Mr. Right

Damn! Every body knew the name to the first fic! She needs to update……so does everyone else too! Kuz the stories that are normally up there aren't really all that entertaining (to me at least).


ON WITH THE REVIEWS!....oh, I'm getting lazy so imam make this as minimal as possible. Love you guys, but laziness prevails. : ]

nunayaa, Mistress_Tsukiko, devil child, Sisely, AoiKitsune, sleepy, spoon, Gwyllion, maki, nine_tailed_seraph23, jess249, Dragon, mitsuko, Aikiru chan Tanks guys!!!

Black-Diamond- " Ok. Ill be a stay home wifey and we can have 6,000,8636438573 kids. =]
LMAO! *kiss*(*smooch*) LOVED THE SPICY HAKU/KIBA SMEX!!WWWWOOOOOO! [loved the screaming] XD
San Diego..ooohh that is hot and spicy...i wanna go there one day ^^
Again, the chappie was OF THE ROOF NIGS!!(L-M-A-O YOU ARE SOOOO WHITE!!if you're not…then what are you…I got a wife and don't even know what she looks like…..damn, just like dem niggas lmao!!!) [lol..nigs o.o..i hope ur not offended(nahh whatever….just don't say the whole thing or I'll strangle you and chop you up into tiny pieces and burn you to ashes, then sprinkle your remains on my dog's food so he can eat you and poop you out : ]). i love you XD(Love you tooo! Hahahah!)*glomps* UPDATE WHEN YOU CAN!!! ^^"

Darkcherry- " OMG THAT WAS CUTE!!^^ wow Kiba and Haku really had it going on!!(Mmm-hm!) that was soooo cute!!^^ you really picked a good place to send Sasuke and Naruto on there little vacation SANDEIGO RULES!!(YEAH IT DOES!) sorry it's that I've been there before.Hey one question though is Sasuke going to get some more action in Sandeigo?(Boy do I have something in store for you) and who was that guy that was looking for Sasuke? and what was that grin for when Kiba told him that he went out with Naruto? Is he going to do something bad???!! NNNNNNNNNNOOOOOOOO!!! SOME MANY QUESTION NEED MORE ANSWERS!! PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE WRITE MORE I'M BEGGING YOU!! I WILL WAIT FOR EVER!!(You don't have to wait forever just scroll down…well you won't find out who the person is but there's other stuff!) STILL NUMBER ONE FAN OF YOUR WORK!!(Woo thanxx! I'm a number one fan of your reviews!!!)^^"

Crimson2006- " I laughed my ass off when Naruto and Kiba were making their significant other's jealous.(Mee too) That was just too funny. Heheh...So, Sasuke knows someone in SanDiego huh? Wait...Sharks? And then Kisame! LOL, is Kisame the person that Sasuke knows??? I wonder? Hum....o.0 And if so will he be a problem later on in the story?Oooohhhh....I can't wait for the next chapter! (Heeere it iss!)Keep up the awesome job! XD" Thanx!

Belovedlovex2- " "YES! SCREAM MY NAME HAKU!" Kiba shouted, as he slammed into Haku's ass continuously."*Girly Scream* KIBBAA!" i think that was my favorite part. for some reason i was laughing my ass off when i was reading that part out loud with a friend right next to me. (How can you do that? I couldn't read ANY kind of sexual material with ANYone else around unless they didn't know what I was reading I'd be SO embarrassed!)who was also laughing at how i was reading it. i am still wondering who the strange person that was asking for sasuke. i can not wait for the next chapter. love you. marry me please.(Okay! *merried*)

Reno's_Lover- " Good chappy. I was waiting for Zabuza to walk in mid-orgasm tho >< that would've been kinda funny." I know! I was seriously considering doing that but then I would have had to write more….and I'm lazy…

666life666equals666yaoi666- " okay yeah, this was my first time reading this story "mr.right" and i spend all night reading it, from 11pm my time to 6 am my time(Wow)....i stalled alittle (Why?)but your story was totally worth the no sleep, i cant it for the next ch.(Hehe thanxx!)"

Trigger Happy Bitch- " they like messing wit Sasuke and Haku, don't they?(Yes) Who was that creepy person looking for Sasuke?If it was Orochimaru or Kabuto have them fall off a cliff!(HAHAHAHA)Can't wait for the next chappie (It's down there *scroll down*)"

MissMayumi- " Haha Zee_kay, you loser..(Damn you dirty whore, go die!)You reviewed my story, The Ramen Club(: ]), and I'd thought i'd return the favor! Haha, and even though you are a lover,(?) I love you too!! *glomps you* hahaha...I think there'll be a new chapter soon..."

