Mr. Right

I guess I'll do reviews first, because when I read fics & I look @ the scrollie thing on the side & it makes the chapter look like it's all long & it ends up not being because reviews are @ the bottom (confusing) I get kinda mad, hahaha. So I'll do it first so after you can see that what's left is the actual fic…..(if you feel the same, this won't be confusing)

AoiKitsune- "dancing really 2nite sure y not..lol nope sry(Aww) got a quiz 2 study
4 damn summer sessions. but hey gets me out of chores (you live at home? aww)heh. well i
luved duh c u nest update til then ja. AoiKitsune =^-^="

Chria- "Are you watching me?(Nope….I just know!) *checks window* How did you know I'm hot? Ah well, wouldn't be my first stalker.(….I'm not a stalker……I get stalked) We'll see if I'll call you tho. It depends on if there's bondage next chapter(Maybe in the future….I'm not really into that)....that kinky side of Sasuke is crazy hot! And when Naruto talk dirty....drools....(I know right??!!!DAMN!! Sometimes I forget I'm writing the damn story & leave some out lmao!!!!)"

LadyWolf- "SWEET!!! I loved this chapter, I was laughing so hard!(Why?.....sometimes I just write & I don't know that I'm being funny……) I love the way this flows, no breaks, it just keeps getting better!!!!(Somebody told me different….she told me it was good & all, but it's kind of boring because it doesn't have a plot…..soo….next chapter((this chapter))'ll be the start of the "Plot".) Ok enough of my babble,(I love it when you babble : ]) TO THE NEXT CHAPTER!!!!
"MORE! MORE!!! Please....! I thought this was so hot. Naruto...Seme...That's hot! All other Fics that I've read, Sasuke was Seme....I love it! Please, pretty please with sugar on top (CAVITIY!!), continue. I've become addicted, please supply me with my fix!!!!!(How cute : ]….Normally I don't condone in any kind of addiction….but since it has to do with my writing I'll do it!)"

Madamdragon- "Tight! Awesome fic, love em since tha beginning. can't wait for the next!(Are you black? Lmao!((I'm not making fun of you, I'm just wondering because….."Tight"…..mostly black people say that…..(((Why am I saying "black people" like I'm not? lmao)))"

"Black-Diamond- "yesh we make love XD(YAYY!!.....do you wanna have kids? I just got a job so I can support us) *glopmps* ooohhh they're going on a vacation. that sounds hot and spicy!(HELL YEAH IT'LL BE!) Where will they go..o.o..(I kind of just pulled something out of my ass….I was gonna make 'em go to Japan, but that's probably what everyone suspected…) Loved the Sasuke seme smex =](@ first that's all I used to read ((Sasunaru)) but I honestly have to say….Naruto as seme's pretty hot) Update when you can cuz i love you (Back @ cha wifey!) and your awesome story (Can't forget that huh?)^^"

Bluesake- " Another great chapter! Loving the updates too. : D" Thanks!

Darkcherry- "OMG!! OMG!! that was a great chapter!!(Thanks!)^^ please please write more I really like your story!!^^ I CNA'T BE THEY'D GONE TWICE IN THE MORNING(They didn't…..It was just Sasunaru in the morning) AND THE NIGHT IW OULD HAVE BEEN TIRED BUT HEY IT'S HIM!!^^ CAN'T WAIT FOR THE NEXT CHAPTER!!^^ HURRAY FOR YOU!!!(Hurray for meee!!!!!.....Why me?....hurray for you, you like the story….I just write it : ])"

"I just had to review again!! this story is soo sooooooooo....KOOL!!(Thanks again!) >.< PLEASE PLEASE WRITE MORE!! I CAN'T WAIT FOR THE NEXT CHAPTER!! IF I HAVE TO I'LL WAIT FOR EVER UNTIL YOU UPDATE AGAIN I JUST LOVE THIS STORY!!^ (How flattering.)^ I'LL DIE IF YOU DON'T!!!(Aww, don't do that) sooo please please write more!!^^ and wow I can't believe they went at it two times poor Naruto I wonder if he's ok? by that I mean dose his ass hurt?(He only got fucked once…?? Sasuke got fucked twice….so I think you should be 'Awwing' for him : ]) PLEASE PLEASE WRITE MORE I'M A BIG FAN OF YOUR WORK!!^^(Domo!)

