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Mr. Right

By: ringpop
folder Naruto › Yaoi - Male/Male
Rating: Adult ++
Chapters: 21
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Disclaimer: I do not own Naruto, nor any of the characters from it. I do not make any money from the writing of this story.
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Chapter 15

Alright yall, I'll hook you up with a longer chapter....It seems like they have been getting shorter and shorter. Oh! Can't forget. If you're not down with the Uchihacest then I'll for-warn you that there's a flashback that's pretty uhh....detailed?... But first! *kisses on the nose* The reviews.

ON WITH HE REVIEWS!

Dragon, Tsuki The Moon, Reno's_Lover, Akiru chan, XoXgaaraXoX, Nickles, Mistress_Tsukiko and Rei- Hehe Thanks!!

MissMayumi- "eek! You scared me at first, when you called me a dirty whore!(You are, you cock sucker.) I thought you were saying you hated me!I was like noo!" You called me a fucking loser you horse shit! That's like calling Naruto 'dobe'! He hates being called 'dobe', I hate being called a 'loser'....BECAUSE I'M NOT!!!! (For all you new comers to my fic....by now I'm sure my readers know how I am by now((and if not, now you do)) that I'm all fun'n games, and just joshin' around.)

"you don't really want me to die do you!(Hmm...nahh) Now MissMayumi is sad...but at least you still love me.." Do I MissMayumi? Do I still love you? *dramatic pause*...Of course I do!

Black-Diamond- "hahaha i luff you! *glomps and kisses* xD to tell u the truth im black =](*blood curtling scream*....Why do the black people always lik me....) i guess i act white hahaha!!!!(THEN YOU ARE ACCEPTABLE!! me too...I'm like 1% away from being white.....I think it's the hip-hop I listen to that's that one percent.) saldy im not lol ur gonna sprinkle ur wifey's ashes on ur dog's food and it will shiit me out when it eats me!?(only unless you say the while thing!) =[ Ill make sure i wont say "nigga" lol..wait r u... black too!?(Umm...you haven't noticed.....*sigh* didn't i mention the fact that I was black like 50 times......Chapter 2, in Naruto's bedroom where Sasuke catches him singin on the bed...) =O OK!! =] i luffed the chappie!!(thanks....why don't you speak properly and say 'loved' or 'sex'?) *hugs* woohoo HOOTT bathroom on an airplane smex!! That must be a really tricked out plane cuz daym...peps cant rele have smex on a reg. airplane bathroom lmao!!!(I know right?! I was just on a plane like a couple weeks ago and I could barely wipe ma' damn butt! lmao!)UPDATE WHEN U CAN my wifey or hubby!(Not hubby foo!) xD l luffed the chappie and you!!(ilu2) *glomps* =] (Uh-oh.*looks around panicking, with five kids in-hand*...where's Ray-Ray Jaquay? Did we pick up Laquanda, Shaquitasia, Derronisopher and Shauntae up from daycare? I left Lexus, Diamond, Porchia and Morgage at my moms house...((Isn't it true some ghetto people name their kids after things they can't afford? Lmao...next thing you know we gon have a baby named Lamborghini ahhaha!)) ....No I'm not racist....how can I be racist against my own people....)

wickedwiccanofthemiddwest- " *starts conga line with other reviews* there was a new chapta, there was a new chapta, there was a new chapta, ai ai ai. *stops conga line* what elese can we conga to? *random reviewer whispers in ear* Oh yea thats good. *starts conga line up again* they joined mile high club, they joined the mile high club, they joined the mile high club, Ai ai ai.(: ]) Ok what to do now... Oh yea *hops in to airport with a louisville slugger* Hey brunette bimbo. *brunette looks* take this *smashes bat into stomic,* never *hits smashes bat on back and she falls to the floor,* ever *kicks in ribs* interrupt yoai goodness again *kicks in face.* Or else you'll never live to see the old whore's homecapche! *steps back to computer* (Holy crap dude, you're brutal if you don't get your daily dosage of yaoi, ne? She didn't even interrupt....if anything, she fueled it!) sorry about that just had to teach someone a lesson lol. OK now to the serious part of the review. I know you may get tired of me saying the same thing but another great chapter(Nope, never will) and i cant wait to see what fun they have in LA. SO please hurry and update *puts on puppy dog face* (Are you 25 years old?)"

jess249- " i thinck the pen is more jealous, naruo!(Heheh) "THEN THEY HIT SOME HARDCORE TURBULANCE AND WENT CRASHING DOWN TO THE FIRY DEPTHS OF HELL!" haha! lmao!(Hahahah! I thought that was fairly funny. You're like the only one who laughed at that. I like you *puts on favorite reviewers list*)