"Oh, I know both of those stories your talking about...The First one is called Tranquil Blue by Animehead..and the second one, I believe it's Accomplish the Opposite by Amarugome...both are great stories! Hope their the right ones, though!(Thanxx!)"

"Haha, and sorry for saying 'you are a lover' in my first review of the three..I meant to say Loser..(You're a loser YOU FILTHY BITCH FACE! GO AND EAT A GRUB! Lmaohahahah! I LOVE YOU!!!)hahha...I'm a dork...(Yes, why yes you aree lmao!)"

crimson_moonlight- " OMG! I just read this story for the first time all the way through,(really? Where you been? Lmao) and I regret not reading it earlier! This story is AMAZING! The KibaHaku pairing was a little wierd for me at first, but now I love it! Especially after this last chapter!(hehehe) Hmm...shark attack, huh? Kisame wouldn't happen to be making an appearance, would he? XDD You are an amazing fanfic writer!(Thank you sweetheart!) Can't wait for the next chapter!(Here it iss!)

SasuNaru7- " i love this fic to death!!!(Heyy thanxx!) please update soon!! i can't wait for Sasuke to be seme again! Haha" *breathes in deeply* Mmm, Ahhdunno…I'm kind of likin' seme Naruto…but for you? This next chapter((after this one)) will be just for you)

AngelicDevil- "really love Mr. Right.(Thanx I really love you!) Keep updating! Here are some cookies for you! (NOOOOOOO! NO-NO-NO-NO-NO-NOOO! NO COOKIES!!! GAHHH!I HAVE A CAVITYYY!!! Give me brussle sprouts to teach me a lesson that sugar….is baaaad *crosses fingers behind back*)"

hisoka kurosaki- "wow,surprise surprise they screwed congrads!" Mmmm-Hmm!

wickedwiccanofthemiddwest- " IIIII'm BAAAAAck!(Where were you?) LOL. As always a fabouls chapter.(Thanx) I just gotta say if haku and sasuke were friends sasuke should have picked up on haku's trick to stop distractions so much for the obsidain haired genius(Mmm-hmm!). LOL. Cant wait to find out who the crazy creepy man is is it itachi?(eh? He's dead….or is he? BUM BUMM BUHHH!) Well cant wait for the next chapter (then here *hands you next chapter*) P.s. Really i didn't know that wiccano was spanish for anything thats just a cowinkydink, my name should be wicked wiccan of the middwest. However i kinda forgot about the magical symbol known as the underscore, *puts on naruto fox grin complete with head scratch* guess i had a dobe moment.(heheh I have those) p.p.s. Please hurry and update.(Kay!)


THANXX ALL!!!


ON WITH THE FIC!!


“Speech”
‘Thoughts’
“Speech/Thoughts or Whisper”
*noise/action *
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Naruto sat in a chair, facing a window that gave people a good view of nearby planes taking off. Sasuke was at the counter asking the lady that worked there; if first class got food, even though the flight wouldn't be too long. Of course this was a request from his blond haired blue eyed boyfriend, sitting and staring out the large window dumbly.

"Excuse me sir." The stewardess called.

Sasuke shook his head and stared at the woman blushing before him blankly.

"Yes, you will be served a small meal, your choice from the menu sir." She finished.

Sasuke nodded his head.

"Thank you." He said, walking away to join his best friend in a seat.

Naruto plucked an earphone from his ear and turned to Sasuke as he sat.

"So?"

"Aa, they'll give you food…Kit." Sasuke inwardly smirked.

"What'd 'jew just call me?" Naruto asked, taking the other earphone out and wrapping the earphone wires around his ipod and sticking it in his hoody pocket.

"What do you think I just called you?"

Naruto glared.

"Don't look at me like that….Kit"

Naruto shook his head.

"That name doesn't leave that house you got it?" Naruto asked dangerously.

"Why?" Sasuke asked amused at his boyfriends' discomfort.

"Doneeribahh…" Naruto mumbled.

"What?" Sasuke asked just to fuel Naruto's fire.

"Don’t. Worry. About. It." Naruto said punctually.

"Fine." Sasuke leaned closer to Naruto, looking quickly at an attractive, young, brown haired girl, across from them, giving Sasuke a whorish smirk and whispering. "Can I call you Kit when we make love?"" Sasuke asked for fun and Naruto glared.

