Mr. Right

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Kurai Kisu- " You my friend have some weird ass coupling in here (I do, don't I?) but IT WORKS I can see it I am so happy you decided to update this I am curious to see what Sai's reaction to his possible? Update soon and your others stories as well!(Woo!)

Crimson Vixen- " You know...*dramatic pause* I'm full of ideas *evil smirk* Loved this chapter, can't wait for more.(I need your help with STAY Read it over and tell me what you can come up with for that stupid fic.)

ChrissyCrimson - " I like Kiba, Haku AND Gaara as supporting characters so i think they would work out well in a threesome :D (Yay!! Success!)
BUT i seriously hope you keep the threesome thing with them and not Sasuke and Naruto...call me an old fashion
prude but i only like Sasuke with Naruto. (Girll, you and me both….but I like the flirty Naruto and Kiba, just noything serious.) They seem happy and content with just themselves anyways...ya know?
I was so proud that Sasuke turned down his stalking ex just to stay true to his Naruto :D

Anywho...i am also eagerly awaiting Sai's reaction...hope he can keep Suigetsu satisfied so he leaves poor Sasuke alone (Weee'lll seee)
Yay for Sai! I was so happy you brought him more into this story...you rock! (I know it!)

I know i'm not very helpful review wise (Yes you are! A great deal in fact!) :( i'm sorry...i guess this is why i stopped trying to write a story of my own lol. (No you need to finish it damnit I was reading that!!!)

Trigger Happy Bitch- " 'No, I just like to dig myself out of the grave every now and then and come to rape you, just for the hell of it' HAHAHAHAHAHA! (Hahahah!!!) That was funny. (Thanks!)
Who was neji wit again?(Duhh Shikamaru!!! Chapter1!!!) Sorry my brain turned to mush after skool started.
Please update soon.(I did….well not soon….but I updated!)
Why do u hate Gaara in fics? (I don't know, many people portray him to be this blood lusting lunatic, so I kinda got turned off from him after the like 50ieth fic….so now, I'm putting a sexy seductive, playful twist on him.)
I loved this chappie."(You'll like this one better.)

Im The Dobe- " Mou. Threesome with the beautiful aqua colored eyes...ne? Good choice. (Hehe) No! Gaara is great when it comes to fics. (Ehhh so/so) Eventually though, but is Sai gonna get with Suigetsu or....*raises eyes-brows suggestively* Will their be a foursome with Sasuke and Naruto? (NOOOO! Sasuke & Naruto are their own coup[le, there will be NO additions to that reltionship) That'll be so cool!! Now...why was Kisame in the fic again? (Suigetsu's right hand man) That threw me off completely...was he only a distraction in order for Suigetsu to spend some alone time with Sasuke-ku?(Yes) Well it worked. Good job on this story. (Thanks!) And what kind of suggestion are you clearly looking for? (None anymore, I just needed some time to think) Well update soon!! =]

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“Speech”
‘Thoughts’
“Speech/Thoughts or Whisper”
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Sasuke woke up, feeling Naruto's arm wrapped around his shoulder and his cheek nudging his own cheek, mumbling and chanting 'wake up.' in Japanese. Sasuke lifted his hand to pet the yellow hair lovingly. Sasuke could feel the bright smile against his cheek.

"G' morning babe." Naruto said, turning his head to place a kiss on Sasuke's lips.

"Morning." Sasuke replied.

Naruto shifted to lay his head on Sasuke's chest, with one arm thrown over Sasuke's lithe body and his other under his cheek.

"So what time are Sai and the others, coming?" Sasuke asked, still petting the angelic hair.

"They're already here." Naruto said, pulling his body away from Sasuke's. "Kiba called while you were sleep and I didn't want to wake you…..you looked so beautiful. And I know you had a rough night. But you were just laying there…..all pretty-like. I kind of wanted to rape you." Naruto said and Sasuke tensed. Naruto felt this and furrowed his brows in confusion. "What-oh." Naruto realized, catching himself and acknowledging solemnly. "Do you want to talk about it?" Naruto asked.

