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Category:
Naruto › General
Rating:
Adult +
Chapters:
3
Views:
1,321
Reviews:
14
Recommended:
0
Currently Reading:
0
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I do not own Naruto, nor any of the characters from it. I do not make any money from the writing of this story.
The Shunning Kiss
A/N: Well my first chappy didn’t get as bad reviews as I thought and the rating wasn’t what I expected either so if the ratings don’t get better I might have to discontinue cuz it would jus be a lost cause (not bribing you to give me better ratings or anything its just that it’d be better that way)… but this chappy may be a lil better (hopefully at least I tried to make it better). Well neways if you have any ideas on how I could possibly make it better pls jus email me at chobits_chi5@hotmail.com. O and thank you all that made this chapter possible. Hope you enjoy this next one and sry bout all my grammatical errors (as you can tell English is NOT my major I simply like to write). O and if you don’t get the title you’ll get it once u read chapter 3 ^^.
~CHAPTER TWO: The Shunning kiss~
“Ok, Sasuke what did you want to tell me?” Naruto took a seat on a nearby bench and motioned Sasuke over. Sasuke’s legs were shaky and he felt like he could collapse at any moment. Of course Naruto didn’t notice.
“Well…” Sasuke could feel his little speech for this moment start to fade and his mind drifting. “Uhh… Naruto…. Have you…. Ever…”
“SASUKE- KUUUN!!” All eyes turned there attention to an amazingly pretty looking Sakura who approached the two taking long strides as if anxious.
“OI, Sakura- Chan.” Naruto waved.
“OI, Naruto… So Sasuke Kun why are you all shaky like?” Sakura sat down and pointed towards his legs were shaking a bit then they stopped.
“It’s nothing, I just feel a little weird today… I think it’s because I didn’t get a lot of sleep.” Sasuke said starting to walk off realizing the moment was ruined.
‘Shit, shit… I can’t believe I missed my chance…’ he thought to himself as he reluctantly listened to Sakura’s daily nonsense. *sigh*
“What’s wrong Sasuke kun?” Sakura tried to catch up to Sasuke who was walking abnormally fast.
“Look Sakura! When will you get the message that I DON’T LIKE YOU?” Sakura froze, her face beginning to turn pale and tears began to gather at her eyes.
“I…I guess… I’ll leave you alone then Sasuke- kun…” Sakura said practically whispering, tears roaming freely over her cheeks.
“I’m sorry Sakura…. But it just won’t happen. I don’t want to hurt you, but it just won’t and will never happen.” Sasuke looked intently into her eyes that were clouded with tears and despair.
“How do you know it will never happen?” Sakura questioned hands trying so hard to wipe away her tears, but only made it worse.
“Because… because.”
“Because What! Sasuke tell me please. Tell me why, I gave everything I had and you didn’t even pay attention to me. I tried hard to impress you and you didn’t even take a second glance. Still even now I bet you aren’t listening! How could you be so heartless!!!” Sakura ran off.
“Oi, Sakura Chan where are you going? I just caught… *gasp*” Naruto ran over to Sasuke and grabbed him by the collar and held his fist up ready to pound him. “SASUKE!!! WHAT DID YOU DO TO HER!?” There faces were so close to each other, there eyes met one pair filled with ferocity and the other filled with regret. Sasuke was speechless his mind blanked out, all his anger turned into regret and maybe even despair. “SASUKE! WHAT DID YOU DO!?” Sasuke pushed Naruto off him and got up.
“I told her to go away…” Sasuke said his voice faint.
“No! She would never cry like that if you simply told her to go away. Now tell me what you did.” Naruto got up close to him there noses almost touching. Sasuke just stared at Naruto his eyes growing softer and softer.
“Sasuke… what’s wrong with you. Speak, tell me what you did to her or I’ll…” Naruto was cut off; Sasuke had pressed his lips on his, and with burning lust grabbed Naruto closer. With his tongue Sasuke begged for entrancnd wnd was granted his wish.
‘What’s going on!!?... What am I doing, no what is Sasuke doing!?... Why won’t my body push him off, or punch him or anything… WHY!?’ The kiss was broken when Sasuke suddenly disappeared, Naruto just stood there his eyes closed and his lips open as if he was still kissing him.
‘What the hell was that… why didn’t I react, why didn’t I tackle him or push him off, WHY, WHY, WHY!?’ Naruto brought his hands up to his ears and covered them as he fell to his knees and tried to put together the pieces. He shut his eyes tight and tried hard not to think about what had just happened, but his body seemed to have permanently malfunctioned from that one kiss.
“Aye, baka… Naruto what are you doing? Naruto? Naruuuutoooo? Get up baka! What are you doing there on the ground?” Ino kicked him softly to grab his attention.
“Huh? Oh sorry Ino… I just… umm.”
“Oh, save it, I just wanted to make sure you didn’t die or something, not like I care though.” Naruto watched Ino walk off, and saw that the sun was startin fal fall. So Naruto walked slowly towards his apartment, still trying to keep the ‘kiss’ out of his mind.