SasuNaru7- "*drools buckets* airplane bathroom sex!! w00t. i wish i was that stewardess!!(I wish I was the fucking toilet paper so I could sit there and watch!) xD i cannot wait for the next chapter! a chapter, just for me?(Yeah...It took some work....*wipes sweat off forehead*.....*changes channel and eats a chip*) *gasp* you're the best. *hug* Sasuke gets to be seme once again!(Oh yeahh!!...wait...kind of?...I hope it's good enough for you.) yay. i'm so excited!

hisoka kurosaki- "thats cute,that of been so curistewertest shouldnt ous of sounds in a bathroom you hear something odd you dont go check it out like the stupid girls in the movies you eather get someone else to check with you/for you or you walk away like you didnt hear anything,who knows maybe next time it will be an alien or pretitor er sumthin'.(What.The.Fuck Did you just say?? Haha I think I know what you're saying... like-this always got to me- in scary movies where there's like 2 girls and a killer and they get split up & one of 'em heard a noise and walks towards it like..."Susan?....Susan, is that you? I'm going to walk in this dark room without anything to defend myself okay?" LMAO!!!) suigetsu was watchin them at the end wasnt he(Huh..I didn't hear that last question...ANYWHOO!) damn kiba for puttin out other peoples buisness like that.
continue ne"

Lihrah- " God, Sasu-chan is such a little whore.(You haven't seen the half of it...sooo sexxy!) Heehee! I was right! I am PSYCHIC! BOOYAH! When I was reading the scene where they were sitting in the airport and Sasuke kisses Naruto, a random thought popped into my head and I said it aloud: "They're going to join the Mile High Club." I WAS RIGHT! YAY! You took my suggestion about Naruto rubbing off on Sasu! I feel special!(Yeah?) Fuck, man, that lemon was some serious hot shit. Like, seriously. (YOU HAVN'T SEEN THE FULL POWER OF MY LEMONS UNTIL YOU SCROLL DOWN! WOO!)God save the lazy bastards and bitches like us!(4 real) I still haven't updated my story and it's almost been two months! Eh...heheh... -sweatdrop- Oh my, You have the image of Sasu in glasses with a pen in his mouth stuck in my head. I might just end up drawing him.(I'd love you eternally..((if you can actually draw draw...& not one of those scriblies)) If I do, obviously I'll let you know! But don't expect anything!(I know...don't get hopes up..that's why I never make promises....kuz i be to lazy to hold up my end of the bargain aaaaaaahhahhahahhahah!) You keep writing, and you keep liviong! Simple as dat! HAH! (: ]) really think I might be slightly insane. As for msn, nooo not really, but I do have AIM. It's tnvr600 but random as to when I'm on. LOVE YA!(love u 2!!) LIKE, FO' SHO'!!(I'm not a gangster....i don't use that kind of speech.....SUKKUHH!)~Lihrah Dammit, YOU'RE rubbing off on ME!!"

sasunaruluv- " OMG... loved this chapter...(: ]) i was actually wondering if people could do it on a plain earlier today(So was I!! I wasn't even gonna put sex in there but I was like....hmmm.) so it was REALLY coicidental that u could apprently(Only in my nonexistent 'large' first class bathroom hahha those are small too lmao.) lol.write more soon!..."(Done!)

ChrissyCrimson- " That's one thing about the quiet ones, their always the kinkiest. LOL that explains alot about me...i'm uh ..pretty quiet myself.(Hahaha!) Anywho...Great new chapter, as always.(Domo) I really like how Sasuke and Naruto dont want to keep their relationship a secret and give major public displays of affection ;)(Me too)

Raaaaiiiii~- " I love your story so much! I stayed up all night read it just as I was going to bed.(Fabulous) ._.; But anyways, that story you are talking about is called "Tranquil Blue"(I know haha you and a million other people knew. Thanx) . Very good story, I might add.(Domo) If you want, you can search "Raikari-hime"(Okay!) under authors on FF.net, and you'll find me!(......*laziness kicks in*....Uhh..y'know what...why don't you just e-mail me : ]) *headbangs to Shiina Ringo music* ~Raiii"

Chria- " I love you too for working so hard on this!(XD) I'm thinking they go to the beach and hop on jetskis and chaos ensues!(?) Because the thought of either Sasuke or Naruto busting their ass out there has me cracking up.(Busting asses has no sex in it....so therefore....no jet skis.) heh Sex in the ocean sounds pretty hot too.(Eww....in freaking whale pee and salt water....sick!) drools....."