"Not really, but I don't want to leave you in the dark." Sasuke sighed.

Naruto nodded.

"I had a dream that I was asleep and I had a nightmare in my dream too, then I woke up in bed by myself all sweaty and sticky-" Naruto moaned and Sasuke shook his head, rolling his eyes, but continued."-and I remembered that you went to go get some pictures developed, so I tried to get out of bed to go and take a shower-" Naruto moaned again, licking his lips, then biting his bottom lip and closing his eyes, shaking his head from side-to-side. This time Sasuke threw a playful punch to Naruto's left pectoral.

"Ahh!" Naruto yelped, bringing his hand up to soothe his chest jokingly.

"Anyway. I wanted to go take a shower." Sasuke paused to see if Naruto would make another noise to interrupt him. When there was none, he continued. "But my limbs were tied to the bed. When I was struggling to free myself, Suigetsu came out of nowhere and told me not to, because it made me more enticing."

Although Naruto was steaming at the fact that it was Suigetsu, he joked. "Well, I bet he was right. You laying there, trying to free yourself from shackles on the bed, naked. Mmmmm, if it's not to traumatizing, we have to try that some time." Naruto said, seriously, but in a joking tone.

"Fine." Sasuke agreed, but continued. "After he said that, he got on the bed with me and told me he loved me and you didn't. What nerve, huh?" Sasuke asked and Naruto nodded. "Anyway. While hen was telling me that, I was just sitting there like hurry it up. Then he asked me if I could give him one more chance. When I told him no, he said he'd find someone else. I was relieved, but then he said: 'Not till I make love to you one more time.' I was like No, but he kept going, then I asked him why he was doing this, and of course: 'Because I love you.'" Sasuke said and Naruto cut in.

"Oh yeah, let me rape you because I'm deeply in love with you." Naruto said in a mocking tone.

Sasuke chuckled. "Then he said: 'I'm not the only one who loves you.' Then Itachi…..Itachi came around the corner……and I started to cry. I cried because I miss him Naruto." Sasuke said, his eyes glassing up. Naruto grabbed Sasuke's hands in his, encouraging him to finish. "Itachi came over and then tried to…..you know. And Suigetsu was feeling all over Itachi's body."

Naruto discreetly grabbed a pillow and placed it over his crossed legs.

"Then Itachi started to suck on my neck and I told him to stop and he asked why and I said your name but he still…and I was unprepared." Sasuke said, looking down ant his crossed pale legs.

"Ahh, daijobu, akachan. There's nothing to worry about. I'm glad you told me. Sorry for making that rape comment too." Naruto shifted the pillow over his legs.

"I'm over it. Let's fuck." Sasuke suggested and Naruto shot off the bed, yanking his boxers off in record time. Sasuke could see that Naruto was already hard and raised a brow.

"What?! You seemed sexy tied up in your dream, with someone who looks exactly like you, sucking on your neck." Naruto admitted, grabbing Sasuke's wrist, pulling him off the bed. When Sasuke was standing, Naruto kneeled in front of Sasuke, then looked up into the face of the mildly blushing raven for answers.

"I-I was just turned on because you were turned on." Sasuke tried to defend.

"Mmm-Hmm." Naruto dismissed, playfully, starting to pull Sasuke's boxers down.

Naruto leaned forward, nipping and sucking on the flesh right above where he let the waistband of the boxers stop, right at the junction of his legs and Sasuke moaned.

"Naruto, get like Nike and just do it." Sasuke commanded and Naruto chuckled.

"You're getting witty and not sarcastic. I'm rubbing off on you."

"How about you rub the inside of your mouth on my cock." Sasuke suggested, going under in lust.

Naruto moaned. "Well we know who's bottoming today." Naruto chuckled again, reaching behind Sasuke to pick up the small bottle of lube on the nightstand, opening it and applying some on his fingers. He positioned himself back in front of Sasuke, pulling Sasuke's boxers down completely. Naruto grabbed the base of Sasuke's redden cock, pointing it right in the direction it was going to go, in his mouth. Naruto licked the underside, then pulling back and wrapping his lips around Sasuke's hard-as-iron- erection, looking up at Sasuke seductively, who was looking down at him, completely submerged in lust.

