GOTCHA!

Just a couple scenes that were cut/altered from the original for the sake of the story being good.
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1.) Chase Scene

I really liked this alternate chase scene when Sasuke is trying to retrieve his shorts, but it has the logical flaw of Naruto not using his kage no bushin to free himself from the trap.......

Chasing Naruto was made extremely awkward and embarrassing by Sasuke's lack of shorts, but he followed the blond up into the trees and quickly caught up with him; Naruto dodged and leapt to the ground to head off in the opposite direction... then was running in 50 different directions as he split off into an uncountable number of kage no bushin, each laughing and waving a pair of shorts in the air.

Sasuke cursed and spent the next 15 most frustrating minutes of his life chasing them back and forth, popping half a dozen with kunai just in time for two dozen more to run past. He got a hold of a pair of shorts once and, of course, they vanished into a puff of clone-go-away-ness.

And the hard muscle slapping against his thighs at every crouching turn wasn't helping his concentration much, either. One of the clones flicked him as he darted past and Sasuke growled and dispatched it exceptionally violently. He continued hurling kunai at all the kage no bushin until his attention was suddenly attracted to a single clone that wasn't dashing about... in fact, it was sort of just standing against a tree, sort of wiggling a bit--

-- caught in a trap.

And it hadn't vanished in a puff of smoke.

2.) Obligatory Sakura Scene

...not really that obligatory after all! But since the story opened with her being lost, it seems important to resolve things by at least letting the reader know how she's doing. But, since this is Sakura and nobody gives a shit about the bitch, the scene was left out..........

For a moment, Sakura's head perked up in hope. She thought she heard Naruto's voice calling her name... but no. There was nothing now. She sighed and repositioned in the net so her shoulder wouldn't cramp. She had considered calling out for help, but quickly realized that attracting all the dangerous creatures of the forest to herself when she was helplessly trapped in a net in the air would not be wise. Fortunately, she hadn't seen a single creature in this area.

She wiggled some more, the net swinging and twisting wildly in the air as she tried to find a more comfortable position. It occurred to her that she didn't want the boys to see up her dress when they finally found her, so she positioned herself so she was sort of "sitting" on her shoulders with her legs up along the side of the net.

The position was oddly comfortable. And even more oddly... more than comfortable. Air tickled her beneath her dress and she gasped a little. She imagined it was Sasuke blowing softly between her legs... mmmm...

Sakura spent the rest of the time masturbating.

3.) Dark Itachi Scene

Because what is a Sasuke rape fic without some serious Uchiha angst?

Itachi glared coldly back at the frozen moon. The darkness of the night seemed to eminate from him. Silent and motionless as the breathless wind. Waiting, waiting, for his little brother to grow strong enough to give him the cruel, violent death he so loved to impart on others. To finally be the one underneath a twisted killer.


4.) Cage Rape

...because I know you want it. ;) I wouldn't change my ending for anything in the world, though, it was just too wicked! X] Although I would change it for Sasuke getting raped in a cage soooooooo... HERE IT IS!!!

So now, by popular demand (all, um, two of you plus a review for a different story that I thought was for this one,) little boys raping each other in a cage........

"Showoff," hissed Naruto, clutching Sasuke's unprotected crotch. "Look what you got us into!"

"Dead-last," returned Sasuke as he yanked down the blond's pants, "This wouldn't have happened if you weren't so clumsy!"

Sasuke wrestled Naruto down and wrenched off his pants with his feet while he grappled for a grip on Naruto's shirt. The blond hissed and bit at him, kneeing him painfully in the crotch a few times. He jabbed his knee hard into Naruto's thighs.

He had the orange jacket halfway off when Naruto twisted out of his grasp and into a crouching position with his hands firmly on Sasuke's shoulders. A sudden head-butt had Sasuke momentarily reeling.

Naruto pushed Sasuke against the bars and the containment jutsu shocked violently against he back. He jerked involuntarily, pulses of energy jolting through his muscles. His neck went slack and he moaned. His coordination was gone and he couldn't even think of trying to struggle against Naruto. The blonde continued to hold him against the bars, a look of sadistic fascination on his face. He didn't really see Naruto's face, though-- his eyes were squeezed shut and they tightened every time the energy surged. With every spasm, Sasuke let out a whimpering cry.