Trigger Happy Bitch- " Naruto pen envy...that's funny. Why do all the good ones have to be gay?(Eh?) *sniffle* Naru so cute when flustered (Hehehe I know)OMFG I"M STARTING TO SOUND LIKE SASUKE! *mental break down* Mimi: Might as well. AIRPLANE SEX! YEA NOT MANY OF THOSE! Me: rabid bunnies rabid bunnies(o_O) Mimi: Update soon please. Me: rabid chocolate stealing bunnies. Mimi:Psyche ward!(I agree Mimi : ])

Belovedlovex2- " "You look so sexy on me Sasuke. Fuck yourself harder. Make me cum in your tight, sweet ass." that was my favorite part.(Yeah I loved that part too) i read it out loud again with my friend next to me.(Do you fucking have story time reading yaoi?!) again she was laughing her ass off.(What's so funny about it? ...It's hot.) and may i ask if you are male or female cause i would like to know who i am marrying.(*sweatdrop*.....you can't tell by now?............I'm a girl) can't wait for the next chappie so keep it up!"


ON WITH THE FIC!!


“Speech”
Thoughts
Speech/Thoughts or Whisper
*noise/action *
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They were an hour into their traveling time to SanDiego, driving silently, both in their own little worlds. Naruto lay back in the reclined passenger's seat, with his shirt rode up and a large hand on his stomach; playing with the green bead on his naval that matched his green t-shirt, absently looking at the ceiling of the car. Sasuke sat straight up, driving, thinking about what awaits them in SanDiego. Sasuke was pulled from his thoughts when he heard noises.....What is that?

"La. La. La-la. L-la." (!)

It was Naruto.

Sasuke made a what-the-hell face, raising a brow.

"What are you doing, dobe?" Sasuke asked and Naruto frowned, whipping his head over, to look at the sexy brunette.

"I'm not a dobe when you wanna' have sex." Naruto said, daring Sasuke to say anything.

Sasuke kind of got a contemplative look on his face and cocked his head to the side, as if he was debating something in his head.

"Nnn-nahh, you're still a dobe." Sasuke said, nodding his head and Naruto rolled his eyes.

"Well then, you're still a teme then." Sasuke shrugged his shoulders.

Naruto reached over and squeezed Sasuke's cock hard, which resulted in Sasuke being startled and jerking the car.

"What the hell, you idiot!? Why did you do that?!" Sasuke asked hysterically and Naruto just shrugged his shoulders. Sasuke looked back and fourth at Naruto and the road. "What do you mean *over exaggeration of Naruto's shrug*?!" Naruto chuckled.

"Now you see how I feel, teme. I've gotta' deal with your fucking sign language, grunts, and glares!"

Sasuke rolled his eyes and mildly shook his head, taking in a breath.

"Do you want me to be like 'HI NARUTO-DANA!!! *SMILE*'" Sasuke cocked his head to the side, throwing up the 'victory' sign and strained the biggest smile he could muster, so big, that his teeth took up most of his face and his eyeballs couldn't be seen, due to the fact that his cheeks were forcing his eyes practically closed. Naruto's mind was going over a million things at once. 'Mmmm.....Naruto-Dana....I like that....'ts got a little ring to it....Ooo baby, why don't you smile all the time?...Who whould'a knew a smile could get you hard....Sasuke's got some hella straight teeth....I'd laugh my ass off if he used to wear braces......Ramen....Dattebayo.' By time Naruto broke out of his thoughts, Sasuke was driving, glaring at the road.

"I grabbed your 'gonads' because their mine. I just felt like touching you is all." Naruto said simply and Sasuke looked over at Naruto a little shocked/confused/startled.

"So you're just going to go 'Hey! Penis!' and grab my jewels in public just because you want to?!"
Naruto shrugged.

"We're not in public, and besides, if I wanted to, yes, I would! You're mine right?! You're my property, am I wrong?" Naruto started to get a little agitated at Sasuke's attitude and straightened his chair to get on Sasuke's level.

"Yes, but that doesn't mean you can just feel me up in the middle of nowhere!"

"Well if you're my property, what do you do with your property?! You don't just let it sit there & be worthless! You use it, and take care of it and stuff! So in this case, if I wanna' touch my property, Imma' touch my property!"

"You sound like I'm a house or some land or something! What are you even talking about?!"

"I'm talking about YOU, MY PROPERTY! MY BITCH!"

Sasuke's eyes widened. Naruto could see shock, pain and a flash of lust flit though Sasuke's widened eyes. Naruto gasped.

"Sasuke.....Sasuke I didn't mean it like that....It's just..." Naruto trailed off, wanting to voice the reason he was making such a big deal over this, but didn't want to get into it with him.

"It's just what?!" Sasuke pushed.

Naruto sat back in his chair and looked out the window, frustrated and upset.

"Nothing, don't worry about it."

Sasuke was starting to lose his temper, something he hadn't lost in a while.

"Naruto." Sasuke growled warningly. "I've forgiven you under many circumstances, the least you can do, is answer me." Sasuke said angrily.

Naruto turned and looked at Sasuke with narrowed eyes.