Belovedlovex2- " That was a nice chapter, but something deep inside is telling me that something is going to go wrong.(…..) I don't feel like crying.(Aww please don't cry) I loved the love making in the shower it was great.(Thanks!....I try!) Thanks for updating so fast.(Really?....my updated are fast?) I can not wait for the next chappie!"

wickedwiccanofthemiddwest- "AWw fluffy endings are good once and a wile (Okay) and this was one of those once and a wile times. Asome chapter as always and i cant wait for the next instalment. I think you should get sasuke's toungue pierced that would be cool and hot.(I would, but I'm too lazy to do research about how long it takes for tongue piercing to heal. Because how long can we all go with out some good ol' Sasuke-slut cock suckin'?...I mean I pierced my lip three times but I kind of did it on a whim & I was so excited about having it I didn't really keep track of how long it took to heal…(( If it's anything like a tongue piercing))) As for "Sasuke + Shower........= Me in there with him!" which means me+video camera+tissues= me video taping them with tissues up my nose to prevent bleeding to death lol.(Hahahah, really!) Anyway once again great chapter.

p.s. what did you mean by "wiccano/Espanol...masculine type thing...I knew it was a masuline spanish word"(When I was in Cali., I heard many Hispanic people say wiccano when they were reffering to males…..idk may it's not wiccano….but I'm pretty sure…) i didn't know that was spanish the only spanish i understad is hello, goodbye,friend, and where's the booz? (How i know the last once i can only blame on being genectically encoded because my family loves beer.)(Hee heee!)"

hina88- ""Because, I want to take a shower and I have to piss. Do you want me to piss on your stomach?"

"Does it turn you on?" Naruto attempted to sound seductive.

looooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooool I loved that loooool it made me burst out laughing looool :D(I'm glad, it kind of just came out : ]) heh, Sasuke got his piece too eh? nice ^_6 loool i liked it, it was hot ^_^ can't wait to see what you throw at us next Hina xXxx"

Darling425- "Let's see... Sasuke was on top when he was the uke. He was on top when he was seme.... Control freak.(After reading majority Sasunaru fics…it grows on you…I just can't see Sasuke submitting so easily.) Hm, how about Naruto ties Sasuke up? A little bandage to show Sasuke his place -_~ ne? Just throwing around ideas! It's nice that they both have love.(Yeah)"

Reno's_Lover- "hehe, Naruto got his. but SasUKE is still the best. I wonder where they go on vaca? Hokaido(sp?)((So close! You were just missing one 'K'!)) (Why Hokkaido?)maybe?"

jess249- "uh oh sasuke was having doubts! luckily naruto fixed that! oh and i am a girl, i just tought it was funny and i felt like quoting him,(I know you were, I just felt like flirting) but maybe it sounded like i had a cock? well, i dont and im a girl! :D(: ])"