"Ohhh fuck. Shit, suck it Naruto." Sasuke said, placing his hand on the back of Naruto's head.

Naruto always loved the fact that Sasuke would be so proper and would barely use any slang when he spoke in general, but when it came to sex, his vocabulary shrank considerably.

"Yess-Oh!" Sasuke vocalized his pleasure and Naruto moaned, still bobbing his head slowly.

Sasuke mildly rocked his hips into Naruto's hot mouth, wanting nothing more than to fuck his mouth like a madden dog, but not wanting to choke him. Well there was another hole on Naruto, that he wouldn't have to worry about all that.

Naruto was already one step ahead of him and reached one hand behind him and began to prepare himself for an emotional fucking. When Sasuke was either mad, stressed or confused, Naruto would bottom and Take the rough fucking Sasuke was always ready to deliver. Sasuke could be quite violent. But this was Naruto we're talking about here. Rough, was his middle name.

Sasuke pulled Naruto's head back roughly and turned to sit on the edge of the front of the bed. Naruto moaned, pumping his fingers in and out of his loosening hole, watching Sasuke anxiously. Sasuke looked at him sternly and motioned him to get up and come here, while he watched Sasuke squeeze out some lube onto his hands and slather it over his length. Naruto complied, moaning and pulling his fingers out, standing before the intolerant Uchiha.

"Sit." Sasuke said. Naruto knew he didn't mean to sit on the floor or sit on the bed. He knew exactly where Sasuke wanted him to sit. He lifted one foot to put on the bed beside Sasuke's thigh, when he felt a harsh shove to the side of his knee. Naruto was confused, and wondered why Sasuke shoved his leg away, then he finally got the picture. He turned around facing……..the mirror.

"Damnit, I love you." Naruto said, bracing his hands on Sasuke's thighs behind him and lowering his body, while Sasuke guided his slick hard cock to Naruto's puckered entrance.

"Mmm." Naruto moaned as he slid down on Sasuke's iron rod, feeling it jump inside him with each inch he impaled himself. Naruto leaned forward, gripping Sasuke's pale knees, grinding his hips around in small circles, trying to locate his prostate with the blunt, leaking head of Sasuke's cock.

Sasuke gripped a handful of golden hair in his fist and yanked Naruto's head back back, speaking into his ear.

"You move, when I tell you to move." Sasuke said in a husky tone unwavering, while biting Naruto's shoulder, looking at Naruto's lust-lost eyes through their reflection and letting go of his painful grip in Naruto's heir to trail his hands around from the back of Naruto's body to the front. He glided his hands just beneath each side of Naruto's ribs to his abdomen, each hand mirroring the other, until they went in opposite directions. One hand went up, while the other dipped low, teasing, trailing around Naruto's need.

"P-please-Ahh!" Naruto felt a sharp pain in his shoulder.

"A-a-ahhh." Sasuke sing-songed, looking at him devilishly, through the drape of his black bangs in the mirror. Damn he was just about the only person he knew that could make that simple warning so god-damned sexy!

Sasuke kept teasing below, as he did the same up top. His other hand that went up, was now circling lightly around Naruto's extremely perky nipples.

"Mmmm!" Naruto whined.

"Move." Sasuke said and Naruto wasted negative two seconds to lift himself and drop down quickly.

"Ahh-oohh yes!" Naruto moaned, throwing his head back with a smile laced with lust.

Sasuke gripped Naruto's waist, lifting and dropping him, while he pushed up into him harshly.

"I feel like talking dirty." Sasuke said, while gripping Naruto tighter.

"Mmm! Please!" Naruto begged.

"You'd like that huh, you slut."

Naruto nodded, while rolling his hips down on Sasuke's swollen manhood.