"What the hell, you bastard? No!" Naruto said, shaking his head. "My DAD..ss calls me that. Do you know how sick it'd be to hear you say that, while…"Naruto looked around. "…while we have sex?" He whispered.

Sasuke glanced at the girl staring at him again and licked up Naruto's cheek, feeling him shiver under his moist tongue and kissed the spot, reaching his hand up to take Naruto's chin between his thumb and fore-finger, turning his head to face him and stared into Naruto's half-lidded eyes. Sasuke held his chin still and glanced down at Naruto's parted lips and back. Naruto smiled, knowing what and why Sasuke was doing this. Sasuke smirked and kissed Naruto the slowest, most passionate way he knew how. Out of the corner of his eye, he saw the girl huff and cross her arms, looking away. Naruto smiled into the kiss and pulled back.

"So you don't mind being open about…us? Naruto asked and Sasuke shook his head.

"And let girls think you're single? No way." Sasuke said, leaning forward again, tilting his head and threading his fingers through Naruto's shaggy blond hair, kissing him again.

We are now boarding flight number 696 first class

Sasuke pulled back and licked his lips. "That's us." Sasuke's now baritone voice, purred.

Naruto nodded dumbly, looking into Sasuke's cloudy black orbs and stood to board their flight. Sasuke walked in front of Naruto to hand the blushing girl their tickets and walked down the tunnel-like…..tunnel leading to the plane and Naruto got an idea that sent shivers up his spine. He patted his pants pocket to see if he had it with him. 'Yup' They easily found their seats in the front of the plane, first class. Looked like they were the only ones so far. There weren’t many people waiting out in the lobby though, so there was a good chance of them being alone. There were roomy large, black, leather recliners. They reminded Naruto of the dentist….eughh! But dentist chairs didn't have little TV's in them or couldn't fit at lease two people in them either, so he was good 'n goin'. Naruto barreled past Sasuke before he could take the seat by the window and Sasuke glared.


As the plane started picking up speed and drifting off of the ground, Sasuke reached in his carry on and pulled out a pair of black turtle shell reading glasses and a cross word puzzle book. Naruto was busy staring at the earth get further and further away form them.

"Hahahah Sasuke! Look! I can't even see the cars!" Naruto looked like a kid in a candy store, how cute. His face was smashed into the reinforced plastic window, staring at the minimizing size of the earth. Naruto whipped around and did a double take, staring at Sasuke staring down at the book in his lap with his pen placed leisurely in his mouth. 'Holy Shit Fuck Damn' Naruto thought. Sasuke looked…..Sasuke looked incredibly sexy with glasses on….and that pen…that lucky pen. Sasuke absently noticed Naruto's bemused stare and started to push the pen further into his mouth, then pull it back out again, slowly. Naruto shuddered and forced a warm smile at the stewardess that walked by. Sasuke visibly wrapped his tongue around it and licked the tip, like he was deep in thought and didn’t know what he was doing.

When the seatbelt sign was turned off, Naruto unbuckled his seatbelt and stood, walking slowly to sit Indian style, in front of Sasuke, in-between his legs. Sasuke sat, scrunching his face up, seemingly engrossed in his crossword puzzle. Naruto raised his hands up and placed them on Sasuke's knees, massaging them in small circles, that started to grow in diameter. Sasuke looked up from his crossword at Naruto, when his hands got dangerously close to the goods.

"What are you doing?" Sasuke asked, looking down at the grinning blond.

"Loving you." Naruto said, still grinning. (!)

Sasuke's face softened, not into a smile but not a frown either. Naruto laid his arms limply on either side of Sasuke's thighs and laid his head between Sasuke's knees. Naruto's lips were pressed up against the side of Sasuke's bare knee, so he kissed it. The black basket ball shorts he wore, rode up a little from the position he was sitting in. Sasuke looked down at Naruto again and sighed in contentment.

"Was that a; dang-homeboy-get-off-me-and-let-me-do-my-damn-crossword-puzzle sigh?" Naruto asked.

Sasuke closed his book and set it back down in his carry on, pushing his glasses up to rest above his forehead.

"No. It was a; let's-go-in-the-bathroom-and-fuck-like-animals sigh." Sasuke said and Naruto gasped.

"The reincarnation of Cleo! You read my mind!"