Lihrah- "Dayum, dude. This is like the most entertaining fic I have ever read.(Out of all the fics ever written & the ones you've probably read, that's saying something.) You are so random and hyper. Do you have ADHD?(I used to think I did before my friend gave me Adoral and It did the opposite and made me more hyper ((If you didn't know, Adorol is a drug for ppl with ADD & if you take it & I calms you down, you have ADD but if it makes you hyper, you don't have it.)) I like you. No, scratch that, I FRIGGIN' LURVE YOU!(Sweet! I love you too!!!) Where do you live?(Do you have msn messenger?? We should talk!) I'm gonna stalk you down and plant some kinky ideas of my own in your head while your asleep that I get from my hot NaruSasu dreams.You know what's weird? I rarely get dreams, or if I do, I don't remember them. And the dreams I do remember, well, let's just say I have NO FRIGGIN' CLUE how they came about. Like once, I dreamed I was at some place called "Cartoon Network High" and I befriended a bunch of the characters and this dude with pitch black hair and blue eyes tried to molest my on the staircase. Do you think my subconciuos is trying to tell me something?(If so, what?) So yeah, off topic.(Daijobu!) Heheh, that makes me think of hot topic...Damn I need to go there soon.(Same here….I need to dye my hair some weird color….) I need ta buy meself a plaid skirt and a tie to finish off my punky school girl look. Oh yeah, I'm reviewing the fic...D'oh...Erm...so yeah, truthfully, the first few chapters were nothing special, but then it was... aMaZiNgNeSs all around.... Yup yup. Naruto's inner selfs are very amusing. You should give Sasuke some too. I mean, Bieng Naru's boyfriend, SOMETHING has to rub off on him... Hmmm, now I have a very interesting image of a chibi Sasu-slash-scary-Asian-lady-shopkeeper-person. No offense to the Asians out there. I love your pretty boys. Ja! ~Lihrah P.S: LUVYA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! =^w^= P.P.S: UPDATE!! RAWR!! P.P.P.S: Cookie?(CA-VI-TY!!)

sasunaruluv- " omg.. i didnt expect this AT ALL!!(What did you expect?) i lurved it! write more when u can..ok i luv u(Love you too!) bai bai!"

Crimson2006- "Damn that was HOT!(: ]) I want more lol!!!! (Just scroll down dear!)
Trigger Happy Bitch-" Time for PAYBACK! -grins evilly- YATTA! How cute they want to get away together.(I know…..I think I'm making Sasuke TOO sweet in this fic…) Please update soon. Where to go, Where to go?"

hisoka kurosaki- " its cute so cute i almost got cavities.(Be lucky you don’t have any.) so freaken sweet keep it up"

Sunflower- " I, LOVE, this story! I mean, I've seen quite a few fanfics in my day, but this has to be one of the fluffiest, happiest, most BESTEST stories I have read.(Umm…..Not trying to be rude or anything…..but that's not a complement…..I don't want it to be the 'EST' Just enough you know?....UGH!!! now I have to add more angst to the conCOCKtion.((Every time I say that word I always emphasise "COCK" lmao))) Keep up the good work! ilu~Sunflower!(Love you too, sugar!)"

hakai- " this story is really fantastic... but Haku and Kiba? i will wait eagerly. (Wait no more….This chapter was honestly updated so quickly because of you….I didn't know what to write until I saw you're review…SO THANK HAKAI FOR THE UPDATE!!!bye!"

MissMayumi- " ohayo! I got your comment. Haha. I was laughing too when all this came to my head. And yes, it will be eventual Sasuke/Naruto..there will be Gaara/Neji as well..and Sakura is just kindof like there, as a motherly figure...(Uhh….this has nothing to do with my fic…but THANX ANYWAYSS!!! I forgot what I even said!!! BUT I LOVE YOU STILL!!!)"

THANKS ALL!!

Okay, ENOUGH OF ALLA THAT!!!

ON WITH THE FIC!!

“Speech”
‘Thoughts’
“Speech/Thoughts or Whisper”
*noise/action *
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Meanwhile, Kiba stood impatiently, banging on Sasuke's door, waiting for him or Naruto to open it.
"Kiba! We've been standing here for the last past six minutes! THEY'RE NOT HERE!" Haku shouted, pulling Kiba away from the abused door and down the stairs, outside.

"Hold on, hold on, hold on, lemmi' call em'" Kiba dug in his pocket to retrieve his cell phone and called Naruto.


Naruto was lying, sprawled out on the suit's king sized bed, still naked, with Sasuke's head on his stomach, running his fingers through his inky soft black hair, when Kiba called him. Sasuke sat up and grabbed Naruto's buzzing phone off of the nightstand and looked at the screen.

"Dog Face." Sasuke said, blandly.

Naruto smiled.

"Givit' 'ere." Naruto said, reaching his hand out for the phone.

"WHAT?!" Naruto yelled into the phone playfully.

