Mr. Right

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“Speech”
‘Thoughts’
“Speech/Thoughts or Whisper”
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The next morning, Sasuke awoke on Naruto's warm and firm chest, steadily rising and falling. Sasuke shifted to move off of Naruto and instantly regretted it.

*Hiss*

Sasuke cowered back down on Naruto's chest from the pain shooting up his spine, waking up the formerly slumbering blond. Naruto opened his eyes, smiling at the fact that he'd declared his requited love for the boy presently lying on top of him.....frowning.

"What's wrong?" Naruto asked concerned. "Realize you don't want to be with me after all? Do you regret what happened last night? I'm so sorry, I thought you wanted it. Are you in love with some one else?....It's Suigetsu isn't i-"

Sasuke leaned up, kissing Naruto, successfully quieting his far-from-the-truth rant.

"No......my…ass hurts." Sasuke said, scowling.

"Oh! You should've known the first morning we woke up together.....*Siiiighhh* memories...." Naruto said, lost in said memories.

Sasuke shook his head attempting to lift himself from Naruto's body and failing miserably. Naruto smiled.

"Why get up? Why don't we just lay like this, together....all day?....I want to be able to go somewhere with you and just waste time."

Sasuke's heart smiled at the romantic idea.

"Because, I want to take a shower and I have to piss. Do you want me to piss on your stomach?"
Naruto narrowed his eyes.

"Does it turn you on?" Naruto attempted to sound seductive.

Sasuke looked at Naruto in disgust.

"WHAT?! I'm just trying to satisfy your kinky desires! I mean, were you not the guy who got off from watching his brother get off from watching him suck some guys cock?" [Phew!]

Sasuke managed to push himself off of Naruto and onto the edge of the bed, standing buck naked and limp-walking to the large intricate bathroom. Naruto watched Sasuke's hips sway, as he painfully walked into the bathroom. 'All mine Naruto continued to lie there, smiling and lifting his head high enough to lock his fingers behind his head, sighing contently. Not too long after Naruto heard the shower turn on. He looked around the, now brightly lit suite, taking in all its elegant excellence. 'Wow, this place is nice......Wait.........Sasuke + Shower........= Me in there with him!

Naruto hopped off the bed, rushing into the steaming, sauna-like, bathroom, staring at the heavenly sight before him.'Damn Naruto thought, while drinking in the sight of the pale boy......washing his hair? Who gets turned on watching someone wash their hair?!......Oh, wait, this is Sasuke we're talking about here. Naruto stood breathlessly, watching Sasuke's biceps flex, as pale slender fingers thread through silky, ink, locks, of sudsy cobalt hair. As Sasuke reached up scrubbing his hair clean, his stomach involuntarily caved in, causing his skin to stretch and cling to his ribcage. Naruto stepped over to the fogged glass cubical, opening the door carefully and reaching both of his hands up to replace Sasuke's, continuing to wash. Sasuke felt the cold air from the outside world, when the door opened, expecting Naruto to join him, so it didn't startle him. As Naruto massaged his scalp causing him to moan, Naruto primped his lips up, narrowing his eyes.

"Now, c'mon Sasuke, you weren't moaning when you were washing your hair, you're just trying to start something." Naruto said, knowingly.

Sasuke closed his eyes smirking, as the shampoo suds started to dribble down into his eyes.

"It feels so much better when you do it, kind of like masturbating." Sasuke said, playfully.

Naruto chuckled at Sasuke's admission, taking Sasuke's previously flaccid, presently hardening, member, in-hand.

"Oh yeah?" Naruto said, alluringly.

Sasuke let his head fall back, under the barrage of warm water pelting his forehead, thoroughly rinsing the shampoo out of the top layer of his hair. Naruto let go of Sasuke's erection and finished rinsing the shampoo out of his hair completely, before pushing him up against the wall, out of reach of the shower spray and bucking his hips into Sasuke's, diving down and latching his mouth onto Sasuke's, licking at the seam gently, asking for him to open, before plunging his tongue in, hungrily.

"I love you." Naruto said, against Sasuke's wet, warm, lips.

Sasuke grabbed Naruto's ass, pushing closer to him.

"I-I love you more." Sasuke said, letting his hands roam freely around Naruto's back.

"Wash me." Naruto demanded cutely.

Sasuke took a washcloth and lathered it with soap, beginning to clean the random dobe....I mean, did he not see this raging hard-on he had? Sasuke scrubbed Naruto begrudgingly, then snagged the shampoo and started to wash his hair. After he rinsed out all the shampoo, Naruto leaned in and kissed him again, quickly taking control.

"You're so sexy, baby." Naruto said, licking below Sasuke's earlobe, listening, and feeling the vibration of his moans.

"So are youuuh." Sasuke breathed out.