The bars didn't really hurt... but... it was so intense... he wanted to move away but somehow couldn't find the motivation within his body to do it. Sasuke gasped and whimpered. His jerking body connected and fell away with a warm firm surface that he wanted permanent contact with. Teeth and lips were teasing his trembling mouth. He felt a hand stroking him, felt Naruto grinning with power, but all the sensation was in his shoulders and back and even though his hips were jerking, he couldn't get off.

Suddenly the energy was gone and his back was against normal grassy ground. He panted and let out a long, soft groan, his muscles relaxing into rubbery fluid. He would have protested the nudging between his legs if he wasn't so incoherent.

He sort of lolled through the next series of thrusts that moved his body around like a limp doll, but tensed about the time that Naruto started reaching climax. When the blond was just getting lost in gut-clenching oblivion, Sasuke's hands shot out and tightened around his throat. Naruto choked, writhed in an amazing twisting spasm, and came hard inside him. He managed to knock Sasuke's hands back down, struggling to pin them as he leaned over his victim, coughing back his breath.

Naruto was panting and sweating all over Sasuke's face, and he grimaced back up at the blond oaf. Naruto had a triumphant grin on his face, and was looking at Sasuke like he was his bitch... BITCH!!!

Sasuke's hands shot out and Naruto was suddenly on the ground, the Uchiha growling and laughing on top of him. He tried to fight the dark-haired boy off, but Sasuke pinned his wrists and pressed his body down. Naruto struggled and snapped at Sasuke's face; he responded by licking the weaker boy's nose.

Naruto stubbornly held his thighs together, but Sasuke managed to pry himself between them without even relinquishing his hold on Naruto's wrists. It was hard to guide himself in, though, and when he let go of one of Naruto's arms to maneuver things, the kitsune scratched and pulled his hair. Sasuke slid himself in quickly, wincing as the fist tightened hard in his hair and the rim tightened hard around his cock. As soon as he was in, he smacked the blond's hand off his head and back down to the ground.

He kissed Naruto sloppily as he jerked his hips, not able to relieve his aching erection fast enough. He grunted and moaned unrestrainedly, losing concentration--

And was in cold air, completely fallen out, Naruto kneeing him in the stomach. He choked and struggled furiously. He needed to COME, damnit! Naruto laughed cruelly and arched his body to pin Sasuke's while leaving his unrelieved shaft untouched in the air.

Then it was touched very much-- by the cool, unmoving ground. Naruto was nearly suffocating him, he was pressing down on his back so hard. Then-- the damn stamina freak was back inside him.

The blond shifted and hauled Sasuke up so he could fuck him sitting up; the black-haired boy had to bend forward to keep his head from hitting the top of the cage. Sasuke tried to twist and claw at the boy behind him ineffectively. Naruto pulled him in closer and Sasuke started to lose balance-- he reflexively grabbed the bars, then shouted and yanked his arms back at the shock. Naruto almost tumbled backwards but then caught himself. He grabbed Sasuke's arms and held them tight against his body to keep him from throwing him off balance further. Sasuke let out some shout-like cries and struggled harder, which only seemed to excite Naruto more.

God damn it... no matter what Sasuke did to fight back, Naruto always seemed to get him in the end.

And it's kind of an... ABRUPT end, but I wanna sleep and dream of my little boys now.

5.) Discovery

We knew it had to happen sooner or later.....

"Of all the things in the forest I anticipated having to save you from, 'each other' was the last one I expected."

Sasuke froze. Naruto also would have if he wasn't two seconds from climaxing; he shoved off awareness of Kakashi's entrance long enough to jerk a few more thrusts and his sperm into Sasuke's ass. Then he looked up and became as motionless as his partner.

Kakashi continued undaunted. "Actually, let me rephrase that. The way you two go at it, 'each other' was pretty high on the list..."

The two continued to stare at him in stunned silence. Kakashi grinned at them and coughed. "So, would you like me to help you... out?"

The only response was a deeper reddening of their faces and an uncomfortable wiggle from Sasuke's ass.

He looked pointedly at the dark-haired boy. "You know, I found Sakura. She was looking for you... calling out your name..."

"KAKASHI-SENSEI!!" shrieked a voice from behind the trees. Sakura stepped out, looking utterly mortified. She had apparently been along with him when he found the boys.

Then Kakashi threw aside the cage and raped them all!!!! THE END!

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