"Damn fox boy! Where are you?"

"Hotel."

"Hotel?"

"Hotel."

"Why?"

Naruto looked over at Sasuke's warning face.

"Finding out what I'm gonna' do with the rest of my life." Naruto smiled and Sasuke mirrored.

"What?" Kiba asked.

Naruto sighed.

"Ladagast nadagite adagaI fudagineaudagaludagee fudugucked Sadagaskay."(Last night I finally fucked Sasuke.)

Sasuke furrowed his brows at Naruto's odd speech.

"*Gasp* Congratulations!!!" Kiba yelled into the phone. "It's about time!"

Naruto smiled again.

"Well what are you doing today? Me and Haku wanted to hang out with you guys."

"Hmmm….packing."

"Fooorrrr?"

"A VACATION!" Naruto shouted cheerfully.

"Without me?"

"Yeah." Naruto faked sorrow.

"But……you never go anywhere without me." Kiba said, sadly.

"I still love you Kiba." Naruto said, trying to 'cheer' his friend up.

"We better have crazy-rough sex when you get back." Kiba said flatly and Haku furrowed his brows, pursed his lips AND narrowed his eyes….He knew they were close, but don't be fuckin' around…..literally. Kiba looked over at Haku's seething face and shook his head at him, reassuring that he was only kidding and Haku's expression softened.

"Alright Kiba, we'll fuck like the wild animals we are, until the sun comes up, okay?" Naruto said plainly, knowing it would piss Sasuke off, and Sasuke punched Naruto in the arm playfully. "Ouch!"

"Where you guys goin'?"

"Uhhh…." Naruto thought back to his and Sasuke's earlier conversation.


Naruto flopped back on the bed, having not made up his mind about where he and Sasuke should vacation. Pulling a pamphlet out of the nightstand by the bed, he read over the contents, aloud.

"Shark Attack….Shark Museum in SanDiego California. Ooo Sasuke let's go here! I LOVE SanDiego and I LOVE sharks!"

Sasuke looked over at Naruto with raised brows.

"A museum…….You want to vacation at a museum?" Sasuke asked, unbelieving.

"Well, we'll do other things! I know SanDiego quite well. I just want to go see the museum…..Is that so much to ask?" Naruto emphasized the latter, with a shocked dramatic voice.

Sasuke shrugged his shoulders. He used to know someone from SanDiego, but he'd rather not think about them now.
"Fine. When do you want to go?" Sasuke asked.

"The thing says that the museum will be closed in two days for remolding, so let's go tomorrow. We'll see it on the last day before it closes kay?" Naruto said.

"Well let's go pack then." Sasuke said, kneeling on the bed.

Naruto reached his arms out to Sasuke, as a gesture for him to take his hands and when he did, he pulled Sasuke down for a kiss and laid there comfortably for a few hours before the phone rang.

"SanDiego." Naruto said finally.

"What?! And you're gonna' leave me here?!....Oh you're an ass Naruto…..a flat out, fucking ass!"

"Sorry Kiba. Next time you and Haku can come along……..but stay in a different room of course." He smiled over at Sasuke's mild glare and covered the mic on his phone. "He's gonna' figure it out sooner or later." Naruto said, smiling at Sasuke.

"When are you coming back?"

"Two days before Sai and Sakura's big day."

"*Sigh*, I guess me and Haku'll figure out something to do until then."

"Alright man."

"Kay, bye love you." Haku growled.

"Love you too." Sasuke scowled.

"Oh, calm down!" Naruto and Kiba said, at the same time, unknowingly, hanging up their phones.

Kiba and Haku started to walk when they saw a boy that looked about their age, walk past them, then stop. Kiba looked back, confused because he'd never seen him and he was going towards the only two apartments that were taken on the floor....Naruto or Sasuke's apartment.

"Hey, you lookin' for Naruto or Sasuke?" Kiba asked the funny-looking boy, before he turned around slowly, to reveal sharp teeth behind a feral grin.

"Yeah, Sasuke." The boy's deep, charming voice sent shivers down both Haku and Kiba's spines.