Naruto dropped down, squatting in front of the Uchiha, grabbing the base of his cock in one hand, bringing it up to his mouth to give a quick lick, then taking the whole thing in his mouth and down his throat, holding Sasuke's hip with the other hand.

"Nn!-n-Naru-t-o." Sasuke moaned.

Sasuke reached down and grabbed the back of Naruto's head, pushing him closer, as he looked down with hooded eyes, at plump, wet, redden lips, vacuum him in. Naruto reached down between his legs to fist his own neglected, weeping cock, giving it sure, hard strokes, bringing him closer to completion. As he swallowed Sasuke's pre-cum leaking cock, he made little noises that vibrated up the shaft.

"Suck it…harder, make me*Sighh*make me cum." Sasuke mildly demanded and Naruto obliged, sucking harder and pushing deeper, then pulling back to force his coned bead in the slit, making Sasuke slump into the marble-tiled wall, bonelessly. Naruto pulled back, looking up into Sasuke's eyes.

"Baby, I can't make you cum unless you want it. Fuck. My. Mouth." Naruto said, licking his lips.

"Oh my god." Sasuke breathed out, extremely turned on by his boyfriends brashness, dropping down, leveling with him and yanking his head closer to his, devouring his mouth. "That *Kiss* was so hot *Kiss*." Sasuke said; pushing Naruto to lie down on his back as Sasuke and the water came down on him roughly. "Let me fuck you this time." Sasuke said, squinting his eyes down at Naruto, from the water droplets that rolled into his eyes. Naruto nodded and pulled Sasuke down for another kiss. (!) Sasuke looked around for something to use, to make 'this' easier, as Naruto put it, and thanked the fact that they had gotten a suite, because in normal hotel rooms, they don’t give you a whole basket of assorted bath oils. Sasuke grabbed the closest one, from the rack and unscrewed the top, pouring some on his hands and rubbing some on his ready cock. He nudged Naruto's legs up and slid in a finger all the way up to the top knuckle."You okay?" Sasuke asked and Naruto nodded, keeping his eyes shut, so no water would get in them.

"Just a little weird is all."

Sasuke nodded compassionately, leaning down to suck Naruto's member into his mouth like Naruto did for him last night, knowing it wouldn't be half as pleasurable as it was for him, due to the tongue piercing adorning Naruto's inhumanly long tongue.'Maybe I should get one too, I want to give him as much pleasure as he gives me, if not more.' Sasuke contemplated, while sucking and adding a second digit, to do a scissor-like motion, to stretch Naruto properly. Naruto relaxed, as Sasuke continued to prepare him and suck on his erection. Pretty soon he was pushing down on Sasuke's fingers, silently asking for more, so Sasuke added another finger, pumping in and out. Sasuke let Naruto's erection fall out of his mouth, to place wet kisses on the sensitive skin of his inner thighs, still stretching. Naruto reached up and rubbed his hard nipples, arching into his own touch.

"M-moooree" Naruto breathed.

Sasuke licked his thigh and sucked hard, leaving a dark-purple splotch, before adding one last finger.

"Nnn *Hiss*….damnn…." Naruto whimpered. "L-let's go to the bed….this floor is hella hard." Naruto said, beginning to sit up, as Sasuke pulled his fingers out, stood and washed his hands under the spray of warm water, then turned off the shower, exiting with Naruto, drying off. Naruto ran out to the humongous bed and jumped, spinning in mid-air, flopping on his back and looking at Sasuke enticingly, standing against the bathroom door frame shaking his head.

"Come here baby, I paid good money for this room, we're gonna use it to its limits, fuck me into this mattress until it breaks." Naruto said whorishly, licking his lips in the process.

Sasuke's knees almost gave out completely, at what Naruto was saying and how he was saying it! Fortunately, he had a good grip on the frame and pushed himself off, running to the bed and jumping on it, between Naruto's legs, bending down and in one long lick; licking quickly from his navel, up his abdomen and chest, to his ear, sucking in an earlobe.

"You're so fucking sexy when you say things like that dobe."

Naruto was busy wallowing in the pleasure of his love nibbling on his ear, to really reply back to Sasuke, so he rolled his hips up instead, rubbing his cock against Sasuke's and now he couldn't wait to be burried inside him.

"Mmm…you ready?" Sasuke asked and Naruto nodded.

He snatched the small bottle of lube off of the dresser, squeezing some, directly on his jumping cock and smearing it around, coating his whole length. He tossed the lube somewhere and positioned himself at Naruto's hole, pressing the head against his narrow entrance, and slipping past the tight ring of muscles.

"OWW! MOTHER OF-" Naruto cut himself off.

Sasuke stopped abruptly, looking down at Naruto alarmed.

"What?"

"THIS SHIT HURTS!"

Sasuke narrowed his eyes and pursed his lips at Naruto's complaint and continued to push.

