm not calling you old, I'm calling you faithful. I really appreciate your thoughts. "I wanna write fics too..I admire you for actually getting it done." I wasn't @ first either, but you all were so kind & it was my very first one! Aww! But we should hella tag team on them hoes, Hiri. I'm sayin', you and me, me and you. one on one baby….you seem like an awesome person to talk to….so sweet X ) "Naruto will surely become sasukesexual!" HELL YEAH!!!

Secretsex92- Your first review was kinda robotic [no offence] but your encouragement for me to continue cheered me up, I'm a really self-conscious person, [that's why I live in the fantasy] so motivation is greatly appreciated : ]

Reno's_Lover- "Kiba always ruin's Sasuke and Naruto's fun. In like every fic but will they get back to it?" Hekk yeah foo! "Aparently Naruto says that" DON'T GET SMART WITH ME! I'LL KILL YOU AND MAKE YOU DIE ATHOUSAND DEATHS! Hahahahah j/k! You write me a lot…..I like you.

Belovedlovex2- "i still like that old pokemon." Dude, what happened to the good ol' days, right? "i said this once and i will say it again i am really lovin this story." I'm lovin' you!! "i just love the clothes that you put on Naruto!" Then you love the clothes I put on me. : ) "this chapter made me laugh it was funny!" Thank you, telling me I'm funny is more of a complement to me then you telling me I'm pretty. "i love you i love you i love you. thanks for working so hard on this fic!" We should get married, because the feeling's mutual sweetheart…you'd make a good wife. Thanks, don't ever leave me!!! I wanna see your name on that review board every chapter, sexy!

wickedwiccanofthemiddwest- I bet all you regular reviewers are like Why's WWOTMW's response so long? Well, the reason is because, s/he isn't afraid to speak his/her mind & is hella down to earth….in fact I feel like we're practically buddies! "stupid cliffe but love the story." Damn homeboy/girl! That hurt my feelings @ first!!! I was like, DANG this is my first fic & s/he already talking down! Hahahh!....eww I'm starting to sound black…ANNYWAYYSS!...lmao If a black person rolls by this and didn't read my second chapter [which tells everyone that I'm black] they'll pull a Shaqueesha & be like OH HEYOL NAW!! Lmao! "Stares at “Keep your boxers on, usuratonkachi.” *falls to floor and starts to ball like a baby* why why why why!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!" You know why why why? Because because because…I don't like to rush sex/love in my fics, if my characters have morals….They're basically both virgins : )
"Good thing i like evil or elese you'd be in so much trouble buster" Hehehe!...once you clowned me the first time on my chapter ending I was like….hmm you don't want happy ending chapters?! THEN I'LL GIVE YOU AN EVIL ENDING! SO EVERYONE CAN THANK WICKEDWICCANOFTHEMIDDWEST FOR THE DELAY IN NARUSASU LEMONAGE! TORTURE!! "I'm going to castraight you with a rusty spork if i get my hands on you." Ouch..*turns to Kiba* I think it's time for you to run now.

j7nx- "YOU MEANIE!How could you end it here?!" You can thank wickedwiccanofthemiddwest for that one, sugar.

jess249- "damn! i was hoping they would have some smex!" MEE TOO!....why do people say smex & zomg?...that kind of buggs me." i can wait for you to update when you get back from vacation! i hope u have fun!" Thanks! I'm pretty sure you meant to say can't but, no, I did NOT have fun on my vacation…it was pure hell. Six days with out AFF….SIX!!! "SASUKE AND NARUTO ARE BACK TOGETHER!!! and the smex is up next!! i cant wait!!" Not so fast, there tiger….the sex will come in due time my love, in due time. "haha! why does everyone like interrupting them?!" Oh, that's not the end of that lmao!!! I've been itching to write this next part LLLAAAAAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHHA!!!!!

Black-Diamond- "…update cuz ur awesome.." Eaaapp, I know it. "kiba is such the perv but i love him" Yeah, I like the playful perverted Naruto & Kiba. "yyyaaayy!!! your back! *glomps* =D" Kiss me next time. "Your awesome! Please update when you can!" Once again…I know it….but you can never hear it too many times…..say it again "Mr. Right hasn't lost its fizz!" Hahaha I know, that was just the depression talking [I'm not depressed, just over dramatic & a little worn out from trying to live life and keep you guys happy] "im addicted to this story! i love it o.o thanks for the update!!!!! i love you! *huggles*" Where's my kiss? Damnit!

hikara- Hey Kitty, did you like stop reading my fic or something??!! WHERE YOU @ B?!

VII- "the Naruto tung pierced thing very smexy" I know, it is, isn't it?! "i'm calling they get together" Youuu guessed it : )

kai-"give you props on everything songs style etc" Thank You." i liked that story is that the end?" HELL NAWW THAT AIN'T THE ENDING!!! WITH OUT SEX?? YOU GOTTA BE JOKIN'ME! "now get some sleep so you can continue sooner 2 hours should suffice ne" Hahahah!

yoai_lover1- "i really liked it plzzz don't give up" Not until you're satisfied. THANKS!

Chrissy- "Naruto is really funny" Thank you." am in total awe of your splendid writing abilities *worships* please keep it up"Thanks, honestly I can do better…way better, with detailed description…don't worship me! Worship god! God. Is. Good : D "I'll never get tired of this story..
it has just the right combination of sexiness and humor." Well, I try. *holds hand out and admires fingernails*

SasuNaru7- "omg!!! this fic is the shit!! you are so fucking amazing!!" Elopetion that's all I gotta say. You and me baby. "i'm begging you for more!!" You sure will be ; )

Crimson2006- "LOL, this story kicks ass. I love it." It loves you. "Kiba's good and pickin the 'wrong' time to show up!" C'monn! SOMEbody's gotta do it!

mina- "*screams* kibahaku lime but not sasunaru?! i hate you!" Ouch. "*screams* sasunaru lemon time!!!!!!!!!! yeeeeaaaahhhh!! the party in this chap was cool cause i went to my first party for a WHILE last night (had exams) and it was so hype, this just brought back the feel good vibes" Happy to be of some service to you m'dear : )

sasunaruluv- "*breathes in heavily* AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH" Tell me why I breathed in hard and screamed when I read this? "i need this fanfic to survive!!! i check on the updates every single day" Awww really?? "yaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa........the long awaited story has a new chappie...yay!!! and now for another long wait for lemon lmfao" Really guys, writing & living my life….pssht, I should get an award for this shit. But I like to see what you guys think

Okay that's all for today!! THANKS TO EVERYONE!!! IF I MISSED YOU THAT DOESN'T MEAN I DON'T LOVE YOU!!!!♥!!