"See? That! That's why I'm going off! You always think you're the boss! 'Listen to me because I'm some spoiled rich kid, whose parents *quote*'mysteriously'*unquote* died!' You always have to be in charge! Even during sex! I practically have to rip your dick off in order to get control of a damn kiss! Plus, EACH time we've had sex, you ALWAYS have to be on top, some way or another! Even if you fucking bottom! That's probably why you didn't feel like sucking my dick on the plane!" Naruto shouted.

"So this is what this is all about? Sex?" Sasuke asked, his anger rising.

"Not entirely..." Naruto said, his voice calmer. Naruto paused for a while to let the excitement die down a bit first. "Sasuke, you don't understand.....The second day after we met, do you remember what I told you in the car, in front of Sai's house?" Naruto asked, his blue eyes emanating with frustration and pain.

Sasuke kept his eyes on the road....'You're the closest thing I've ever had to a best friend Sasuke.' Naruto's voice replayed in his mind. Sasuke shook his voice out of his head. "You said a lot of things." Sasuke said.

"I told you that I'm a self-conscious person....I told you that I don't think even half the people I know want to be my friend for who I am. Remember?" Sasuke nodded. "So do you know what you're always wanting to be on top does to my self-esteem?" Naruto made the sound of a missile falling and exploding, raising his hand in the air, then smashing it into the palm of the other. "It makes me feel like I can never be in control of anything...I mean don't get me wrong, being uke for you felt really....and I mean really good, but I'd like to be the full-on seme for once.." Naruto sighed and reclined his chair once more, turning his body away from the driving Uchiha and closing his eyes.

Silence.

"Fine." Said Sasuke.

After a few moments, Naruto rolled back over, looking up at Sasuke.

"Fine, what?"

"If you want to make me your bitch and be seme, you can." Sasuke said sarcastically, but truthfully.

Naruto's eyes twinkled with mirth.

"Reeeallyy??!" Naruto asked like Sponge Bob, with a smile and Sasuke nodded.

"But I also have something to say about our past sex. I've bottomed every single time, except in the hotel yesterday morning." Sasuke said, as a mater of fact.

Naruto nodded.

"True....I'll tell you what. You can be seme the next time we have sex and I'll be seme after you. But so we both get what we want, I'll be on top, even if I bottom, if you know what ah meean?!" Naruto asked, wiggling his eyebrows and grinning.

Sasuke nodded.

"Fair."


The next thirty minutes were driven in silence, before Naruto said something else.

"When I'm seme, can we try the slave/master thing?...Then I'll really be in control." Naruto said the latter in a mumble and got a 'look', thinking of all the odd positions he could put his sexy bitch in and make him perform ridiculous sexual acts on his body.

Sasuke scrunched his face together.

"What? You mean like whip me and tie me up and shit?" Sasuke rarely cursed, only when he was really pissed, or really shocked.

Naruto shook his head.

"NO! I'd never hurt you intentionally! Unless you cheated....Then it'd be game time. But I mean...Ahhdunno...Like maybe the tying up thing, but I wouldn't want to whip you....I really don't see how that turns people on..."

Oh, Sasuke begged to differ.

Sasuke lay, chained to his brother's bed, only by his wrists, while his parents were gone for the night...again. He was fully undressed and waiting for the action to begin, as usual. Sasuke was blindfolded and could only hear the sound of his brother shedding himself of his clothing and.....wait.....there are two people?!....Suigetsu. Sasuke frowned underneath the blindfold, but gasped when the touch of his brother's familiar hands, rubbing, starting at his ankles and working his way up to mid thigh, got him to forget all about Suigetsu's...partially unwanted presence. Sasuke felt his brother's warm breath at his genitals and felt a tongue dart out and lick from his sack, to his puckered hole and circle it before pushing in. Sasuke moaned and felt the other body climb over top him, but turned the opposite way. Sasuke now felt the duel sensations of a tongue stretching his ass and a tongue licking at his dick. Sasuke opened his mouth to moan and felt a drop of moisture on his top lip, so he licked at it, to discover that it was a drop of pre-cum. He leaned his head up and stuck his tongue out to lick at the leaking cock above his mouth and Suigetsu moaned around his cock. So now he felt a hot mouth moaning around him, a hard dick in his mouth and three fingers stretching his ass, brushing against his prostate. Sasuke let his head fall back and screamed.

"Shit!"