"Quit w-whining, it gets be-etter….I promise." Sasuke breathed out, tilting his head down to give Naruto a quick, reassuring kiss, while pushing deeper into his lover. When he was balls deep, he held himself up on quivering arms, waiting for the say-so and Naruto nodded, gripping onto Sasuke's shoulders tightly, as he endured the pain, that was slowly ebbing away, as Sasuke slowly pulled out and pushed back in a few times, establishing a steady rhythm. Sasuke re-angled his thrusts dead into Naruto's prostate. When Naruto screamed from ecstasy, Sasuke smirked. 'There it is' Sasuke thrust back in harder, hitting Naruto's prostate, continuously. Naruto gripped Sasuke's shoulders harder, digging his nails into soft, now red, skin, while wrapping his legs around his waist.

"A-a-ah d-o it fas-ter." Naruto said, as Sasuke pounded him into the mattress. Sasuke sped up the pace, while kissing his dobe breathless. One of Naruto's hands let go of Sasuke's shoulder to grip his solid cock, pumping himself in time with Sasuke's thrusts. In no time they were screaming each other's names to the skies, panting on each other, spent form their previous activities.

"*Siiiighh* I love you." Sasuke said, finally.

"Back at cha' , I say we hit that Jacuzzi later on." Naruto said, pushing Sasuke off of him and sitting up, getting off the bed, pulling on the extra pair of boxers Sasuke brought last night.

'Why didn't he say I love you, back? Sasuke thought self-consciously.

"But first!" He declared, holding up his right index finger. "We eat." He said, kissing Sasuke on the nose.

"Why do you keep doing that?" Sasuke asked, leaning up on his elbows.

Naruto shrugged and Sasuke studied his actions, thoroughly.

"Let's actually order room service and get some food. Fucking you last night…then getting brutally fucked, immediately after I woke up this morning, 's got me starvin'!" Naruto said, looking through the menu for room service, while Sasuke sat up behind him and wrapped his arms around Naruto's waist, kissing his shoulder then up his neck. Naruto turned his head to give Sasuke a quick peck, then turned his attention back to the menu.

"Great to know I come second to food." Sasuke said, getting up off the bed and finally exploring their shared suite. It had a balcony and everything.

"Nothing fancy." Naruto said to himself, turning around to lie on the bed, still thumbing through the menu's pages, as Sasuke frowned, turning back around to join him in his search.

"I'm not really hungry for anything fancy, how 'bout a pizza?" Naruto suggested and Sasuke shrugged.

Naruto looked up at Sasuke from his lying position, with his elbows digging into the mattress and palms supporting his head.

"What?" Naruto asked, bluntly.

Sasuke lay back on the pillows at the top of the bed, locking his fingers behind his head and staring at the ceiling. Naruto furrowed his brows at the silence and lay down beside Sasuke, throwing his leg and arm around him.

"What's the matter?" Naruto asked, genuinely concerned.

Sasuke tilted his head slightly, to look down at Naruto out of the corner of his eyes. When Sasuke didn't answer the second time, he shook Sasuke softly, staring up at him, silently asking him again and Sasuke sighed.

"I love you Naruto, I really do and I probably always will. You said you loved me and I'm just having small doubts that…maybe you don't, and if you truly do, I just don't want you to fall out of love with me. This is my first serious relationship and I don't know how this is going to turn out…I don't know what I'd do without you, now that I have you…..I need you Naruto, you're all I have left." Sasuke said, solemnly.


Naruto smiled and hugged Sasuke tighter.

"Just keep loving me and we'll be alllright!" Naruto said cheerfully and itreally did reassure him every thing would be allllright.

"Now-uhh…..can we order that pizza?" Naruto asked shyly and Sasuke nodded, smiling.


Twenty minutes later, they were sitting in the Jacuzzi, Naruto straddling Sasuke's lap, with his arms looped around his neck and his head resting on his shoulder, just relaxing and just holding each other, then Naruto pulled back, keeping his arms linked behind Sasuke's neck, looking at the content Uchiha, smiling.

"Let's get away." Naruto said in a funny, dramatic voice.

"Hm?"

"Let's go on a vacation or something. I mean, it's early summer, why not? We both got money. I love being able to just sit around and kick it with you and not have to worry about nothin'." Naruto said.

Sasuke grinned.

"……Where to?"

"…….Hmm…."

TBC


(!) Jeeze they kiss a lot…..oh well, it's sexy.
: ) The ending was fluffy….but *shrugs shoulders* whatever. Well according to Spiraling, I can't be my normal happy energetic self, so, Thank you my wonderful readers, for reading my story. It is greatly appreciated…I will see you the next time okay? FUCK THIS BULL SHIT!! I'LL DO CAPS ALL I WANT HOE!!! : ) THANXX FOR READING!!PLEASE REVIEW & VOTE!!! I LOVE YOU ALL!!! except for the haters!!!
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