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A/N: Well hope this chappy will satisfy you, and quite honestly it didn’t turn out how I wanted it… oh and sorry if you thought it was a lil corny with the whole Sakura thing… but if Sasuke wanted Naruto, I thought that he would HAVE to stop Sakura from finding out, so I figured that was the only way. Well R&R pls hope you enjoyed and maybe if I have time I can bring another chappy out soon. O and thank you again for making this chapter possible.
~this fic has been brought to you by Safeway, giving our best and Maybeline “Maybe she’s born with it… MAYBE ITS MAYBELINE.” O and the author is the newbie Ichiban.
~CHAPTER TWO: The Shunning kiss~
“Ok, Sasuke what did you want to tell me?” Naruto took a seat on a nearby bench and motioned Sasuke over. Sasuke’s legs were shaky and he felt like he could collapse at any moment. Of course Naruto didn’t notice.
“Well…” Sasuke could feel his little speech for this moment start to fade and his mind drifting. “Uhh… Naruto…. Have you…. Ever…”
“SASUKE- KUUUN!!” All eyes turned there attention to an amazingly pretty looking Sakura who approached the two taking long strides as if anxious.
“OI, Sakura- Chan.” Naruto waved.
“OI, Naruto… So Sasuke Kun why are you all shaky like?” Sakura sat down and pointed towards his legs were shaking a bit then they stopped.
“It’s nothing, I just feel a little weird today… I think it’s because I didn’t get a lot of sleep.” Sasuke said starting to walk off realizing the moment was ruined.
‘Shit, shit… I can’t believe I missed my chance…’ he thought to himself as he reluctantly listened to Sakura’s daily nonsense. *sigh*
“What’s wrong Sasuke kun?” Sakura tried to catch up to Sasuke who was walking abnormally fast.
“Look Sakura! When will you get the message that I DON’T LIKE YOU?” Sakura froze, her face beginning to turn pale and tears began to gather at her eyes.
“I…I guess… I’ll leave you alone then Sasuke- kun…” Sakura said practically whispering, tears roaming freely over her cheeks.
“I’m sorry Sakura…. But it just won’t happen. I don’t want to hurt you, but it just won’t and will never happen.” Sasuke looked intently into her eyes that were clouded with tears and despair.
“How do you know it will never happen?” Sakura questioned hands trying so hard to wipe away her tears, but only made it worse.
“Because… because.”
“Because What! Sasuke tell me please. Tell me why, I gave everything I had and you didn’t even pay attention to me. I tried hard to impress you and you didn’t even take a second glance. Still even now I bet you aren’t listening! How could you be so heartless!!!” Sakura ran off.
“Oi, Sakura Chan where are you going? I just caught… *gasp*” Naruto ran over to Sasuke and grabbed him by the collar and held his fist up ready to pound him. “SASUKE!!! WHAT DID YOU DO TO HER!?” There faces were so close to each other, there eyes met one pair filled with ferocity and the other filled with regret. Sasuke was speechless his mind blanked out, all his anger turned into regret and maybe even despair. “SASUKE! WHAT DID YOU DO!?” Sasuke pushed Naruto off him and got up.
“I told her to go away…” Sasuke said his voice faint.
“No! She would never cry like that if you simply told her to go away. Now tell me what you did.” Naruto got up close to him there noses almost touching. Sasuke just stared at Naruto his eyes growing softer and softer.
“Sasuke… what’s wrong with you. Speak, tell me what you did to her or I’ll…” Naruto was cut off; Sasuke had pressed his lips on his, and with burning lust grabbed Naruto closer. With his tongue Sasuke begged for entrancnd wnd was granted his wish.
‘What’s going on!!?... What am I doing, no what is Sasuke doing!?... Why won’t my body push him off, or punch him or anything… WHY!?’ The kiss was broken when Sasuke suddenly disappeared, Naruto just stood there his eyes closed and his lips open as if he was still kissing him.
‘What the hell was that… why didn’t I react, why didn’t I tackle him or push him off, WHY, WHY, WHY!?’ Naruto brought his hands up to his ears and covered them as he fell to his knees and tried to put together the pieces. He shut his eyes tight and tried hard not to think about what had just happened, but his body seemed to have permanently malfunctioned from that one kiss.
“Aye, baka… Naruto what are you doing? Naruto? Naruuuutoooo? Get up baka! What are you doing there on the ground?” Ino kicked him softly to grab his attention.
“Huh? Oh sorry Ino… I just… umm.”
“Oh, save it, I just wanted to make sure you didn’t die or something, not like I care though.” Naruto watched Ino walk off, and saw that the sun was startin fal fall. So Naruto walked slowly towards his apartment, still trying to keep the ‘kiss’ out of his mind.
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A/N: Well hope this chappy will satisfy you, and quite honestly it didn’t turn out how I wanted it… oh and sorry if you thought it was a lil corny with the whole Sakura thing… but if Sasuke wanted Naruto, I thought that he would HAVE to stop Sakura from finding out, so I figured that was the only way. Well R&R pls hope you enjoyed and maybe if I have time I can bring another chappy out soon. O and thank you again for making this chapter possible.
~this fic has been brought to you by Safeway, giving our best and Maybeline “Maybe she’s born with it… MAYBE ITS MAYBELINE.” O and the author is the newbie Ichiban.