Suigetsu jerked his hips down to force his cock back into Sasuke's mouth, while he sucked him off and Itachi positioned himself at Sasuke's properly stretched hole. Itachi stared at the sight of his chained up little brother, sucking cock and getting his cock sucked. This is by far the most erotic thing he had ever seen in his live. He plunged through the constriction of tight muscle and waited for his brother to adjust. After too long, Sasuke jerked his hips in affirmation for him to continue and he pulled back slowly and pushed in, relishing in the sight of his fucking beautiful brother and the feeling of his fucking equally beautiful tight ass, around his cock. This was Sasuke's first time. Itachi wanted to let Sasuke learn about gay sex before they had it, so he would always have sex with Suigetsu as a lesson and made Sasuke watch. Itachi set a slow rhythm, just feeling each ripple of muscle in his little brother's ass, against his hard, jumping, cock. Sasuke clenched his ass muscles for Itachi to speed up the pace, so he did. Suigetsu was like a pro at deep-throating. Since he'd practiced so much on Itachi's monster cock, gag reflexes were practically foreign to him. Suigetsu pulled up on Sasuke's cock when he sensed that he was about to cum -he could never hold out for long- and plunged back down all the way until his nose was touching the top of Sasuke's balls and he stuck his tongue out, massaging the base and making swallowing motions with the back of his throat. By now Suigetsu was pushing his hips up and down, forcing his cock deeper in Sasuke's mouth, while Sasuke did the same and Itachi thrust into Sasuke continuously. Suigetsu came into Sasuke's mouth, rolling off of him and Sasuke swallowed it all so quickly, just to yell at his brother;

"ITACHI FUCK ME! FUCK ME HARD!"

Itachi pushed Sasuke's legs open and against his(Sasuke's) chest, as he placed his hands on Sasuke's knees pushing them down and open, bending Sasuke into and odd position where his chin almost touched his chest and his knees were almost at his shoulders, for Itachi to plunge in deeper, and deeper did he go. Suigetsu recovered from his orgasm and picked up a small thing that kind of looked like a leather fly swatter(#) and started popping it down on Sasuke's chest and biceps, moving around to pop him on his thighs. Itachi brutally rammed Sasuke into the mattress and heard his brother cry out in pleasure.

"SUIGETSU, DO IT HARDER!"

Sasuke learned to love the small stings of pain while having sex.....it was oddly arousing. Sasuke felt like he was about to explode with pleasure, from Itachi's cock working him so wonderfully and Suigetsu hitting him with just enough force to bring pleasure, but not enough to cancel the pleasure out with pain.

"OH FUCK ITACHI! YOUR COCK IS SO HUGE!!*gasp* FUCK ME!! FUCK ME RAW!!"

That was it. That was all Itachi had to hear and he was cumming vigorously into the extremely constricted passage of his fourteen year old brother.

"Oh Shit, Sa-suke!!" Itachi half yelled, half moaned.


"So you mean bondage?" Sasuke had to speak before ge got a full-on stiffy. And stiffy, plus driving, plus eternally horny boyfriend? Equals car crash.

Naruto nodded.

"Y-yeah, I guess."

Sasuke smiled at Naruto's sudden shyness.

"If you're going to be my 'master', you can't smile like a little girl. You have to be ruthless and ridged." Sasuke was secretly coaching Naruto how to be dominate. Although Sasuke liked being on top, he had a secret love for bottoming. Naruto suddenly slapped Sasuke on the face, hard.

"Shut up, bitch!" Naruto said seriously, then a wide toothed smile spread out over his face, as if to ask how he did.

The last thing he saw, was five pale knuckles headed straight for his nose.


Naruto awoke in another nicely decorated hotel suite and sat up, rubbing his eyes. His hand brushed over the bridge of his nose and he hissed. 'What the fuck?' Naruto thought, standing to go and find a mirror. He walked into the bathroom and switched on the light, looking at his reflection......Oh yeah, Sasuke punched him. There wasn't much bruising, because he was an unusually fast healer, but there was some slight discoloration, nothing too serious though, he'd be back to normal in a few hours.
Naruto walked out into the living room of the suite and began looking for his feisty boyfriend.

"Sasuke......Sasuke!" Naruto called out.

He walked around the suite and noticed a medium sized refrigerator. 'Maybe there's some ice in here.' Naruto thought. He pulled open the freezer... AND SAW HIS FATHER'S...s DECAPITATED HEAD...s!! (once again, It's late and I'm tired..)

"Just my luck!" Naruto said, slamming the freezer shut. "Fucking freezer with no ice in it." Naruto said, walking over to a little round table with a little note attached to a vase of freshly cut flowers in the center. Naruto plucked the note from the flowers and read silently.


Naru-koi,
Sorry I punched you. It was....reflex.

At this, Naruto 'Tch'ed
Anyways, I was unpacking some of our stuff and noticed your ipod stereo.
Why did you bring it? It's just more junk to carry around dobe
I said to pack only the 'essentials'.....but knowing you I should have been more specific
Well, not only did I go out to get you some ice for your nose, but I went to pick us up some food, since we didn't eat on the plane.......Well you didn't : )
Be back soon.
Love you
♥Sasuke


Naruto flipped the note over and picked up the pen Sasuke used to write his note.