Naruto got up and walked to and in the first class men's restroom and closed the door, not locking it so Sasuke wouldn't have to wait. Not too long after, Sasuke joined him in the conveniently larger plane bathroom. Sasuke locked the door and walked over to Naruto. Naruto grabbed Sasuke into a loving embrace and whispered in his ear kissing his neck.

"You know what you were doing out there……with that…pen(*)" Naruto said, as if he was jealous of said pen. And indeed he was! Sasuke nodded. "Do you enjoy teasing me?" Naruto asked, licking along Sasuke's pulse. Sasuke nodded, not knowing what the hell he was nodding to, more focused on Naruto's pierced tongue, and what it was doing. "Where you planning on doing that to me?" Naruto asked. Sasuke nodded once again lost, unaware that Naruto had unfastened his pants and pushed them down, along with his boxers, letting his hard tan erection breathe in the cooled plane air. "Then do it." Naruto said, pushing down on Sasuke's shoulders, guiding him down on his knees. Sasuke complied, kneeling in front of Naruto's cock and looking back up at Naruto's hooded eyes. "Suck it." Naruto said, nudging Sasuke's slightly parted lips, rubbing the head against smooth clean teeth. Sasuke darted his tongue out to lick the shiny pink head, then proceeded to wrap his mouth around it, easing more and more into his mouth. Naruto jerked his hips forward and Sasuke pushed as much more he could fit in there.

"That's it baby, t-take it all." Naruto said, mildly thrusting in Sasuke's slacken mouth. Sasuke pulled back, licking his lips and Naruto pouted.

"I don't really feel like sucking your dick right now, I want to fuck." Sasuke said, standing once more.

'Oh that's just as good.' Naruto thought.

"And I'll take, since you can't keep your mouth shut when you bottom." Sasuke said, turning around in the still cramped -but roomier than normal plane restrooms-space and uniting the drawstring of his shorts, pulling them and his boxers down.

"Shut up teme, at least I don't mewl and whimper, like you do!"

"Kiss my ass, dobe."

Naruto bent down and felt the pocket of his pants again and pulled out the small bottle of lube. Naruto stared at the perfectly pale ass in front of him and leaned forward. Sasuke looked back over his shoulder, scrunching up his face, slightly amused.

"What are you doing?"

Naruto kissed several times.

"Kissin' youuur ass." Naruto said, placing his palm and finger-tips, on the small of the Uchiha's back, pushing lightly for him to bend more. Naruto licked and sucked on a firm, powder colored globe and popped the cap of the lube open. He lubed up his fingers and cock and began to stretch his lover. After he and Sasuke thought he was stretched enough, he stood and positioned himself at the entrance. Before he pushed in, he pressed the head against the puckered hole, but didn't move. Sasuke snapped his head around and tried to push back, but Naruto went back with him.

"What the hell are you waiting on?" Sasuke asked irate.

"For you to beg me." Naruto said with a smirk.

Sasuke looked incredulous.

"What?"

"I kissed your ass like you asked me, so you beg, like I tell you." Naruto said, smiling at Sasuke's still bent over position. Sasuke sighed.

"*sigh*Please, Naruto."

"Oh, no, more enthusiasm. Did I just give your ass a measly little peck? No Iii didn't!" Naruto said the latter, in a superhero kind of voice, raising his index finger in the air.

Sasuke closed his eyes and tightened his fists on the counter he was leaned on, and sighed again.
"Naruto! Can you please, please fuck me?!" Sasuke tried to put as much enthusiasm in the question, as his pride would allow.

"My pleasure!" Naruto said, plunging in, making Sasuke's breath hitch when he slid in past the constricting ring of muscle.

"Ahh." Sasuke breathed out.

Naruto pulled back slowly, once he was all the way in and pushed back in just as slow. After he started a slow rhythm, he started to pick up speed. Sasuke reached on his forehead and pulled off his glasses.

"No, put em' on. They're crazy-hot." Naruto said, thrusting in particularly hard, which made Sasuke mewl in the process. Sasuke unfolded his glasses and slid them on his face again.

"There, happy?" Naruto nodded, licking his lips.

"Let me sit on the counter." Naruto said, pulling out of Sasuke, to hear him whimper. Naruto smiled at the noise and switched positions, then sitting on the counter/sink. Naruto scooted back all the way, until his back was flush with the mirror attached with the wall. Sasuke climbed onto the counter and wrapped his legs around Naruto's waist, lifting himself to allow Naruto to hold his cock steady. Sasuke linked his wrists together be hind Naruto's neck and slid down on Naruto's pulsing, hot member.