"Fuck yourself, I'm done doing the work." Sasuke said, lying back on the bed.

Naruto stopped, and looked at Sasuke laid out behind him in the mirror……… Whatever. Naruto brought his legs up to put on either side of Sasuke's thighs, so that his knees and toes were digging into the bed and his shins were pressed flush against the mattress. He fisted his own cock and started to bounce his body on Sasuke's cock, pumping it in and out of his constricting hole.

"Nnnnn." Naruto groaned.

Sasuke tried to be a hard-ass and not moan or show any signs of 'feeling', but Naruto felt so good on him and he looked like such a cock slut, fucking himself like that. Sasuke inevitably let out a pathetic whimper and began to touch himself, gliding his hands up to his two hard nipples.

"Ahhh! *hiss* Fuck!" Sasuke yelled.

"I'm so close!" Naruto gritted out between clenched teeth.

"Me too." Sasuke replied.

Naruto bounced on Sasuke more violently, trying to bring him and his lover, over the edge of completeness. Both of their breaths became heavy and loud.

"Work it. work it." Sasuke chanted lowly.

With Naruto bouncing wildly and Sasuke thrusting his hips up, they were cumming in no time.

Naruto came into his own hand, while his insides clamped down on Sasuke's cock, squeezing his hot, milky, seed from him and deep into his lover.

"Ahhhh SHIT!" Naruto yelled, leaning forward and bracing himself on Sasuke's knees.

"That, was good sex." Sasuke said, taking a deep breath and letting it out.

"Yeah." Naruto said, lifting himself up off Sasuke, successfully causing Sasuke's flaccid penis to slip from his ass. Naruto tured around, still strattling Sasuke's waist and leaning down for a post-sex kiss.

"Mmmm. That was sooo good." Naruto said, licking Sasuke's lips. "I could fuck you all day." Naruto said seductively.

"Technically, I fucked you." Sasuke said matter-of-factly.

Naruto sighed, getting up from off Sasuke and the bed completely. "You just had to go and ruin the moment, didn't you? Allllways gotta be right, gotta be on top…..sheesh!" Naruto grabbed some clothes and headed to the bathroom.

"Damn right." Sasuke said under his breath, but Naruto heard.

"Is that so?" Naruto asked in a stern challenging tone and Sasuke winced. "We'll see about that." Naruto said, walking into the bathroom.

"Well, we'd love do give you an'interview', but it seems as though we have an extra party." Kiba said, looking sourly, over at the moping Sai. "Plus we came here to meet some friends, so I don't think we'll have time." He added.

"Well, my hours are flexible and I'm going to be in town for a while, so-" He dug in his pocket for a pen and a receipt he had stuffed in there and jotted down his number."-just give me a call and we'll reschedule." Gaara said in his low natural bedroom voice.

Kiba took the offered piece of paper and looked at Gaara expectantly. Gaara looked back at him, wondering if he forgot anything.

"What?" Gaara asked.

"Well goodbye kisses aren't all that explicit, sooo." Kiba looked around, acting all shy.

Gaara chuckled and stepped back in front of Kiba, looking over at Haku and grabbed Kiba's face, smashing their lips together in a searing hot kiss. To Kiba, it was still a little unsettling that Haku was willing to have another person added to their relationship. He idly wondered if Haku would be jealous at some point. Kiba wanted to prove to Haku that he didn't want another person to be with them. Although Gaara was an extremely attractive young man, Kiba didn't feel that if they had another member, that he'd get all the love he wanted from Haku and he wouldn't be able to love two people and everything be alright. There was bound to be some sort of controversy in this love triangle.

Gaara licked Kiba's lips and pulled away, turning to Haku. Damn, that kid's got some talent. Haku smirked as Gaara stepped toward him. Garra gave Haku the same bone melting kiss, causing Haku to kick his kissing skillsup a notch. Haku fought for dominance, trying to keep it, but Gaara's toung out weighed him and out danced him. Haku was a little disappointed, but it was a pretty hot kiss, so he didn't care. They too pulled away and they said their see-you-later's turning and walking opposite directions.