"He's goin' on vacation with Naruto to SanDiego." Kiba said.

All Kiba got in return, was a wider grin and the stranger's back.

'Weirdo' Kiba thought, turning to Haku, forgetting the previous conversation.


"Dude, you sounded so fucking sexy when you growled Haku….If you're trying to hold out on me….growling is NOT the way to go."

Haku smiled.

"Let's gota' your crib, you fucking cock tease." Kiba said, wrapping his arm around Haku's shoulders, leading him toward his apartment.


Haku opened his apartment door, taking off his shoes and watching Kiba brush past him, kicking his shoes off and walking the overly familiar path to his room. He'd practically lived here since the night he'd met Haku at the dinner party for Sakura and Sai's wedding….of which was to take place, two days after Naruto and Sasuke got back.

Haku shuffled around his dresser to find some music, while he and Kiba hung out at his place. Kiba smirked, when he heard the familiar start of the first song of Senses Fail's latest CD, Still Searching. Kiba looked around Haku's room and his eyes fell on a drum set and electric guitar, off to the side of everything.

"You play?" Kiba asked, looking over at Haku as he pressed pause, to hear more clearly.

"Me?" Haku looked bashful. "A little. I play guitar, while Zabuza plays the drums."

'Phew! One thing we have in common. Maybe before he smashes me into the ground for being with Haku, I can attempt to start a conversation about drumming.' Kiba thought.

Haku pressed play and restarted the song from the beginning. Kiba spotted the drumsticks on the side of the stool and sat down at the drum set, in the corner of Haku's room. Haku looked over his shoulder and raised a brow, walking over and putting the strap of his sparkly pink guitar around his chest and shoulder. When the guitar started in the background, Haku began to strum along with the music and sing in tune. After the lead singer finished his line, Kiba surprisingly started to sing backup and tap on the symbols lightly, to the music, and Haku looked back shocked, at Kiba's grinning face.


We're destined to all die alone
I buried my cross with a rose
I won't kneel at your alter now that I know
It's a table for a magic show

I'm getting up from off my knees
the guilt is gone and I can finally breathe
But there is not a plan for me
You're making my tired ears bleed

And you can pray
But I won't be saved

We're destined to all die alone
I buried my cross with a rose
I won't kneel at your alter now that I know
It's a table for a magic show

When the song ended Haku picked up the stereo remote and turned it off, turning around and walking over to Kiba.
"Holy crap Kiba! You're really good at that!"

Kiba smirked.

"I'm good at other things too." Kiba said suggestively.

Haku lifted the strap of his guitar over his head and lowered it gently to the floor, stepping closer to Kiba.

"What things?" Haku said, sitting on Kiba's lap, linking his wrists, loosely around his neck.

Kiba shrugged, putting his hands on Haku's hips.

"Oh y'know…"

"…….Show me." Haku said, getting up off of Kiba and walking backwards to his bed, hopping on. Kiba got up, pulling his shirt up over his head and tossing it on the floor. Haku did the same, but stayed on the bed, shifting up higher to the pillows. Kiba climbed on the bed predatorily and heard his phone go off.

"Oh Hell no!" Haku said, reaching into Kiba's pants pocket and snatching out the noisy little gadget and cutting off the power. "No interruptions." Haku said, reaching for the button on Kiba's jeans.

Kiba closed his eyes and let his chin hit his chest.

"I'm so lucky to have found you Haku." Kiba said, raising his head slowly, looking into Haku's smiling eyes.

Haku pulled Kiba's pants down to rest at his bent knees and let Kiba do the rest, while he slipped out of his tight, low riding, jeans. Kiba not only took off his pants but his boxers too. He leaned down to give Haku a sweet loving kiss while he pushed Haku back to lie down. Towering over Haku, he licked his lips.

"Are we doing this?" Kiba asked; just to be safe and Haku nodded. "I wish I would have known, because then I could have brought some lube." Kiba said.