Baby,
That's a load of crap!
Reflexes my ass!
And the stereo IS essential...you'll see
Anywho! I'm goin' to the stow' to buy some....stuff
So don't trip when you come home to an empty suite
It's payback for making me wake up to one
Alright, I'll see ya
Aishiteru mitsukai!
♥Narutoo-ooooo! X P


Naruto reattached the note to the vase of flowers and head out of the suite. He took the elevator down to the lobby and walked through it confidently. He was so focused on what he was going to buy at the store, that he didn't even notice the pair of soft violet eyes watching his every stride. Naruto stepped out of the dimly lit hotel lobby, out into the dark cool night of SanDiego California. Naruto took a deep breath. 'Man I missed this place....' Naruto thought, starting to walk to the closest convenient store, what he had to buy would most defiantly be there. Naruto walked along the sidewalk with his fingers locked behind his head, his shirt was tight-fit -like majority of his shirts were- and it rode up, to display a small patch of tan abs and his belly ring. Yeah, L.A may be gay capital, but SanDiego wasn't Hetro Metro itself. Naruto kept hearing guys and girls cat calling and telling him he was hot, while walking by.....'Damn these people have no shame! Naruto chuckled. So when a particularly handsome guy told him he was hot, he closed his eyes in a vulpine smile, stuck his crazy-long tongue out and threw up the 'victory' sign. The guy with a silvery-lilac hair color smiled the same smile, minus the tongue and added some ridiculously sharp teeth. Naruto flinched at the sight of the oddly familiar sight of teeth. 'Heh...Must be Kiba. He noted that the guy that had passed him was very attractive.......but not nearly as attractive as his baby-cakes...'Sasuke would kill me if I called him that.' Naruto chuckled.

Naruto walked into the convenient store and greeted the cashier. He walked over to where the things that are refrigerated are and pulled open the door. 'I'll make Sasuke's seme session as sexy as I can tonight.' Naruto thought to himself amused. Naruto gathered up all his items, and threw in a tube of strawberry flavored lube while he was at it. The clerk asked if Naruto was buying all his items to make a Sundae until she saw the lube and the other items, letting her know it was something else and smiled. She picked up one of the items and raised her hand up for a high-five. This guy's awesome. I'd love to see how this night's going to turn out.' The clerk thought. Naruto blushed a little and smiled, high-fiving, then scratching the back of his neck. After Naruto paid for his groceries, she wished him to have fun and he quickly exited the store to head back down the same path he came, until he was back at the hotel. He went to the front desk and asked one of the women working, for one of those little ice buckets, that she gladly gave him. He also requested a person to act as a distraction for him; he wrote a note for the person and their quickest repair/maintenance men, up at his room when he called down in a bit...Naruto had a plan. She nodded and he walked to the elevator. He rode the elevator up to his floor and went to his room. He pulled his key-card out of his back pocket and opened the door, stepping in he noticed that Sasuke must've taken a shower already. 'Good' Naruto thought. He walked in further to see Sasuke on the bed, once again, lost in concentration of the clues for the crossword puzzle....WITH THAT DAMN PEN!! Naruto walked over to Sasuke and slapped the pen out of his mouth. Sasuke looked up at Naruto like 'what the hell' and Naruto bent down to give him a 'hello' kiss on the nose. Sasuke half-smiled up at Naruto and pointed at the bag of take out on the table. Naruto looked at it and shrugged his shoulders.

"I'mma go take a shower, kay?"

Sasuke looked back up at Naruto.

"You didn't even eat dinner yet."

"We don't have parents, so we don't have to eat our dinner before dessert."

With that Naruto turned and disappeared into the bathroom to take a shower, leaving a confused Sasuke. A few seconds later Naruto popped his head around the corner again.

"Hey, when you hear the shower cut off, can you go fill that little bucket up with some ice, please?" Naruto asked and Sasuke nodded.

Naruto stepped back into the bathroom and started to shower, excited about his plan...Every thing was running smoothly.


When Sasuke heard the shower stop, he got up off the bed and grabbed the little beige-colored ice bucket off the nightstand and left the room. When Naruto heard the door shut, he slipped out of the bathroom and set up.


Sasuke walked down the long hall and filled the bucket up with ice, like his dobe asked and started heading back to his room when he passed a boy that looked about his age with pale skin, black hair with bright blue at the tips and dark brown eyes. The boy stopped Sasuke.

"Hey, are you Sasuke Uchiha?" The boy asked.

Sasuke furrowed his brows, wondering how this boy knew his name. He was so concerned by his knowledge of him, that he didn't notice the people rushing into his room. Sasuke nodded.

"Yeah. Who am I to you?"