"Uhh, Fuck! You feel like you get bi-bigger ev-ry time." Sasuke said, fully seating himself and immediately lifting himself back up, just to slam back down, making Naruto's blunt, leaking head, hit his prostate dead on.
After too long Naruto's hands were on Sasuke's waist, while he bounced on Naruto's cock, fucking himself thoroughly. Naruto noticed the heavily fogged glasses and pushed them up above Sasuke's forehead.

"Ahh sshhhit. Fuck yourself, baby. Fuck yourself raw, on my hard dick." Naruto breathed out, which caused Sasuke to bounce faster and gyrate his hips in the process. Naruto let go of Sasuke's hip to grab a hold of Sasuke's furiously bobbing cock and pumped him as he fucked himself. Naruto took the top of the shaft between his middle and index finger, pressing the thumb down onto the slit, to smear the pre-cum around the magenta colored head.
"Ahh!! Ahh don't stop that. Do it again, do it again." Sasuke begged.

Naruto removed his other hand and used it to pump the base of the cock in front of him.

"You look so sexy on me Sasuke. Fuck yourself harder. Make me cum in your tight, sweet ass." He said, trying to coerce Sasuke into cumming.

"Ahh more, talk to me. Morre."

That's one thing about the quiet ones, their always the kinkiest.

"How does my thick cock feel in your tight ass Sasuke? Uhhahh..It feels so good to have your damp, hot walls, closed around my dick, move faster baby, faster." Naruto pressed down into the slit again and felt Sasuke's whole body tremor above him and felt hot wet semen, oozing through his fingers. Sasuke took the liberty to bounce quicker and harder to bring his fair haired lover to his release. Sasuke leaned forward and kissed Naruto senseless, still vigorously slamming his body down onto Naruto's hardened cock. Sasuke pulled back and licked his lips, pulling his hands up to reach into his inky black strands of hair, creating one of the most erotic scenes Naruto had ever seen. Naruto came, deep in his lover's body and let his head fall back against the mirror. Sasuke slumped forward and wrapped his arms around Naruto's waist while Naruto did the same.

Outside the stewardess that stopped at a mewling sound -thinking someone was in pain- had tissues stuffed up her nose and was on the verge of passing out.


Minutes went by and Sasuke and Naruto snuck back out of the restroom and back into their seats. Naruto felt naked without being by Sasuke after mind-blowing sex, so he un buckled his seatbelt and stood in front of Sasuke, then sat, straddling his lap and leaning forward to fall asleep against him, while Sasuke wrapped his arms around his waist possessively. Those stewardesses were looking mighty rabid.

Wlihe they slept peacefully, a stewardess walked by, but didn't want to wake Sasuke or Naruto unless it was necessary and she knew Sasuke would be quite annoyed if she woke him for food, so she just went back through that little blue curtain and sat.


15 minutes before the plane landed Sasuke awoke to a stewardess shaking him telling him; Naruto had to get in his own seat for the landing. After an icy death-glare, Sasuke kissed Naruto awake. Naruto sat back and rubbed his eyes cutely.

"You have to get back in your own seat, baby." Sasuke said. 'Damn, he's rubbing off on me.' "We're about to land."

Naruto nodded and climbed off of Sasuke after a quick kiss and walked back over to his seat, buckling in. THEN THEY HIT SOME HARDCORE TURBULANCE AND WENT CRASHING DOWN TO THE FIRY DEPTHS OF HELL! Just joking...(it's late and I'm tired)


After they landed and un-boarded the plane they walked through the airport to baggage claim, to claim their bags and head out. They arrived in L.A. so they had a few hours to drive to get to SanDiego. They waited for their Rent-A-Car to show up so they could get on the road. When it arrived, they loaded their bags into the luxurious, silver Mercedes Benz, climbing in, oblivious to the glinting pair of eyes that were on them.

TBC


(!) Oh! How romantic! I wish someone'd say that to me…*gets depressed*
(*) Why is Naruto hatin' on a pen?

Well there goes…I've been REEEEALLY busy donating money to charities, cleaning up the world and helping old people across the street and barely had time to write anything....Lie.....The truth is…..i been lazy…I've been beta-ing 2 stories, writing two new stories and working….Gahh!! I'm so worn out…but I'll keep it up for the ones I love. WHICH IS YOU!
Thanks for reading!!! Please Review and Rate/Vote!!!!!! I love to hear what you guys have to say…I'm starting to get a touch of writers block so suggestions will be openly welcomed!!!!!!!
JA!