"Oh! I bought some!" Haku said cheerfully, pointing at the small wooden chest on his nightstand and Kiba grinned.
"I knew I loved you." Kiba said, reaching into the chest and pulling out the bubblegum flavored lube. He stared at the lube for a while absently, before looking up at Haku's widened eyes and he started to panic. "What?!" Kiba asked.

"You-you what? What'd you say?"

Kiba's worried expression died.

"I said….I loved you?"

"Don't say it like a question!" Haku shouted hysterically. "If you do, you have to be sure before you say it!"
Kiba got a weirded-out expression on his face.

"Are you sure?!" Haku asked, like he was asking the doctor if he was really diagnosed with cancer.

Kiba nodded and smiled, leaning forward to kiss the doubt off of Haku's face.

"Then say it…..right."

Kiba furrowed his brows.

"I love you." He said, plainly.

Haku closed his eyes.

"Say it again."

Haku licked his lips and rolled his head to the side, like an imaginary person was sucking on his neck and Kiba smiled.

'Softy.' Kiba thought, leaning forward and taking the place of the imaginary person, sucking on Haku's neck and whispered in his ear sensually.

"I love you."

"*Moan*…Say it…..say it again." Haku breathed out.

Kiba said it again, before trailing down Haku's body and licking at the head of Haku's hardening erection. Kiba popped the cap open on the lube and squirted some on his hand, then coated it on his own thick erection.
Kiba quickly, but thoroughly stretched his lover and positioned himself at the opening, sliding in slowly. He kissed Haku as he pushed in further.

"*Hiss* Fuck!" Haku shouted.

"God damn Haku. You're so fucking tight; I can barely…get in." Kiba said, struggling not to shove the rest of his cock in forcefully. When Kiba was finally all the way in, he waited patiently, for Haku to say he could move. When he felt Haku's hips jerk up, he took that as ' The Okay ' and pulled back as far as he could with out pulling out, then pushed back in slowly.

"Gahh….You feel so good." Kiba said, shakily.

Haku grabbed onto Kiba's hips as he pushed and pulled at a quicker pace, rocking the bed as he did so. Kiba was so wild, he kept changing angles, missing-and-hitting Haku's sweet spot. After some time, Haku found himself on all fours, being pounded from behind, screaming his lungs out in pleasure.

"YES! SCREAM MY NAME HAKU!" Kiba shouted, as he slammed into Haku's ass continuously.

"*Girly Scream* KIBBAA!"

"SAY IT AGAIN!" Kiba yelled again, roughly jerking Haku off.

"KIIBBAAAA!" Haku screamed, as he came into Kiba's hand.

Kiba thrust in Haku's extremely tight passage, two more times, before he emptied his seed deep in Haku's body, collapsing on top of his lover, spent.

"I love you too." Haku said weakly, as Kiba pulled out and rolled on the other side of him, opening his arms, so Haku could lay in them. Kiba smiled and kissed the crown of Haku's damp head and drifted to sleep for a well needed nap.

TBC

Kay...Oh! Does anyone know the Author & name of the story where Naruto is a masseuse & he lives with Kiba (and basically) Kankuro & I think he's a stripper too named Kyuubi & he dyes his hair red & wears red contacts when he dances & he's like dating Sasuke & Itachi at the same time...& him & Sasuke end up goin out & dancing in fron of a mirror...(Holy fuck!) well I think i've given enough details.....I copied & pasted it 2 word & saved it to my laptop so I could read it on the go (Damn I'm obsessed)

& another one...Where Itachi & Sasuke were like in foster homes growing up & when Itachi was finally old enough he moved out with Sasuke & they lived in this town where nobody liked them, them they moved to Konoha in this apatrment building & Haku was there & Naruto was there....& Itachi's like struggling wherther he wants to have a relationship with Sasuke or not....& the last fucking thing that saved is when Itachi pushed Sasuke in a corner & told him that "If we do this you can never speak of it agai" or something like that....*Sighhhh* those were the type of stories that keep me on AFF......& You lovly reviewers of course!!!! THANKS FOR READING!! PLEASE REVIEW AND RATE!!!!!
JA!