"Damn! How lucky are we?!" Kiba asked excitedly when they got a good hundred yards from where they were once standing. "Like five minutes after you telling me what you told me, this fuckin' hot ass guy just comes out of nowhere and is game with your….'prob-lem'" Kiba put the first two fingers up from each of his hands making the typical 'quote, unquote' gestures. Haku rolled his eyes.

"C'mon, we have to go meet Sasuke and Naruto." Haku changed the subject.

"Yeah." Kiba looked up and searched the area. "SAI! GET YOUR SORRY ASS OVER HERE! WE'RE LEAVIN'!"

Sai was sat at a table, eating a rather large ice-cream sundae with a sulking pout. He got up and followed the gay couple, sundae in-hand.


Kiba, Haku and Sai arrived at the hotel Sasuke and Naruto were at in no time and booked two hotel rooms. There was no way Sai was ruining the night time.

"Call Naruto." Haku said.

"I am, I am! Gahh! What, do you think I'm stupid? Do you think I'd just be like 'Hey, let's buy a hotel, then sit here and waste our lives waiting for Sasuke and Naruto to just come down here and find us!'" Kiba said in a funny voice.

"Quit being stupid and just call." Haku said.

Kiba stepped in front of Haku with a worried face.

"What's wrong?" Kiba asked. "Is everything alright?" Kiba reached out to pull Haku into a loving embrace.

Haku sighed.

"Nothing's wrong." Haku said, laying his head on Kiba's shoulder exhaustedly. "I'm just tired."

Kiba pulled back and kissed Haku on the bridge of his nose.

"Alright babe, we can call them later, let's go up to our room." Kiba comforted.


They made it to their well furnished hotel room and flopped back on the bed tiredly. As they laid there, Kiba wondered, now that they were open to more members, would Haku be mad if he flirted?......of course he would! What an absurd question!.....But the relationship he had with Naruto……what about that, surly he wouldn't get all worked up about it. They liked to kiss and play around. Would Haku get mad over that?......he shouldn't…..would he?

"Hey, Haku?"

"Hm?"

"Y'know how me and Naruto like to joke around and kiss each other and I'dunno like have sex…."

Haku shot up.

"I thought you guys were just joking!" Haku yelled.

Kiba chuckled. "I am. But we like to play around like that….do you mind?" Kiba asked.

Haku calmed down and laid back, chuckling.

"Of course not, Kiba. You two are best friends. You can kiss him and stuff, I think it's cute. It shows how much you guys trust each other." Haku said and Kiba scrunched up his face. What a weirdo, hippie. He wasn’t thinking like that, but whatever. "Plus, I mean I just asked if we could have another person added to our relationship, I would have some nerve if I objected."

Kiba nodded. Yeah, that would be a little selfish.

"……You think it's cute?" Kiba asked amused.

"No, no, no…..let me rephrase that. I think it's hot. Two best friends making out with no strings attached? Hot." Kiba nodded in agreement once more. "And I don't have anything to worry about because both of you have boyfriends. Kiba smiled.

"We sure do! And if Sai wasn't around, I'd have two!" Kiba chuckled. "But I love Naruto. I really do. I mean…..if I didn't have him……I'd be nobody. You probably wouldn't have even wanted me."

"Nonsense! I would!" Kiba interlaced their fingers and squeezed. "Yeah though, Naruto's a pretty cool guy……Speaking of the little devil, give 'em a call. I'm not all that tired.

"Kay." Kiba answered, digging in his pocket and pulling out his cell.

Sasuke and Naruto were laid out on the bed beside each other, but facing opposite directions. Sasuke's head was at Naruto's feet and visa versa. Naruto lay contently with the leg closest to Sasuke, flung over his abdomen as Sasuke stroked it absently.

"Your leg is a little heavy on my stomach, dobe." Sasuke said offhandedly.

"So what, deal."

"Hn."

"Yeah………we're so bored." Naruto confirmed. "We can't even fight right."

"Mm-hmm."