'Man, the guy who wrote this paper, knew exactly what his friend was gonna' say.' The boy thought. "I saw an article in the paper about your family.....I-I'm sorry."

Sasuke frowned and was about to continue walking, before the boy started talking again.

"Y'know...................................................................................."

Sasuke looked at the boy like 'Hello? Y'know, what?'

"My........my parents died too."

Sasuke pulled his lips into a thin line.

"I'm sorry to hear that, goodnight." Sasuke said, turning, but then he felt a hand on his shoulder.

"No! Wait!.....uhh..His friend didn't put anything after my parents died too....idiot. I thought.....Maybe we could kind of connect, y'know, since both our families died 'n all." They boy said, smiling and giving Sasuke's shoulder a small squeeze. Sasuke frowned and looked at the hand on his shoulder, lifting a hand up and plucking the hand off him.

"I already have a boyfriend, thank you." Sasuke said, ready to leave, but once again was stopped by the boy. Sasuke turned around irritated. "What the hell do you want?!" Sasuke yelled.

The boy looked nervous. When he saw the people leaving the suite, he turned and walked away. Sasuke stared wide eyed at the stranger's retreating back. 'What the fuck?!..............SanDiego's got some weird people.' Sasuke thought to himself, turning and walking back to his room, pulling out his key card. He opened the door, walking into darkness. 'What? Did he go to sleep?'

"Naruto, are you sleep?" Sasuke asked into the darkness.

"Come here Sasuke." Naruto said, demandingly.

Sasuke shook his head and tried to flip on the light. As soon as he did the lights flashed on, but they weren't your average florescent white. Instantly the beginning of TLC's Red Light Special started to play......the lights were red.

Sasuke stepped further into the room and stood there looking stupid, at Naruto kneeling on the bed, with his cock fully erect and swaying his hips from side-to-side. As the lyrics began, he started to touch himself sultrily.

Take a good look at it
Look at it now
Might be the last time you'll
Have a go round
I'll let you touch it if you'd
Like to go down
Naruto trailed his hands down to his cock and rubbed suggestively, then beckoned Sasuke over to the bed. When he got there he pulled Sasuke down with him onto the bed and began a lustrous kiss.
I'll let you go further
If you take the southern route
Sasuke began to feel all over Naruto's damp skin, still kissing. Naruto broke the kiss to pull off Sasuke's shirt, while he slipped out of his nighty pants....he conveniently wasn't wearing any boxers.
Don't go too fast
Don't go too slow
You've got to let your body flow
I like 'em attentive
And I like 'em in control

"Baby it's yours
All yours
If you want it tonight
I'll give you the red light special
All through the night"
Naruto whispered in Sasuke's ear and Sasuke kissed him harder. Naruto flipped them over, closer to the nightstand and reached out, putting, then pouring something into his mouth.
Baby it's yours
All yours
If you want it tonight
Just come through my door
Take off my clothes
And turn on the red light

I know that you want me I can
See it in your eyes
Naruto trailed down the Uchiha's taught abdomen, with a cold tongue and finally made it to the proudly standing pale cock, that belonged to Sasuke.
You might as well be honest 'cause the
Body never lies
Naruto stuck his cold tongue out and licked at the head, then took in a little more. Sasuke shivered at the unusual coldness, but the sensation of Naruto's cool mouth was incredibly pleasurable.
Tell me your secrets and I'll
I'll tell you mine
I'm feelin' quite sexy
Sasuke was enjoying the feeling of Naruto's cool mouth around his cock, when he felt something slimy, cold and bumpy on his cock head, but it wasn't Naruto's tongue. Sasuke looked down confused at Naruto and he opened his mouth to reveal a partially frozen strawberry on his tongue. Sasuke almost came at the thought of Naruto sucking him off with frozen strawberries.
And I want you for tonight
If I move too fast just let me know
'Cause it means you move too slow
I like some excitement
And I like a man that goes

Baby it's yours
All yours
Naruto bobbed his head up and down and made sure to swish around the strawberries and liquid he poured into his mouth. Pulling up, and then going alll the way back down.
If you want it tonight
I'll give you the red light special
All through the night
Baby it's yours
Naruto pulled back and swallowed everything that was in his mouth, climbing up and rolling them back into their original position.
All yours
If you want it tonight
Just come through my door
Naruto looked up into Sasuke's eyes.
Take off my clothes

"Fuck me."

And turn on the red light Sasuke picked up the ipod stereo remote and cut off the music, throwing the remote somewhere away from them. Sasuke damned the fact that he had to waste time preparing Naruto and lubing both of them up. Naruto cut off Sasuke's fact damning with his voice.

"Just go." Was all Naruto said, but Sasuke was a little hesitant. He didn't want to hurt him. "I said-"Naruto pulled Sasuke's hips forward, forcing the tip of his cock into him."-just go." Naruto moaned the latter. Sasuke was shocked....Naruto pre-stretched himself?! And....his cock slid in so easily, how....that liquid....was lube? Naruto reached up to feel Sasuke's chest, running his fingertips and palms over his hard nipples, reaching up to grip broad, pale shoulders. Sasuke pulled out slowly and pushed back in just as slow. He thought he'd go along with the song and pull an all nighter. Naruto moaned, digging his nails into Sasuke's shoulders. "Deeper." Naruto breathed out his thoughts. Sasuke pushed into Naruto as far as human anatomy would allow and pulled out continuously, for what felt like blissful hours, hours of hearing himself moaning, smelling their passion-filled sex, feeling a long hard cock thrust into him and tasting strawberries, both real and concentrate, with a mix of pre-cum. Bliss, pure bliss. And if it couldn't have gotten any better, he heard Sasuke speak two simple words that had him almost turning this red light special, into an eight sided stop sign, by cumming.

"Ride me." Sasuke said huskily.

Sasuke pulled out and rolled over, to lay flat on his back, watching Naruto's well-built body climb over his, and straddle his hips. Naruto reached, down, behind himself, grabbing Sasuke's cock with three fingers and keeping it in position. Naruto slid down on Sasuke's jumping cock slowly, just to tease him. When he was fully seated, he ground down and rotated his hips twice, sensually, before lifting up and grinding back down. Naruto's grinding caused extra pleasant friction. Sasuke wanted this to be just as slow and sensual as Naruto did, but Naruto didn't have his cock shoved up the hottest ass he'd ever seen in his life.

"I know you want to take this slow, but since you'll be seme next time and I'm seme now, I want you to be wild."

Naruto smiled and leaned forward to give Sasuke a strawberry flavored kiss. Sasuke moaned, feeling Naruto lift and drop his hips, still kissing him at the same time. Naruto pulled back and started bouncing on Sasuke's cock vigorously. Naruto placed his hands on his thighs and threw his head back, bouncing hedonistically, gyrating his hips in small circles going down and abruptly pulling back up. Sasuke gripped Naruto's hips, helping lift and drop his body onto him roughly, as he thrust his hips up into Naruto's tight heat, hitting his prostate harshly.
"Ohh baby, fuck me!" Naruto yelled, not caring who heard.

"N-Naruto! Ride me hard!"

"I am!" Naruto said earnestly.

"Harder!" Sasuke demanded.

Naruto did his best to ride Sasuke harder than he currently was. Naruto leaned forward, bracing his hands on Sasuke's chest and moving his hips up and down as quick as he could on Sasuke's cock. Sasuke sat up and pushed Naruto to lay on his back and he gripped right below Naruto's ribcage and pounded into Naruto monstrously.

"A-a-ahh SH-IT! SAS-'KAY!! Mm-m! BA-BY! BA-BY! BA-BY!"

Sasuke changed angles and Naruto squealed with joy.

"OH GOD SAS-'KAY! YOUR COCK IS A BEAST!! FUCK ME! FUCK ME!"

With one final 'Fuck me', Naruto came, clamping his innards down on Sasuke's girth and squeezing the orgasm out of him. Sasuke had been more exhausted then he'd ever been in his whole life and collapsed down onto Naruto pulling out of him in the process.

"Oh. My. God." Naruto said, out of breath. "You can ALWAYS*pant* be seme, if *pant*you'll do it like that every time." Naruto said, fighting for air. Sasuke nodded.

After a few moments of coming down from their sexual highs and fighting to stay awake, they maneuvered under the blankets and laid silently, until Naruto spoke. (*)

"I love you, baby." Naruto said, kissing moist skin, from where he was snuggled into Sasuke.

"I love you more." Sasuke said kissing Naruto's dampened crown.

"Night' love." Naruto said.

"Night'." Sasuke said, giving up trying to stay awake and letting sleep claim him along with his fair haired boyfriend.


TBC


(!) Hahaha!! I always do that! Hum nameless tunes! So random!
(#) Hahahah I don't know what it's called!
(*) He always breaks the silence!.

Well there you have it folks.....I hella wrote this in 2 days lmao!! *sorry* but you know me.....lazy. But everyday I didn't work on it, I had little like, morning dreams (because I had like mini dreams after I just woke up, laying in the bed) about Naruto & his plan.....& idk WHERE sucking someone off with frozen strawberries came from!!! Lmao!!! I don't even know if that feels good!!?? Hahahha!!! Well this is FanFiction! we'll just pretend it does : ) I think this is one of the hottest ANYTHINGS I've ever written in my whole life *pats self on the back* Thanks for reading!! Since I stayed up all late writing this, now you have to review and vote so I'll do it again….the more reviews & votes…the more chapters and sex! : )
JA!
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