Naruto turned his head to look out the window. Just beyond, was a bright San Diego day wasting away and waiting for them to go out and enjoy it.

"So, what are we gonna do when Kiba and them get here?" Naruto asked.

"Well, tonight…….I don't know, we could go to dinn-….!!!" Sasuke shot up with Naruto's leg now lazily wrapped round his torso. Naruto looked up at him funny, while he voiced his excitement. "Did I tell you that Suigetsu would stop stalking me if he found someone else that looked like me and had a better attitude?" Sasuke asked.

"Yeah, something like that." Naruto answered.

"Okay, so Sai……he looks almost exactly like me right? And has a more……gay cheery attitude right?"

"Right…….RIGHT!" Naruto also sat up. "You're a genius!!" Naruto yelled. "How could I forget about him?!"

They each met halfway on an excited kiss, tongues and all. Naruto was pushing Sasuke back and straddling him, when his cell phone went off.

Naruto looked at Sasuke.

"We cuttin' off the phones?" Naruto asked joking, but with a serious face.

"Yep." Sasuke answered.

Naruto leaned over and grabbed his phone.

"Yo, yo,yo!"

"Loser! Which room is yours?" Kiba asked.

"802." Naruto said.

"Kay, ours is 649. Who's goin' where and what are we doin' n'night?"

"Where's Sai?" Naruto asked, drawing out little circles out on Sasuke's chest as he still sat, on his abdomen.

"Oh yeah, his room's faaaaaar away from ours." Naruto could hear Haku laughing in the background. "He's in room 606."

"Okay, so here's what's goin down…….No, come up to our room, kay? Don't tell Sai."

"Hahaha alright double-o zero. We won't. Later." Kiba and Naruto hung up. Naruto shifted, so that his and Sasuke's members were lined and laid his head in the crook of Sasuke's neck. Naruto loved the way Sasuke smelled. He absently wondered if this is how love smelled like…..like Sasuke.

"So what's the plan?" Naruto asked, pulling back and sitting back up on Sasuke.

"I'll tell you all at the same time." Sasuke dismissed. "Let's make-out until they get here." Sasuke suggested.

*knock* knock*BANG*

Sasuke and Naruto could here a muffled: "Kiba!"

Naruto hopped up off of Sasuke and ran around the many corners to open the door. When he did, he was greeted with a tired looking Haku and a grinning hyper Kiba.

"What the fuck did you guys do? Race up here?!" Naruto asked as he stepped back to let the other two in.

"NARUTOOO!" Kiba yelled as he glomped said boy to the floor, leaning down quickly and kissing him on the lips. "Let's fuck now!" Kiba rocked his hips over Naruto's crotch, as he reached down to the hem of Naruto's shirt, ready to lift it, but tanned hands stopped him.

"Whoa, whoa whoa!" Kiba halted. "I said, when I get back we'd fuck until the sun came up. Not back yet, so no cock for you." Naruto pushed Kiba off of him.

"Awww!" Kiba whined.

Naruto stood. "Hey Haku." Naruto greeted.

"Hey Naruto."

Naruto turned and lead the two teens into the room where Sasuke laid sprawled out on the bed -DECAPITATED IN A POOL OF HIS OWN BLOOD!! (Nahh I'm just jokin'!)-

"Have a seat." Naruto formally offered, pulling up two chairs by the side of the bed.

"Hey Sasuke." Kiba and Haku greeted.

"Hey Kiba, Haku."

"Alright so what's so important that we had to sneak up here…..well not really, but you know what I mean."

"Alright, so here's the down-low." Sasuke said, sitting up and leaning forward, ready to start a detailed explanation for his plan.


TBC

YAYY!!!! I wrote this in two days guys!!! Two days!!!! YAY!!! I'm starting to like this fic again so expect quicker chapters YAAA!!!! Please review this time guys!! I didn't get many last time and a little part of me died inside….:' ( Oh! & PLEASE VOTE TOO!!! THOSE COUNT!! THANKS FOR READING!!!

JA!
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